Shayri.com  

Go Back   Shayri.com > Shayri > Shayri-e-Ishq

Reply
 
Thread Tools Rate Thread Display Modes
~*~sansain meri...
Old
  (#1)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Love ~*~sansain meri... - 22nd March 2008, 11:28 AM

sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Waw
Old
  (#2)
Vikramsura
Registered User
Vikramsura is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 11
Join Date: Mar 2008
Rep Power: 0
Waw - 22nd March 2008, 11:46 AM

Bahut khuuub. . .Sach me badiya. . .Keep going
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#3)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
22nd March 2008, 11:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Vikramsura View Post
Bahut khuuub. . .Sach me badiya. . .Keep going
thanks a loT


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#4)
albela_rose
Registered User
albela_rose is on a distinguished road
 
albela_rose's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 50
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: at rajasthan,in india
Rep Power: 14
22nd March 2008, 02:58 PM

hi neha,
main yeh jaanata hoo ki tum nahi jaanti mujhe par ..................
or main bhi nahi jaanta hoo....... lekin main chahta hoo ki aaj k baad hum ek doosre k liye ajnabi nahi rahe ...............agar main aapko yeh poochunga ki aapki kya raaye he to aap culty kha jaayengi

dard se rishta he mera
khushi mere naseeb me nahi
humse bhi koi pyar kare
itne hum khushnaseeb nahi



my helpline is
hippy_happy_huppu@yahoo.co.in
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#5)
albela_rose
Registered User
albela_rose is on a distinguished road
 
albela_rose's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 50
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: at rajasthan,in india
Rep Power: 14
22nd March 2008, 03:00 PM

hum hum he baaki sab paani kam he
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#6)
taqdeer.786
Prince of angels
taqdeer.786 has a spectacular aura abouttaqdeer.786 has a spectacular aura abouttaqdeer.786 has a spectacular aura about
 
taqdeer.786's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 236
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: In Broken Hearts
Rep Power: 16
22nd March 2008, 03:36 PM

nice one
bahut khoobbbb




  Send a message via Yahoo to taqdeer.786  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#7)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
22nd March 2008, 05:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by albela_rose View Post
hi neha,
main yeh jaanata hoo ki tum nahi jaanti mujhe par ..................
or main bhi nahi jaanta hoo....... lekin main chahta hoo ki aaj k baad hum ek doosre k liye ajnabi nahi rahe ...............agar main aapko yeh poochunga ki aapki kya raaye he to aap culty kha jaayengi

dard se rishta he mera
khushi mere naseeb me nahi
humse bhi koi pyar kare
itne hum khushnaseeb nahi



my helpline is
hippy_happy_huppu@yahoo.co.in

is pore reply main meri poetry ki koi tarif koi burai na thi u mean main ne itna bura likha hai k app tarif tu kiya burai k laiq b nahi samjhte sorry
next tme acha likhne ki koshish karongi.


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#8)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 22nd March 2008, 05:07 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by taqdeer.786 View Post
nice one
bahut khoobbbb
thanks a lot dear thank u so much


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#9)
acharya_mj
Zakhm-e-Rooh
acharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud ofacharya_mj has much to be proud of
 
acharya_mj's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 2,220
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: ahmedabad
Rep Power: 30
Smile 24th March 2008, 10:54 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai
bahoot khoob likha hai Neha jee
dil se daad qubool kare
yunhee likhati rahe
regards
manu
  Send a message via Yahoo to acharya_mj  
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#10)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 24th March 2008, 11:10 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by acharya_mj View Post
bahoot khoob likha hai Neha jee
dil se daad qubool kare
yunhee likhati rahe
regards
manu

shukriya ji
koshish karongi k apki tawaqat par pori utar sakoon


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#11)
salauddin.azam
main shayar to nahin
salauddin.azam is on a distinguished road
 
salauddin.azam's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 46
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Presently Cochin kerela
Rep Power: 0
25th March 2008, 02:45 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai
Wow kiya khoob hai hame to pata bhi nahi tha ke aap kisi ka rah bhi dekhti hai ha ha ha
just kidding waise shairi bahut achha hai thanks and kepp it up


Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath

Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna

s@L@uddinSuh@n...


