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Kis Kis ki KAHAANI likh daluN...??? -
6th January 2006, 01:49 AM
Aabad bazm ko..
Dil ki har hasrat dil ne keh dali... armanoN ki sej lagi andheroN se kali... kadam phir bhi badhte rahe... kabhi asmaN pe kabhi sehra pe chalte rahe... har umeed humne dil maiN dafan kar daali... khushi maiN haNshe roye to Manjil paali.. armanoN ki sej adherN se kaali... ¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾ Kehti hai kalam par kis kis ki kahaani likh daluN.. Khushaal bachpan, ya dard-e-jawani likh daluN.. Har koi jahaN maiN tanha hai bebas raahoN pe… Us jeete hue ki , us marte ki jubaani likh daluN… Un aankhoN ke khwab kisi aur ki nazar ho gaye… Khamoshi-e-sehra, ya hawayeN barfani likh daluN… SambhaluN kaise dardmandoN ko ladkhadane se… Beeti hui yadeN, ya bachi hui nishani likh daluN... Na koi humdard kisi ka, na koi kisi ka humsafar… Nakaab-e-jindgi, ya asal-e-jindgaani likh daalun… Kagzi kahawat rishte, do lafzoN ka “saccha_pyar”… Uski har bewafai, ya apni har kurbani likh daluN… Ki koi kahani likh daluN,dard-e-jawani likh daluN ¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾¾ Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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6th January 2006, 08:13 AM
Behadd umda Ghazal likh daali hai dost!!
Daad qabool farmao.. aur yunhi likhte raho Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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6th January 2006, 09:26 AM
achha likha hai bhaiya.. bahoot achhi gazal hai ye
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ghazal pe kuch baateN |
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ghazal pe kuch baateN -
6th January 2006, 09:36 AM
just finished giving a bit of unsolicited advice to prankajindia in response to his qaboolkar lo salaam mera...
khayal na karte hue aap bhi padhh li jiye un kalmaat ko....is liye ke technique par thoda uboor pa leN to aap ke andaaz-o-izhaar ka lutf aur badhh jayega khair andesh |
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6th January 2006, 09:58 AM
amazin...kunal bhaiya...kya likhte ho tum...uff
mind blowin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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6th January 2006, 10:07 AM
good 1 bro
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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6th January 2006, 11:34 AM
Kehti hai kalam par kis kis ki kahaani likh daluN..
Khushaal bachpan, ya dard-e-jawani likh daluN.. Har koi jahaN maiN tanha hai bebas raahoN pe… Us jeete hue ki , us marte ki jubaani likh daluN… Waaaah...khoosburat aagaz hai...! Un aankhoN ke khwab kisi aur ki nazar ho gaye… Khamoshi-e-sehra, ya hawayeN barfani likh daluN… SambhaluN kaise dardmandoN ko ladkhadane se… Beeti hui yadeN, ya bachi hui nishani likh daluN... Well said...! Na koi humdard kisi ka, na koi kisi ka humsafar… Nakaab-e-jindgi, ya asal-e-jindgaani likh daalun… Kagzi kahawat rishte, do lafzoN ka “saccha_pyar”… Uski har bewafai, ya apni har kurbani likh daluN… hmmmmmm...! Kunal, Ek bahut hi behatreen kalaam likhne par meri daad kubool karna... Kaafi asardaar laga tumhaara yeh kalaam...yun hi likhte raho... Do TC..! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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6th January 2006, 11:49 AM
Hi Kunal Aaj Tumhe Yahan Dekh Ke Bahut Acha Laga...tumhara kalaam Padha Asusual Bahut hI Umda Laga......yunhi likhte Rehna........
Chut.ta Jaata Hai Bachpan Kaise Sambhalun Tum Jo Aao Karib tumhe Sahara Main Banalun Na Lag Jaaye Daag, Sochti Rehti HUn Yahi Main Ye Kambakth Javani Ko Kahan Main Chupalun Nahi Deti Ijajaat Mujhe Mahobaat Ki Ye Duniya Chahti Hai Main Khudko Khudi Mein Dabalun |
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6th January 2006, 01:32 PM
WOWWW....
KUNAL BHAAI BAHUT HI KHUBSURAT GHAZAL LIKHI HAIN AAPNE HAMESHA KI TARAH. Kagzi kahawat rishte, do lafzoN ka “saccha_pyar”… Uski har bewafai, ya apni har kurbani likh daluN… marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare -Moen Ahsan Jazbi |
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Re: Kis Kis ki KAHAANI likh daluN...??? -
6th January 2006, 01:51 PM
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waise toh hamesha hi accha likhte ho.. har ek sher apne aap mein gazab ka hai...waqt ke saath tumhari likhai mein bahaut nikhaar agaya hai mashallah..yuhin likhte raho aur mehfil mein chaar chaand lagate raho..khuda tumhe khush aur aabaad rakkhe jaan. Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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6th January 2006, 05:58 PM
padh kar aapko laga ki main bhi apni zindgani likh dalun,
dil me maujood manjar main wo toofani likh dalun. ek baar phir guru alfaazon se loot liya hume.padh kar laga jaise koi mere hi jazbaat aur khayalat apne shabdon me pirota jaa raha hai.bas khud ki zindgani saamne ek kalaam ke roop me nazar aayi.aur hum ek baar fir se bas kayal ho ke reh gaye aapke.bas yunhi likhte rahiye bhaiya yahi darkhwast hai meri. aapka CHOTA ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th January 2006, 12:33 PM
is gazal mein bahut kucch chipa hai...
