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Im leaving shayri.com -
2nd September 2004, 11:05 AM
priye doston
aaj bahoot bhaari mann ne yeh kehna chaunga ki yeh mehfil hamesha ke liye chode jaa raha hon....yehi wo jageh hai jisne mujhe ek nai pehchaan di,,mujhe dost bakshe aur meri jindagi ko khushiyonn se bhar diya,,magar aaj kuch aise haalat khade kiye ja rahe hai ki ab is mehfil se rukhsat hona hi mere liye sahi hai.....aap sab ka pyaar kabhi nahin bhool sakunga mein,,,,antim baar bas yehi kehna chaunga ki mujh se agar koi galti hui ho to muaaf kar dena.... chode jate hai ham aaj mehfil dil kare to yaad kar lena dunia rahi mere dard se gaafil dil kare to yaad kar lena safar e tanhai mein kuch ghadi ko aabaad ham hue the bahoot door hai meri manzil dil kare to yaad kar lena. aapka apna -MANOJ KUREEL karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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2nd September 2004, 11:56 AM
kya manoj bhai aap bhi
abhi ek reply san(swati) ko bheja hai aur agle hi pal aapne bhi wahi bat kahi kyun ja rahe hai aap isi liye jo swati ji ko likha wahi aapko likh raha hun plz gaur farmana plz swati ji ki jagah apne ko rakhna( hehehe thoda hans bhi lena meri is bat pe ) swati ji namaskar --^-- pehle to aapki is shayari ki tareef karna chahunga bohat khoob likha hai aapne accha laga aapki shayari padh kar .... par bohat dukh hua aapke jane ki bat padh kar mujhe joi kiye hue jyada din to nahi hue par han kayi bar aapki sharyi padhi hai maine aapne likha aapko bohat pyar mila yahan se bohat samman bhi mila... iska matlab aapko chahhne walo ki yahan koi kami nahi... mana aapko koi dard yahan se mila... par kya woh dard wakai main us pyar us samman se bada hai jo aapko yahan se mila... kya yahan ke logon ke pyar main woh marham nahi ki aapke dard ki tapish ko kam kar sake.... man liya ye bhi nahi sahi.... kehte hai har ek cheez ki keemat chukani hi padti hai is dunia main.... chahe woh pyar ho ya dard... ye mehfil chor ke aap dard ke keemat to chuka rahi hai.... par us pyar ki keemat ka kya hoga... jo aapko yahan se mila... sochiye ek pareshani ke liye aap itne logon se door ho jayengi.. swati ji smooth jindgi jeena bohat aasan hai har koi chahta hai... use jeena, par jab tak is jindgi ke sath lad kar na jiye.... fateh na ki is jindgi pe to kya jeena han.... aur aapne khud kaha ki aap nahi chahti ki aap yahan se jaye... to apne dil ki bat na sun kar aap halat ke haton maboor hone ja rahi hai.... ek shayar to halat banata hai aap to halaat banne ja rahi hai... yaad rakhiyega ye jindgi kab gujar jayegi pata bhi nahi chalega... bas yun lagega ye kya tha jo chala gaya... main to kehta hun kosish kijiyega judne ki... kisi se alag hone ki nahi kyunki jab khuda ki marji hogi aapko sabse alag karne ki aapko waqt bhi nahi milega kisi se alvida kehne ka ... plz mat hiye alag aap kisi se rahiye yahin humare sath humare beech... mehsoos kijiye us pyar ko jiska jikra aapne kiya... aur kosish kijiye kisi se apne gham batne ki... bohat sukoon milega aapko... gujarish hai aapse na jaye yun apne chahne walon ko chor ke ... aisi koi jagah nahi dunia main jahan dard na ho ya pyar na ho.... kahan se kahan bhagengi aap dard o choriye pyar ko nahi ... aur ye koi kar sakta hai... umeed hai aap gaur farmaiygi meri bat pe.... gulabon ki mehfil ka ek gulab hi sahi... ek ek gulab se hi mehak hogi.... yun hi jate rahe gulab toot