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Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan -
31st March 2006, 08:03 PM
Raasta kathin hay Mager chuu laingey Asmaan Aaj nahin to kal hoga Apna Jahaan Har Shaks Dhuundta hay kuch Muskurahat Yahaan Aaj Nahin to kal hum payaingey Manzilon ke Nishaan Chottey Sapne hain Mager Roshan hoga humse jahaan Aaj Nahin to Kal hum likhaiga Naye Dastaan Ruuthtey huay kitney Dil hain Yahaan Aaj nahin to kal Zamana Gayega Humsa koyi Kahaan Wadiya bhuul gaye Apney geet Jahaan Aaj Nahin to kal hoga Basera Wahaan Jhooti Nahin Sachi kahani Dohraiga yeh Jahaan Aaj nahin to kal yaad aayaingey tumhey hum Yahaan Bhuul jatey hay Duniya apnon ke Namo Nishaan Hum Na bhuulainge yadon ka woh Samaan Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan Tum Sath ho Ager Pa laingey Manzilon ke Nishaan |
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Re: Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan -
31st March 2006, 10:18 PM
Yaha pyaar k dard k alawa padhne ko kam hi milta hai
bohat khoob likha hai aapne shukriyah apka Diggaj  Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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1st April 2006, 02:18 AM
wow sukanya di(can i call u di)
this is really nice...pata hai, this is the first time im reading u...nd pehli baar pada, nd yeh toh dil peh chah gaya!! this is really nice...nd different frm wht we usually get to see in this forum take care bye warda »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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Re: Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan -
1st April 2006, 05:37 AM
Raasta kathin hay Mager chuu laingey Asmaan
Aaj nahin to kal hoga Apna Jahaan Har Shaks Dhuundta hay kuch Muskurahat Yahaan Aaj Nahin to kal hum payaingey Manzilon ke Nishaan oye hoye... yeh hui na baat.... Chottey Sapne hain Mager Roshan hoga humse jahaan Aaj Nahin to Kal hum likhaiga Naye Dastaan Ruuthtey huay kitney Dil hain Yahaan Aaj nahin to kal Zamana Gayega Humsa koyi Kahaan wah wah... Wadiya bhuul gaye Apney geet Jahaan Aaj Nahin to kal hoga Basera Wahaan Jhooti Nahin Sachi kahani Dohraiga yeh Jahaan Aaj nahin to kal yaad aayaingey tumhey hum Yahaan Kya baat hai./.. Bhuul jatey hay Duniya apnon ke Namo Nishaan Hum Na bhuulainge yadon ka woh Samaan Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan Tum Sath ho Ager Pa laingey Manzilon ke Nishaan Wonderful.... Sukanya Di.... Very well written..very positive and very nice... i love what u write... simple sweet and positive... very good... Take Care Rohin |
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Re: Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan -
1st April 2006, 03:35 PM
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aapke is aatmvishvaas ko parhkar bahaut accha laga, isi aatmvishvaas ke saath aage bhi likhti rahiyega. dhanyavaad vipin |
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1st April 2006, 08:02 PM
Sukanya ji..
namaskaar... Achchha laga aap ka yah kalaam padh kar.. Yun to pura kalaam hi achchha laga lekin kuchh sher jo achchhe lage un me ye bahoot achchha laga... Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan Tum Sath ho Ager Pa laingey Manzilon ke Nishaan Saath mai agar hamsafar hi hamraah bane.. to.. kahna hi kyaa... HAr safar ek aasaan safar ho jaata hai.. chaahatoN ko har manzil mil jaata hai.. Yun hi likhte rahiye.. aur aate rahiye.. Mayank |
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1st April 2006, 08:13 PM
meri Didi
Aapko is roop maiN dekh kar mujhe kitni khushi mili hai maiN bata nahi sakta ... aapka yuN apne aapko stroNg banana sabak hai humare liye ... apne bhai ko aise hi sikhate rehna aapka bhai Kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Re: Gunganeya Sath mere yeh sara Jahaan -
1st April 2006, 08:49 PM
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2nd April 2006, 10:40 AM
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Tumhey mere Rachna achi lagi...thanks....u found it different thanks......waise is Rachna ke inspiration mughey yuun hi chalte chaltey mil gayi...main chaltey chaltey soch rahi thi yeh rasta kitna tedha sa hay par phir bhi yeh manzil tak pahunchaiga bas phir yeh rachna likh di...Thanks for reading and appreciating |
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2nd April 2006, 10:56 AM
hello Warda