   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#12)
dineshdharvi
ek dost
dineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud of
 
dineshdharvi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,566
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: gujarat (india)
Rep Power: 31
25th March 2008, 03:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai
bahut acha likha hai apne neha ji
uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........
ye line apne bahut hi achi likhi hai muje bahut pasand aayi hai apki ye puri gazal
khushi rahiye


AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam
Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#13)
silent-tears
Registered User
silent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud of
 
silent-tears's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,224
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jalandhar
Rep Power: 27
25th March 2008, 05:11 PM

wah kaya raz kia hai bhut khoob

Jeene ki naye aada di hai,
khush rehen ki uss ne dua di hai,
Ae khuda ussay sara jahan dena,
Jis ne apne dil me humein jaga di hai

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........




So nice n sweet shayri arz ki hai aap ne
lagta kisi ko aap bhut dil se chahte hai


Anil Arora

Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#14)
wajahatgujjar
Registered User
wajahatgujjar is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 16
Join Date: Mar 2008
Rep Power: 0
25th March 2008, 11:48 PM


Tujh se mil ke bicher gaye,tujh se bicher ke mil gaye

Aisi bhi dooriyan rahen,aise bhi faasle rahe

Tu bhi na mil saka aur umer bhi raaigan gayi

Tujh se to khair ishq tha,khud se bare gile rahe
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#15)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 26th March 2008, 08:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by salauddin.azam View Post
Wow kiya khoob hai hame to pata bhi nahi tha ke aap kisi ka rah bhi dekhti hai ha ha ha
just kidding waise shairi bahut achha hai thanks and kepp it up
asalam....

thanks...wese tarif dil se kar rahe hain na ya dil rakhne ko tarif kar rahe hain

plz explain...
aur haan yehi sach hai k main kisi ki rah dekhti hoonmind it.


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#16)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 26th March 2008, 08:19 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by dineshdharvi View Post
bahut acha likha hai apne neha ji
uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........
ye line apne bahut hi achi likhi hai muje bahut pasand aayi hai apki ye puri gazal
khushi rahiye

thanks a lot thank u so much k apne apne qimti waqat main se thora time meri poetry ko b diyathanks again.


tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai


wese muje apni is poetry ka ye sher ziada pasand hai even ye poetry hi main ne is sher ki waja se likhi hai....pehle ye likha tha


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#17)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 26th March 2008, 08:23 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by wajahatgujjar View Post
Tujh se mil ke bicher gaye,tujh se bicher ke mil gaye

Aisi bhi dooriyan rahen,aise bhi faasle rahe

Tu bhi na mil saka aur umer bhi raaigan gayi


Tujh se to khair ishq tha,khud se bare gile rahe
thanks that u came here n then reply me


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#18)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
26th March 2008, 08:27 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by silent-tears View Post
wah kaya raz kia hai bhut khoob

Jeene ki naye aada di hai,
khush rehen ki uss ne dua di hai,
Ae khuda ussay sara jahan dena,
Jis ne apne dil me humein jaga di hai

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........



So nice n sweet shayri arz ki hai aap ne
lagta kisi ko aap bhut dil se chahte hai

thanks anil ji....kafi dino k bad apse baat ho rahi hai
all set na?
any ways thanks 4 ur likeness

hmm ghalat lagta hai apko main kisi ko bhi dil se nahi chahti siwaee KHUDA TALAH kbaqi rishte tu duniawi hain jin k liyee main kabhi bhi apne dil ko daoo par nahi laga sakti...hahahahgot it?


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#19)
A aziz
Registered User
A aziz is on a distinguished road
 
Offline
Posts: 11
Join Date: Mar 2008
Rep Power: 0
26th March 2008, 08:34 AM

Bahut khuuub.bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#20)
silent-tears
Registered User
silent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud of
 
silent-tears's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,224
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jalandhar
Rep Power: 27
26th March 2008, 11:07 AM

ji haa app se bhut dino baat ho pa rahi, par kaya kare kaam bhi karna hai or study bhi karni hai, bich me time nikal kar aap ke nazam par leta hu


Anil Arora

Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#21)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 26th March 2008, 12:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by silent-tears View Post
ji haa app se bhut dino baat ho pa rahi, par kaya kare kaam bhi karna hai or study bhi karni hai, bich me time nikal kar aap ke nazam par leta hu

thanks.............