yu hin likhte raho... happy raho jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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8th January 2006, 01:02 AM
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Shukriya maan sammman ka stah dete rahiyega aap bhi Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th January 2006, 08:38 AM
mere kunal,
bahut achha likha hai. |
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8th January 2006, 02:05 PM
Na koi humdard kisi ka, na koi kisi ka humsafar…
Nakaab-e-jindgi, ya asal-e-jindgaani likh daalun… Kunaal bhaaii.. BehtariiN likha hai aap ne..Daad kabul kijiye... take care MayanK |
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8th January 2006, 11:49 PM
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Tum aayi bade bhai ko maan diya Tumhara apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: ghazal pe kuch baateN |
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Re: ghazal pe kuch baateN -
9th January 2006, 06:16 PM
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aapne meri kamiyoN ko parkha .. aur bataya mujhe mujhe khushi hai is baat ki .. koshish rahegi ki aage maiN aur sudhar karuNga... par kya karuN .. yuN bandishoN maiN bandh kar likhna mere liye mushkil sa hai .. han mera manna hai alfazoN ko sazaO par ek had tak .. ki uski masoomiyat mar na jayeN kahiN takniki janzeeroN maiN.. likho wo jo har dil azeez ho jaye ... meri baateN galat lagi hoN to muafi chahuNga... Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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aap ki shayari |
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aap ki shayari -
10th January 2006, 09:15 AM
tasleem janab
baja farmaya aap ne...maiN ma'zeratkhwaaN huN is liye ke maiN Urdu ghazal aur iske qawaid ki baat kar raha tha, aap ka murad shayad zabaaan-e-digar se tha...Urdu ghazal ki ek ravayat rahi hai jis pe farsi asaatzaa se le kar aaj ke daur ki shayari khaayam hai...aur inhiN qawaid ki paabandiyoN ke tehat hamare adab ke asaatzaa Wali se le kar, Meer, Sauda, Naasekh, Ghalib. Momin, Aatish, Daagh, Jigar, Faiz, Firaq aur Khumaar ne apna kamal-e-fan dikhaya...Ghazal, urdu-farsi adab ki ek sinf (form) hai, jis ka ek khaas form hai aur maiN uski baat kar raha tha...mujhe is baat ka qatai taur par andaaza nahiN tha ke aap Urdu ghazal ki baat nahiN kar rahe the . Mu'aaf farmaiye. khair andesh |
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10th January 2006, 06:48 PM
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Shukriya... tum aaye aur bade bhai ko maan diya TUmhara apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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10th January 2006, 06:50 PM
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tumhara bhai kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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10th January 2006, 06:52 PM
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khaak alfaazoN ko behatreen naam ka taaj dene ke liy ebohat boha shukriya.. asar to padhne wale ki nighaoN ki jaageer hai .. hum par nyochawar is daad ko teh dil se apnate hue ... shukriya ata farmata huN... aise hi saath rahiyega Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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10th January 2006, 06:54 PM
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tumhe mujhe padh ke accha laga hoga .. par tumhe dekh ke maiN to doguba ho gaya huN.. tumhara saath to taaqat sa lagta hai mujhe... yuN hi saath deti rehna ,... aur itne khoobsoorat alfazon ko mere naam karne ke liye shukriya Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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10th January 2006, 08:22 PM
Bahot khoob!
Bahut achha likha hai kunal. Keep writting and take care! |
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11th January 2006, 12:45 PM
Priy Kunal, ek arse baad tumhaari kisi post per aaya hooN...or sach kahooN to aakar niraasha nahi balki achraj hi huva hamesha ki taraah....ki tum itna pyaara keise likh paate ho.
