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ahl-e-dil yuN mohabbat nibhaate rahe (Ghazal) -
11th December 2015, 04:18 AM
ek arsey baad koi Ghazal hui hai, yaaro suno :
ahl-e-dil yuN mohabbat nibhaate rahe zakhm khaate rahe muskuraate rahe yaad-e-maazi* sataati rahi raat bhar khwaab TuuTe hue dil dukhaate rahe yaad-e-maazi* = beetey dinoN ki yaad ik taraf aas thi ik taraf aaNdhiyaaN sham’aa bhujhti rahi hum jalaate rahe zakhm riste’y rahe aaNkh behti rahi iNtehaa dard ki aazmaate rahe kaT gayi kaT’te-kaT’te shab-e-hijr* yuN she'r kehte rahe gun’gunaate rahe shab-e-hijr* = judaai ki raat jinke pairoN tale’y dil bichhaya,vohi dhajjiyaaN aabruu ki uDaate rahe raah puuchhi massarrat* ki aur tere Gham raastaa maikade ka bataate rahe massarrat* = khushi saaNs chalti rahi dil sulagtaa raha dard ki aaNch se til’milaate rahe is qadar the kaThin raaste hosh ke paaoN rakkhe jidhar, laDkhDaate rahe aitbaar-e-wafaa, aaj ke daur meiN! ajee, tum kahaaN sar khapaate rahe? voh samajhte haiN “maikash” faqat shayri aap TukDey jigar ke sajaate rahe is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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11th December 2015, 08:40 AM
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kaT gayi kaT’te-kaT’te shab-e-hijr* yuN she'r kehte rahe gun’gunaate rahe jinke pairoN tale’y dil bichhaya,vohi dhajjiyaaN aabruu ki uDaate rahe Yunhi likhte rahiYe Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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11th December 2015, 09:41 AM
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adaab janaab...har baar aapki ghazal me bayaan dard dil tak paunchta hai...aur is baar ek ek sher ko kitni hee padha aur bas waah waah waah karte hai....aapke andaaz aur apki kalam ko khuda aur tarakki de yahi dua hai.. Tah e dil se..daad pesh hai.. Salamat rahein.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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Waah -
11th December 2015, 12:37 PM
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YuN to har sher lajawaab hai par Maqta bohat khoob raha. voh samajhte haiN “maikash” faqat shayri aap TukDey jigar ke sajaate rahe DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad qubuul farmayeN. Aur naye-naye kalamoN se bazm ko lutf-andoz karte raheN. Khaksaar Praveen manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi |
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11th December 2015, 02:38 PM
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Maikash ji...aik aik lafz dil par asar kar gya...maana ki bahut dard, tadap hai aapki shayri meiN par sacchi baat kahun, hame sakoon milta hai padkar. aapki kalam to qtal karti chalti hai...dard par waaahhhh kehna mushkil hai. apne ehsaas yu hi hamse hsare karte rhiye. rabb raakha  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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14th December 2015, 02:14 AM
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daad, ba-meherbaani tasleem hai mere bhai go maiN yeh samajhta hooN ke maiN naalaayiq agar miyaar se neeche bhi she'r kahooN to aapki mohabbat itni hai ke aap phir bhi hauNslaa baDhaayeNge aapki murravatoN ka karz'daar hooN saheb bohat shukriya rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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15th December 2015, 06:22 PM
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kya baat hai kyaa andaaz hai bhai...... kamaal ki ghazal huii hai is baar aapki taraf se maikash bhai.... aur har sher me mera dil nikal nikal ke baahar aa gayaa..... jitnaa dard samet saktaa tha sametaa hai aapki ghazal se bade bhai.... Allah se duaa kartaa hoon ke is fan ko din doona raat chaugunaa badhaae aur aapke kalam ki khushboo se bazm mahaktii rahe..... jinke pairoN tale’y dil bichhaya,vohi dhajjiyaaN aabruu ki uDaate rahe is sher ke liye itnaa kahunga..... qatl kar diyaa isne hamaara... behad aala... mukhlis ki daad qubool farmaaen ,.... aate rahen,.... aur apnaa khayaal rakkhen.... Shaad.......... |
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18th December 2015, 06:18 AM
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sitaayish aur daad ke liye aapka behadd mashkoo hooN mohtarma duaaoN ke liye alag se shukriya baaNdh lijiye, khush rahiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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23rd December 2015, 03:52 AM
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maqta aapne khusoosan pasaNd farmaaya, shukriya bhai naye qalaam aur is haalaat-e-masroofiyat meiN teDhi kheer ke baraabar haiN, ba-har-haal, kehte haiN ke chor chori se jaaye hera-pheri se na jaaye so gaahe-ba-gaahe do-ek misre idhar udhar se raqm ho jaate haiN to pesh kar deta hooN hauNsla-afzaai ke liye alag se shukriya baaNdh lijiye bade bhai rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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