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#22)
silent-tears
Registered User
silent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud ofsilent-tears has much to be proud of
 
silent-tears's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 1,224
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Jalandhar
Rep Power: 27
26th March 2008, 01:09 PM

tum ko punjabi samjgh me aati hai,
waise pakistan me kaun c state or provience me ho

city kaun c hai


Anil Arora

Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#23)
dineshdharvi
ek dost
dineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud ofdineshdharvi has much to be proud of
 
dineshdharvi's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 5,566
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: gujarat (india)
Rep Power: 31
26th March 2008, 03:57 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
thanks a lot thank u so much k apne apne qimti waqat main se thora time meri poetry ko b diyathanks again.


tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

wese muje apni is poetry ka ye sher ziada pasand hai even ye poetry hi main ne is sher ki waja se likhi hai....pehle ye likha tha
neha ji hum itna bhi bussy nahi hote hai ki apko reply na kar sake
aur rahi time ki baat to kisi ke pass time nahi hota hai per isko mehshoosh karne ke liye aana padta hai
aur haan ye bhi line bahut achi hai jo apne likhi hai
chalo me bhi kuch likh deta hu
mill jaaye har koi yuhi raaho me to kese pata chalega ki intzaar kiya hai
ek baar tadap ke dekho ge kisi ke chahat me to pata chalega ki pyar kiya hai


AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam
Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#24)
salauddin.azam
main shayar to nahin
salauddin.azam is on a distinguished road
 
salauddin.azam's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 46
Join Date: Feb 2008
Location: Presently Cochin kerela
Rep Power: 0
26th March 2008, 04:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
asalam....

thanks...wese tarif dil se kar rahe hain na ya dil rakhne ko tarif kar rahe hain

plz explain...
aur haan yehi sach hai k main kisi ki rah dekhti hoonmind it.

ab meri tareef me tumhe kami bhi lagne lagi hai any way dil rkhne keliye nahi dilse hi kar raha hun raah dekhti ho well kiya jaa nsakta hun kiski koi khas hai kiya naam jansakta hun is website pe hai ya koi aur


Har Saans pe hai maut ka pehra laga hua,
Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath

Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko
Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna

s@L@uddinSuh@n...


   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#25)
albela_rose
Registered User
albela_rose is on a distinguished road
 
albela_rose's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 50
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: at rajasthan,in india
Rep Power: 14
28th March 2008, 01:05 AM

hi NEHA,
aapne kaha ki humne aapki poetry taarif nahi ki ?
arey nahi frnd aisi baat nahi he, agar mujhe aapki poetry pasand nahi aati to kya hum aaapko reply dete?kher main nahi jaanta tha ki aap ishare nahi samajhti aapko bol k batana padta he,

aap waaqayi me bahut khub likhti he agar mujhe laga ki kahi kami he to main aapko tok doonga q ki main fesla on the spot karta hoo bole to main peeth piche baat nahi karta hoo
or aapke liye isse achcha or kya hoga ki aapko dekhkar meri bhi dilchaspi bhi badh rahi he
to agar izaazat he to main bhi kuch kehna chahta hoo
to arj kiya he!!!!!!

murjha gaye phool par bahar wahi he,
door rehte he to kya? par pyar wahi he,
jante he mil nahi sakte hum aapse,magar
in ankhon me intezaar wahi he................



dear frnd main yeh jaanna chahta hoo ki jab aap mujhe reply de to main konse box me jaakar aapka msg check karoo? main shayri.com ka naya member hoo isliye main iske baare me jyad nahi jaanta agar time mile to batana ki aapki tarah main bhi apne shair likh ke display karna chahta hoo

meharbaani hogi
awaiting ur favorable reply
albela_rose
hippy_happy_huppu@yahoo.co.in
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#26)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
30th March 2008, 07:59 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by dineshdharvi View Post
neha ji hum itna bhi bussy nahi hote hai ki apko reply na kar sake
aur rahi time ki baat to kisi ke pass time nahi hota hai per isko mehshoosh karne ke liye aana padta hai
aur haan ye bhi line bahut achi hai jo apne likhi hai
chalo me bhi kuch likh deta hu
mill jaaye har koi yuhi raaho me to kese pata chalega ki intzaar kiya hai
ek baar tadap ke dekho ge kisi ke chahat me to pata chalega ki pyar kiya hai

thanks.....