Arrey you can surely call me di...mughey kushi hui ki tumney mughey pehli baar padha aur mere rachna ko pasand kiya ....and I made a good first impression ...ppl say na first impression is the last impression.......Thanks for liking it and reading it...chalo tumharey rachnain bhi padhungi...God bless you Keep Smiling Di |
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3rd April 2006, 07:39 PM
Hello Rohin
Simple, sweet and positive wat a beautiful compliment.......It feels so good to know u like ur di's poetry......thanks...it will motivate me to write positive thoughts in future too...Take care Di |
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3rd April 2006, 07:42 PM
Namaskar Vipin ji
Shayad mere kisey post par aapka yeh pehla reply hay ...bahut kushi hui ki aapko mere Rachna pasand aayi.....I will try to write with confidence in future too....shayad ek baar phir aapka reply dekhney ki kushi mile With Regards |
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3rd April 2006, 09:05 PM
Namaskar Mayank ji
Aapko mere likhi rachna pasand aayi...... bahut acha laga sunkar...Aapko sabhi sher achey lage shukriya......jo sher aapko pasand aaya woh mughey bhi sabse acha lagta hay....kisey bhi rachna ki last line mein aser hona chahiye....chaliye last line mein hi kuch aser to hay....... Take care |
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3rd April 2006, 09:11 PM
Hi My sweet brother
Kaise ho kunal ......arrey mainey kuch sikha diya apney bhai ko....ager mere rachna tumhey stong banney ki prerna de gayi .... mere liye issey jyada kushi ki kya baat hogi.....ager phir kuch sikhaongi to yeh to nahin kahogey sab seekhatey rehtey hain .....Always keep smiling aur haan tumharey april fool wali post padh main bahut hassi ......keep smiling Tumhari di |
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3rd April 2006, 09:14 PM
Namaskar Manu ji
Pehli baar mera likha aapney padha....chaliye padha to sahi ....aur aapko acha laga thanks....asha karungi aagey bhi aapse encouragement milta rahega.Keep smiling |
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7th April 2006, 08:10 PM
Sukanya ji,
Aapne bahut achha likha hain, yeh gehre ehsaas aur iss me chhupa inspiration message mujhe pasand aaya. aap kam hi aate ho yaha par jab bhi aate ho ek behtareen kalam ke saath, aap ka likha huya parhne ka intzaar rehta hain mujhe. meri daad kubul kijiyega aur likhte rahiyega. take care! |
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8th April 2006, 10:08 AM
Jhooti Nahin Sachi kahani Dohraiga yeh Jahaan
Aaj nahin to kal yaad aayaingey tumhey hum Yahaan Bhuul jatey hay Duniya apnon ke Namo Nishaan Hum Na bhuulainge yadon ka woh Samaan tooo good... Hi didi, kaise ho? hope Evrything is going good at your end... Bahut hi accha likha hai aapne.. its good to see you writing such inspirational words.... bass aise hi likhti raha kijiye.. apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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8th April 2006, 10:43 AM
sukanya ji
bhaut hi housla badhane wali kalam likhi hai bhaut achha likha hai aapne aur padhkar sada hi achha laga hai mujhe aaj bhi bus bhaut khoob aise hi sabka housla badhate rahe .aate rahe bhool jana aasan kaha haan paa lena hai wo aasamn shrdh 
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9th April 2006, 11:00 AM
Hello Devangi
Arrey mere likhi rachna ka tumhey inteezaar rehta hay ....pata hi nahin tha....jab bhi aati huun ek behtareen qalam ke sath aati huun ...thanks sweetie....chalo mera inspirational message tumhey acha laga yeh suun bahut acha laga aur bahut acha laga ki tumhey mere rachna ka inteezaar rehte hay......tumney mere iss rachna ko dhuund kar reply kiya thanks....main koshish karungi ki aagey bhi jo post karun tumhey pasand aaye...Take care |
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9th April 2006, 11:08 AM
Hello Pulkit
Kaise ho?I am fine...Everything is good....Pulkit kuch din se site par aaney ka mann hi nahin ho raha tha....par shayri.com ko dedicated apni poetry ko dekha to socha humey issey jod ke rakhna chahiye...aaj kal sab kehtey hain we are leaving the site...site chodna to ek solution nahin hay....we should take initiative to keep everyone together....Tumhey mera likha acha laga bahut kushi hui..... God bless you Take care |
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9th April 2006, 11:12 AM
Dear Shradha
Tumney mere yeh Rachna bhi padhi aur reply kiya thanks..tumhey mera likha pasand aata hay jaan kar kushi hui....main koshish karungi aagey bhi inspirational message likhney ki...asha karungi tumhara sath yuun hi bana rahey Take care |
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