toot kar ek din viran ye chehak hogi... aapse rista bas ab tak lafzon ka hai tabhi koi bat aapke dil main thami hogi... ansoo gire jo aapke dil se nikle... humari aankhon main bhi nami hogi... yun na jao muh pher ke humse aap lagega jaise humare hi pyar main koi kami hogi... umeed karta hun aap samjhengi meri bat ko aur apne faisle pe nazar karengi aur bohat jald milengi yahin pe ek dil ko choone wali shayri le ke tab tak ke liye aadab namaskar sabbhakhair apna khayal rakhiyega //sacccha_pyar(kunal) tune ye mashvira suna hai kya jingi bina SACCCHE PYAR ke hai kya |
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2nd September 2004, 05:06 PM
Manoj bhai,
KYA BAAT HAI? aisa kya ho gaya hai ki aap achanak hum sabhi ko alvida kah rahe hain..aisi kaun si baat hai jo aap apne man hi me rakh kar is pariwaar ko chodne ki baat kar rahe hain..agar koi samasya ho bhi to hum sab ek pariwaar ke sadasyo.n ki tarah use suljha sakte hain..koi is tarah to apne pariwaar ko chod kar nahi jata.. umeed ki aap apne is faisle par dobara gaur karenge aur is pariwaar ko chod kar kahin nahi jayenge.. take care bye |
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hi -
2nd September 2004, 05:53 PM
Manoj ji,
aapse aisi umeed nahi thi....kya hum sabhi doston ke pyaar mein koi kami reh gayi thi jo aapne ye kadam utha liya...aur humare baare mein ek baar bhi nahi socha...mein nahi jaanti ki samasya kya hai...lekin phir bhi wo itni badi nahi ho sakti ki jiske liye aap humara pyar aur samman chod kar chale jaaye...khair jyada kehne laayak nahi hu,....bas yahi iltzaa hai ki ho sake to apne uthe kadmon ko rok lein....humein aapki bahut jaroorat hai...  hamesha aapke naye kalaam ka intzaar rahega.. take care, pari  |
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2nd September 2004, 06:28 PM
Manoj Kureel saahab nahi jaanta aapke dard ki wajeh...warna koi kyoN...chhodna chaahega..dostoN ko...
Bas yahi kahooNga...ke bane raheiN hamaare saath to achchha lagega...beshaq jiyaada na mil paate hoN..ham log per achchha lagta hai ek doosre ko yahaaN dekh kar. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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Namaskar Manoj Ji -
2nd September 2004, 08:52 PM
Namaskar Manoj Ji
Aaj yeh dekh bahut dukh ho raha hay ki shayri.com kay 2 behtareen likhney waley chod kay janey ki baat kar rahey hain.Nayee rachna post karney walon ko aapki hosla Afsai ki zaroorat hay unka soch kar hi ek pal kay liye ruk jayein.I remember I had wished u on ur B'Day aur us post par no. of replies dekh kar hi yeh andaza ho gaya tha Aap is .com kay ek behtareen likhney walon mein se ek hain.Aapko shairi.com se itneey tareef mili aaj fir aap issey kyon chodna chahtey hain.Hum jyada to kuch nahi keh saktey magar itna keh saktey hain Wapis aa jain.Is .com par dard kaise halqa ho jata hay pata hi nahi chalta ek se ek sundar sundar rachna pad kar phir aap kyon is .com ko chodna chahtey hain? |
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2nd September 2004, 09:26 PM
Dear manojbhai,
aare dost ham se koi galti ho gai ho to maf ker de yaar, lekin ham logo ko chod ke mat ja yeh ham sab logo ki request hai. yaar yeh padh ke meri jaan nikal rahi hai. aaisa lagta hai ke gamo ke badal fir se baras ne lage hai.....plz request......stay with us...... pappu. |
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2nd September 2004, 09:38 PM
MoNoJ Sahib....