Khush raho...yooNhi apna hunar dikhaate raho. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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13th January 2006, 03:39 PM
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mandeep tumhe ye acchi lagi mujhe accha laga aate rehna yuN hi ... Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Re: Kis Kis ki KAHAANI likh daluN...??? -
13th January 2006, 03:42 PM
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inayat hai rab ki jisne mujhe alfaaz aur use sunne wale dono diye ... tumhe ye kalaam accha laga shukragujaar hun.. aur waqt ke sath bayangi to acchi honi hi thi .. tum jaisoN ka sath jo hai... tumhara Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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13th January 2006, 03:44 PM
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Chote... tumhare dard maiN khud ko paata huN is liye wah wah karne chala aata huN... bohat accha laa tumhare alfazoN ko paakar... aur tumhe samajhta bhi huN acche se ... yahi kahunga sath dete rehna yun hi ... tumhara bhai Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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 chupan chuapi muJhe acchi nahi lagti.. baahar niklo jo chipe ho... Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Kis Kis ki KAHAANI likh daluN...??? -
13th January 2006, 04:03 PM
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Bahut khoob Kunal! Tumhari is rachna ne dil ki us kashmakash ko bayaan kiya hai, jo zindagi ki har bariki ko gaur se dekhti hai... aur phir dekhna chahti hai... Sach bataun, tumhein pada toh bahut baar par yeh rachna sabse alag lagi. Yun hi apne nagine yahan bikherte rehna ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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13th January 2006, 04:51 PM
kunal ji bhaut hi achha likha hai ,
kushhal bachpan likhu , dard e jawani likh dallon whwhwhwww reallly nice one shrdh 
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14th January 2006, 02:45 PM
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Shukriya Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th January 2006, 02:46 PM
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Shukriya aapka bhi ... aapki daad sar maathe... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th January 2006, 02:49 PM
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maine aapki kisi baat ko gair mudda nahi tehraya,, balki sukoon hi mila ki kayi adad shakhs maujood hai jo chahte hai .. ki lafzoN ka fan rakhne wale ise sajaane ka fan bhi rakheN.. muafi maaNg ke sharminda na kare .. umra ke lihaz se bhi ohde ke hisaab se bhi .. aur ek noseekhiye ke liye guru ke hisaab se bhi ... khuda aapko khushi bakshe ... duago Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th January 2006, 02:50 PM
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shukriya darshan dene ke liye... aur kahaN ho dikhayi hi nahi deti Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th January 2006, 02:52 PM
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maiN bhi sahi kahuN to bohat lambe arse se aapka intzaar kar raha tha apne aashiyane maiN.. kayi gazal likhi par aapke dil ko shayad bhed na paaya.. bas ab dil manmooniyat ke shikhar par hai aapko paakar ... aapka pyaar milta ahe koshish karta rahuNga aapka apna Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Re: Kis Kis ki KAHAANI likh daluN...??? |
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tumhara swaagat hai .. aaj pehli baar tumhe apne kisi kalaam pe paya hai .. aur khushi hui tumne mere alfazoN ke jazbaatoN ko samjha... accha lagta hai jab apne apne kareeb hote hai... shukriya mere khaak lafzoN ko nageena naam dene ke liye Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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14th January 2006, 03:02 PM
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Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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15th January 2006, 02:02 PM
Pyaare Kunal,
Absolutely amazing writing bro. The prologue itself was so heart rendering!!!! Human emotions so rare n truth of today captured so delicately. But it seems u making pain u're trademark. I do hope to read more happier works from u. Take care and hope u always stay happy n smiling. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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khaali deep se mandeep kaha bana diyaa /man ko woman bana diya without a degree and scalpel.....lol.... marane kii duaaye.n kyuu.N maa.Nguu.N jiine kii tamaannaa kaun kare ye duniyaa ho yaa vo duniyaa ab Khvaahish-e-duniyaa kaun kare jo aag lagaaii thii tum ne us ko to bujhaayaa ashko.n ne jo ashko.n ke bha.Dakaaii hai us aag ko Tha.nDaa kaun kare jab kashtii saabit-o-saalib thii, saahil kii tamannaa kisako thii ab aisii shikastaa kashtii me.n saahil kii tamannaa kaun kare duniyaa ne hame.n chho.Daa ai dil, ham chho.D na de kyo.n duniyaa ko duniyaa ko samajh kar baiThe hai.n ab duniyaa duniyaa kaun kare -Moen Ahsan Jazbi |
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18th January 2006, 08:03 AM
Kehti hai kalam par kis kis ki kahaani likh daluN..
Khushaal bachpan, ya dard-e-jawani likh daluN.. Waah...Anmol bas Anmol Har koi jahaN maiN tanha hai bebas raahoN pe… Us jeete hue ki , us marte ki jubaani likh daluN… Pur asar Un aankhoN ke khwab kisi aur ki nazar ho gaye… Khamoshi-e-sehra, ya hawayeN barfani likh daluN… Kya KahuN Bhai...is tulna ki bhawnaa bas dil ko chu Gayi SambhaluN kaise dardmandoN ko ladkhadane se… Beeti hui yadeN, ya bachi hui nishani likh daluN... Yaad hai kuch saal pehle maine tumhe kaha tha kunal tum likhte aacha ho sirf zara kalaam ke flow mein dhayaan dena..aaj yeh sampoorn hai ... bilkul sampoorn Na koi humdard kisi ka, na koi kisi ka humsafar… Nakaab-e-jindgi, ya asal-e-jindgaani likh daalun… Kagzi kahawat rishte, do lafzoN ka “saccha_pyar”… Uski har bewafai, ya apni har kurbani likh daluN… Ki koi kahani likh daluN,dard-e-jawani likh daluN Kunal aaj to tumhe Guru maan na padeGaa...Behad adab aur lehze se bhara hai yeh kalaam apne mein atoot heera hai..Dil moh liya tumne mera -tumhaara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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