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#27)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Love 30th March 2008, 08:03 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by salauddin.azam View Post
ab meri tareef me tumhe kami bhi lagne lagi hai any way dil rkhne keliye nahi dilse hi kar raha hun raah dekhti ho well kiya jaa nsakta hun kiski koi khas hai kiya naam jansakta hun is website pe hai ya koi aur

ohh so u r taking interest in my personalsplz this is confidentialha ha ha
got it na?
ok then dil se keh rahe hain tu thanks

no i will not show the name of my "dreaming LOVER"

take care bye


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#28)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 30th March 2008, 08:14 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by albela_rose View Post
hi NEHA,
aapne kaha ki humne aapki poetry taarif nahi ki ?
arey nahi frnd aisi baat nahi he, agar mujhe aapki poetry pasand nahi aati to kya hum aaapko reply dete?kher main nahi jaanta tha ki aap ishare nahi samajhti aapko bol k batana padta he,

aap waaqayi me bahut khub likhti he agar mujhe laga ki kahi kami he to main aapko tok doonga q ki main fesla on the spot karta hoo bole to main peeth piche baat nahi karta hoo
or aapke liye isse achcha or kya hoga ki aapko dekhkar meri bhi dilchaspi bhi badh rahi he
to agar izaazat he to main bhi kuch kehna chahta hoo
to arj kiya he!!!!!!

murjha gaye phool par bahar wahi he,
door rehte he to kya? par pyar wahi he,
jante he mil nahi sakte hum aapse,magar
in ankhon me intezaar wahi he................



dear frnd main yeh jaanna chahta hoo ki jab aap mujhe reply de to main konse box me jaakar aapka msg check karoo? main shayri.com ka naya member hoo isliye main iske baare me jyad nahi jaanta agar time mile to batana ki aapki tarah main bhi apne shair likh ke display karna chahta hoo

meharbaani hogi
awaiting ur favorable reply
albela_rose
hippy_happy_huppu@yahoo.co.in

first thanks n then its ok jab b apko koi kami lage i mean in my poetry u can point out that....
take decision on the spot,so it is nice

n 2nd thing k ur stanza is outstanding.....at least i m passing it with 98% marks

3rd is this k if u want to post some thing on site so just open shayri.com....then log in...then go in shayri-e-ishq (or in dard,in mashoor shayri whatever u like) then see on the top of the page...there will be a box in which u see [new thread] this is the exect point just click on it n then on the opened page u write what ever u want n then submit....u can check also by preview that what n how u wrote all that so first check by preview n then submit ur threadit will be better.

n u can check ur private message in user control pannel, in ur inbox

now ok.

bye


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#29)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 30th March 2008, 08:20 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by silent-tears View Post
tum ko punjabi samjgh me aati hai,
waise pakistan me kaun c state or provience me ho

city kaun c hai
u have asked this ques, before 1 or 2 months i think any ways no i dont know punjabi but may be my would be husband will malik (punjabi)

i m in karachi n realted with islamabad.


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#30)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 30th March 2008, 08:22 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by A aziz View Post
Bahut khuuub.bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb

thanks a loT


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Hi Neha
Old
  (#31)
yoyosimran
Registered User
yoyosimran is a jewel in the roughyoyosimran is a jewel in the roughyoyosimran is a jewel in the rough
 
yoyosimran's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 654
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: DUBAI
Rep Power: 15
Hi Neha - 31st March 2008, 02:46 PM

HI NEHA

KYA LIKHTHE HO YAAR AAP....
BAHUTH ACCHE...!
M A NEW MEMBER....

Mujhe daad dena kuch khaas tho aatha nahin....
Kisi ke dil ko kaise behlaaoo yeh bhi tho aatha nahin...
Lafz gum ho gaye hon jaise tumhare alfaaz dek kar,
Varna is shayar ki mehfil se koi jaatha nahin...


LOVE
SIM


sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai[/quote]
   
Reply With Quote
Frnd 4 Ever
Old
  (#32)
munfairy
Registered User
munfairy is a jewel in the roughmunfairy is a jewel in the roughmunfairy is a jewel in the roughmunfairy is a jewel in the rough
 
munfairy's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 850
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 19
Lightbulb Frnd 4 Ever - 2nd April 2008, 05:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai

Aadab neha ji,
kaise hai aap?

Masha allah bohot khoob,
isi tarah mehfile sajate rahiye.insha allah tarakki dur nahi,

khush rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ


Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )

()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!

**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
`·.¸.·´
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#33)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 8th April 2008, 10:59 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by munfairy View Post
Aadab neha ji,
kaise hai aap?

Masha allah bohot khoob,
isi tarah mehfile sajate rahiye.insha allah tarakki dur nahi,

khush rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ
adab...
i m okthanks
what about u?
thanks a lot dear i will try my best.
u too take care
ALLAH hafiz


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#34)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
8th April 2008, 11:02 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by yoyosimran View Post
HI NEHA

KYA LIKHTHE HO YAAR AAP....
BAHUTH ACCHE...!
M A NEW MEMBER....