Kaise Hai AaP .. AuR Ye Kya HuM DuBaaRa Aaye YeHa To AaP Ne JaaNe Ki BaaT KaR Dii Kya HuM Se Koi NaRaaZGi hai .. AgaR Aasa Hai To BaTa De.... AuR Kyo AakiR Aasa Kya Hua Jo TuM JaNe Ki BaaT KaR RaHe Ho..DosT KaHa Tha TuM Ne DiN To DosTi Ka FarZ Bhi NiBhaO. AuR KaHi Mat JaaO..... YarR Ek Do Lines SuNi Thi MeiNe... HuM Ne HaR ShaMa ChiRagoN Se Saja RakHi Hai PaR sharT HaWaoN Se LeGa RakHi Hai Na JaNe Kis GaaLi Se MeRa YaaR AaYeGa HaR GaaLi Ko PhuloN Se SaZa RakHi Hai DosT HuM Sab IntZaaR KaR RaHe Hai TuMaRa... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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3rd September 2004, 04:20 AM
Manoj, tum bhi????
Kyon iss tarah kee baat kar rahe ho...yaad hai na jab maine aisee baat kahi thee tumne kitna samjha bujha kar mujhe wapis aane ke liye kaha thaa...aur maine tumhara kaha bhi mana thaa...dekho meri yahi illtijaa hai ki tum iss tarah chodne kee baat nahin karo... hum sab doston ka pyaar kuch bhi nahin...ek kisi ne kuch ulta keh diya tau tum us shakhs ko jeetne doge? tumse yeh ummiid mujhe bilkul nahin hai...and i m sure tum kahin nahin jaaoge...yoonhi hamare beech bus dard aur khushi baant te rahoge...tum tau kitne puraane sadasya ho shayri com ke...you should know better...kisi bhi samasya ka samadhaan saamne reh kar karna chahiye na ki duur bhaag kar...yeh sab tumhari hee shiksha hai janaab...aur aaj khud hee? well...hum kaun hote hain aapko rokne waale...jo jee mein aaye kijiey...itne saare doston ka dil dukhe...us se tumhein kya? jahan bhi rahein khush rahein...alvidaaaaaaa..... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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3rd September 2004, 01:21 PM
Manoj Bhai!!!!
Aap se aisi ummed nahi thi? Kya ho raha hai yahan par?? Humse koi galti huyee ho to chhota nhai samajh kar maaf kar dena lekin is tarah rooth kar na jaayien. Kucch pareshaan hain aap to thode time aaraam kijiye magar jaane ki baat kyun karte hain? This is not fair naa... Kitne logon ki bhavnayein judi hain aapke saath, Aap to ek misaal hain shayri.com pe... aap aise toot jayenge to kaise chalega? Apna chhota bhai samjhkar hi meri baat par gaur zaroor kijiyega... Jab se shayri join ki hai... U've been a person I cud look upto always.... Finallly.. I can only request u.... Plz Dont Go... Dont take the bright Star of shayri.com away... Dua rahegi ki aap sada khush rahein Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd September 2004, 03:26 PM
Manoj aapse yeh nahi puchungaa ki kya hua kyonki kuch aisa hua hai jo aapko yaha se duur le jaa raha hai...aapko is asmaan ka taara kaha tha maine aur aap yeh aasmaan hi sunaa kar ke jaa rahe hai.....
Bahut rishte gehre hone par tutte to sab ke dil ko dard dete hai agar hum mein se kisi ek se khata ho gayi ho to hum sab pure dil se maafi maangte hai umeed hai aap maaf kar denge aur laut aayenge aapke intezaar mein aapka aapna Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd September 2004, 03:50 PM
manoj kureel
kaise ho? u call me many time..khanbhai so bhai kahta hay NAHI JAO or bhai kahta hay tum ja hi nahi skte apne lafzon ko wapis le lo piyar se samjh jao warna dosra tareeqa bhi ata hay khan |
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3rd September 2004, 11:01 PM
Manoj ji aap bhi??
yeh kya ho gaya hai sabko? abhi Swati ko bhi likha aur ab aap bhi? Aap to kitne puraane aur kitne pyare sadasya hain is parivaar ke.. khud hi kaha aapne ki aapko bahut pyar mila hai yahan.. to gar kisi ne kuch galat keh diya, us ek ke liye hum sab ko chod dena kya yeh sahi hoga? ji nahi.. kabhi bhi nahi.. ek ki galati ki saza aap sabko nahi de sakte.. please apna hi parivaar mat todo.. mat jaao kahin... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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4th September 2004, 10:23 AM
Ye aaj kal yahaan ho kya raha hai??
