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Love Halaat - 8th January 2009, 02:51 PM
ek ladke ko dekha maine
woh footpath pe so raha tha
bistar tha zamee.n uuska
woh aasmaa oodh raha tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine...........

dharti maa ki goud thi uuski
aasma.n bhi pura uuska tha
zamane main rehkar bhi
woh zamane se door tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine............

patloon uuska air-condition
shirt pahene ka uuska sapna tha
zism tha uuska kaala kajal jaisa
hath main ek tuta khilona tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine............

garmi me suraj se dushmani
shardi me hawa se bair tha
barshat me nachta moor jaisa
woh aapni masti me mast tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine.............

aag lagithi uuske pet main
khana dhundh raha tha
jobhi milta kisika feka huwa
woh uusi se kaam chalata tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine..............

aakhoon main kaam ki aas
kaleja uuska majboot tha
bas yahi thi roj ki halat uuski
woh aapni duniya man khush tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine...............

na uuskje paas tha koi
na kisi se woh door tha
musibato main laad raha tha aakela
shayad yahi uuska naseeb tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine...............

ek ladke ko dekha maine
woh footpath pe so raha tha
bistar tha zamee.n uuska
woh aasmaa oodh raha tha

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DOSTO KUCH TO REPLY KARO AACHA TO AACHA BURA TO BURA

AAPKE ABHIPRAY HI TO MUJE AAGE KAISE BADHNA YEH SIKHATE HAIN

AAP LOG HI TO MERE TEACHER HO AAP KE REPLY KE BINA NIHAR AADHOORA DOSTO

AAP KE DIL ME JO BHI AAYE ISSE PADHNE KE BAAD PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ MUJE KAHE

JAB AAPKE REPLY NAHI AATE MERI POST PAR TAB MUJE GHUTAN SI HONE LAGTI HAIN KI

KAHI MENE KUCH GALAT TO NAHI LIKHA YA KUCH GALAT TO NAHI KIYA .

HO SAKE TO PLZ MUJE REPLY DE

AAPKA DOST NIHAR

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12th January 2009, 12:46 PM
niharji...

all the lines are very touchy...

aap ne to rula diya...

Ghazal...

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12th January 2009, 02:46 PM
bahut accha likha hai aapne nihar jee.......ghareebi ke lapet me lakhon bache bas yuhi zindegi guzaar rahe hain,hamare desh me,per koi nahi sochta inke baare me itni gehraayi se,bahut accha laga aapka is topic per likhna...something , different to read ,

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very well written nihar keep it up
   
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12th January 2009, 07:46 PM
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niharji...

all the lines are very touchy...

aap ne to rula diya...

Ghazal...
shukriya dost reply karne ka

aur aapko aacha laga yeh jan kar muje bhi behad khushi hou hain

once again shukriya

aapko pehle kabhi dekha nahi shayad mene .

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bahut accha likha hai aapne nihar jee.......ghareebi ke lapet me lakhon bache bas yuhi zindegi guzaar rahe hain,hamare desh me,per koi nahi sochta inke baare me itni gehraayi se,bahut accha laga aapka is topic per likhna...something , different to read ,

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very well written nihar keep it up

thanks sapna ji

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13th January 2009, 11:25 AM
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shukriya dost reply karne ka

aur aapko aacha laga yeh jan kar muje bhi behad khushi hou hain

once again shukriya

aapko pehle kabhi dekha nahi shayad mene .
Nihar...

pahele kaise dekha hoga... abhi ek mahina bhi nahi huwa SDC ki member bane...

Fir mulakat hogi.. tab tak ke liye.....TC

Good Day...

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Nihar ji ,
ek alag ehesaas dekhne ko mila hume aapki is nagma main ....apne soch aur dil ki baat bakhubi bayaan kiye hai aapne ...humesha khus rahiye ...younhi padhne ka mouka deta rahiye

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ek alag ehesaas dekhne ko mila hume aapki is nagma main ....apne soch aur dil ki baat bakhubi bayaan kiye hai aapne ...humesha khus rahiye ...younhi padhne ka mouka deta rahiye

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ek ladke ko dekha maine
woh footpath pe so raha tha
bistar tha zamee.n uuska
woh aasmaa oodh raha tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine...........

dharti maa ki goud thi uuski
aasma.n bhi pura uuska tha
zamane main rehkar bhi
woh zamane se door tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine............

patloon uuska air-condition
shirt pahene ka uuska sapna tha
zism tha uuska kaala kajal jaisa
hath main ek tuta khilona tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine............

garmi me suraj se dushmani
shardi me hawa se bair tha
barshat me nachta moor jaisa
woh aapni masti me mast tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine.............

aag lagithi uuske pet main
khana dhundh raha tha
jobhi milta kisika feka huwa
woh uusi se kaam chalata tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine..............

aakhoon main kaam ki aas
kaleja uuska majboot tha
bas yahi thi roj ki halat uuski
woh aapni duniya man khush tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine...............

na uuskje paas tha koi
na kisi se woh door tha
musibato main laad raha tha aakela
shayad yahi uuska naseeb tha

ek ladke ko dekha maine...............

ek ladke ko dekha maine
woh footpath pe so raha tha
bistar tha zamee.n uuska
woh aasmaa oodh raha tha
superb, you makes me cry today

Hatts off to you my dear !

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superb, you makes me cry today

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pata nahi chal raha ki aapka shukriya kaise karu fir bhi
do labzo main keh raha hoon thank you

Hatts off to you my dear !

shukriya dost

keep writing


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