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5th September 2004, 08:10 AM
manoj,
kisi ek chhote ya bade ne shayed bada ghum de diya... par oos ghum ko dekho, jaano par oos ke sathh jood mat jaao... yah to net hai.. hum yaha aa kar sab milae... or bhavook ho kar ek pariwaar sa mahesoos karne lagae.... par maie to kahti hu ke yah woh jagah hai jaha par hum sab ko kai aise sabak milte hai jo humari net ke baahar ki sahi zindgi maie paar ootarne maie kaam aate hai... humesha aisa kyun hota hai... ghum khushi se bada kyun hota hai pal bhar ki khushi milne par hum kahte hai ke, zindgi bhar yaad rakhenge... par hum is pal ko ijjat nahi de paate kyun ki ab hume nayi khushi chahiye... par baat ghum ki aati hai to hum oose galae lagaaye firte hai... humne yaha pariwaar to bana liya... par oosko kabhi koi maaina nahi diya... diya hota to janae ki baat n aati... badi saral baat bata du... humari sahi zindgi maie bahut se rishte hai... yaha par sab dost hai is liye maie sahi zindgi ke dosto ki hi baat karti hu... kisi ek dost se nahi bani to kya tum sabhi dosto se rishta tod dete ho? haan ya na? apne maan se puchhna. yaha tum ek rishte ki galti par sabhi rishte ka apmaan to nahi kar rahe sochna.... yah baat sirf tumhare liye nahi... oon sabhi ke liye hai jo yaha aa kar kah kar ya n kah kar bhi rishta sa samajne lage hai.... ab bhi jana chaho to yahi kahungi...... apna khayal rakhna..... or humne kisi ko kho diya hai... oos humare ghum maie shareef nahi hona.... didi |
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5th September 2004, 04:11 PM
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6th September 2004, 05:52 PM
manoj bhai yun to aapko meine reply bahoot kam diya nahin,,magar padhta hamesha hoon aapko aap dil ki gehraiyon se likhte hai everytime..aapka yeh post kuch din pehle padha tha,magar aaj reply kar raha hoon.plzzzzz aap se request hai na jaiye hamein chod kar...kyunki meri aankein hamesha aap ka naam dhoondhti hai is site par jab bhi mein aata hoon yahan..u r the best...plzzz na jaiye
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7th September 2004, 09:56 AM
Mere bhai merii jaan Manoj.......ab lauT aa^oo.....dekhoo kanhii ye ankhe raah taKte taKte bhandh naa hoo jaye......tumharii zarurat hai yanhaa sabhii koo...kisi ek shaksh kii khaatir itne sare dosto ka saath choodh naa kanhaa insaaf hai yaar......aur tumne kal mujhse wada bhii kiyaa haii.. lautne kaa.....bass ab intazaar hai...tumhaaRa
yanhaa pyaar kiii bhaasha samjhne waale bohot hai....par unpar amaal karne wale channdh log hai.....aur woh hii hum jaiso^n k liye dard bann gaya....... chaltaa hu.....khabar kar denaa....jab bhii aaoo....tumhara bhai Sanju!  muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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7th September 2004, 05:15 PM
Manoj Bhai ..
Jab Jab yahaN wapas aata huN .. tab tab kuch naa kuch anokhi baat dekhta huN .. AB aapka jana to sarasar galat hai .. aisi kya baat ho gayi jo aap jane kee baat kar rahe haiN .. hala ki koi bhi insaan agar koi baat apne zehan meiN daal le to usse samjhane ka koi farak nahi padta par dostoN kaa kaam to akhir sahi raah dikhana hota hai .. MaiN guzarish karna chahta huN ki agar koi baat buri lagi ho to usse dil se nikal dijiye yaa kisi se koi narazgi hai to uske bajaay mujhe muaaf kar di jiye .. magar yooN chor ke mat jaiye .. Ummeed karta huN ek behtareen shayar e hasti se daman itni aasani se chutaye naa chotega .. aapka |
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16th September 2004, 12:00 PM
merii jaan meraa bhaii aa gaya......shukriyaa shukriyaaa karaam merharbaanii...huzur der se sahii aaye tao sahii.....mere dil se jaate jaate tumne ek bojh utaar diyaa......
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