Mujhe daad dena kuch khaas tho aatha nahin....
Kisi ke dil ko kaise behlaaoo yeh bhi tho aatha nahin...
Lafz gum ho gaye hon jaise tumhare alfaaz dek kar,
Varna is shayar ki mehfil se koi jaatha nahin...

LOVE
SIM


sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai...........

sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko
ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........

uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen
phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........

tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon
jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai

mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai
uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai
[/quote]


hi...

well come on shayri.com
thanks that u r liking my poetry

Mujhe daad dena kuch khaas tho aatha nahin....
Kisi ke dil ko kaise behlaaoo yeh bhi tho aatha nahin...
Lafz gum ho gaye hon jaise tumhare alfaaz dek kar,
Varna is shayar ki mehfil se koi jaatha nahin...

it is nicenice way to admiring my poetry


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Thx For tHat
Old
  (#35)
13mera7
Registered User
13mera7 will become famous soon enough13mera7 will become famous soon enough
 
13mera7's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 84
Join Date: Dec 2007
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 15
Thx For tHat - 11th April 2008, 02:35 PM




Amit®~~Thunder4all@gmail.com
   
Reply With Quote
pyar me jeete he pyar marte he..................
Old
  (#36)
albela_rose
Registered User
albela_rose is on a distinguished road
 
albela_rose's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 50
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: at rajasthan,in india
Rep Power: 14
pyar me jeete he pyar marte he.................. - 12th April 2008, 11:05 AM

Hi, neha
thnx fr give me reply,main aapka tahdil se shukriya ada karta hoo ki aapne mere reply k liye apna kimti time diya or mujhe shayri.com ka use kese karna he yeh bhi bataya,
main ummid karta hoo ki meri yeh kuch lines apko pasand aayegi.........

koi kehta he pyar nasha ban jaata he,
koi kehta he pyar saza ban jaata he,
pyar karo agar sachche dil se to,
pyar jeene ki wajah ban jaata he.....................

albela_rose
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#37)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 12th April 2008, 08:54 PM


thank u so much


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
Old
  (#38)
Love Neha
Registered User
Love Neha will become famous soon enough
 
Love Neha's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 366
Join Date: Jan 2008
Location: ~*~PAKISTAN...
Rep Power: 14
Smile 12th April 2008, 08:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by albela_rose View Post
Hi, neha
thnx fr give me reply,main aapka tahdil se shukriya ada karta hoo ki aapne mere reply k liye apna kimti time diya or mujhe shayri.com ka use kese karna he yeh bhi bataya,
main ummid karta hoo ki meri yeh kuch lines apko pasand aayegi.........

koi kehta he pyar nasha ban jaata he,
koi kehta he pyar saza ban jaata he,
pyar karo agar sachche dil se to,
pyar jeene ki wajah ban jaata he.....................

albela_rose

ur weLL come
jo stanza apne likha hai its really amazing n nicest'

itna k main ise apne "Love 1" ko dedicate karna chahongi agar apki permission ho tu....

thanks a lot


$...!
   
Reply With Quote
thnx fr give me ur precious time
Old
  (#39)
albela_rose
Registered User
albela_rose is on a distinguished road
 
albela_rose's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 50
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: at rajasthan,in india
Rep Power: 14
thnx fr give me ur precious time - 13th April 2008, 01:36 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
ur weLL come
jo stanza apne likha hai its really amazing n nicest'

itna k main ise apne "Love 1" ko dedicate karna chahongi agar apki permission ho tu....

thanks a lot
Hi, Neha.............,,
aapne meri line padhe k baad jo uski taarif ki he mujhe khushi he ki is duniya me kadar karne waale ab bhi mojud he or aapne kaha ki aap kisi ko yeh dedicate karna chahti he to mujhe khushi hogi ki meri stanza is kaabil bhi he ki kisi ko dedicate bhi ki jaaye isse badhkar mere liye khushi ki kya baat he or main aapko izaazat deta hoo ki aap iska use apni marji se kae sakti he ...............isse khush hokar main kuch line or paish kar raha hoo ummid he aapko pasand aayegi....................?

Hum woh nahi jo aapko naarazgi me chod denge,
Hum who nahi jo aapse nata tod denge,
Hum to who dost he ..agar aapki saanse ruki to
Hum apni saanse jod denge………
albela_rose
   
Reply With Quote
asslam alykum
Old
  (#40)
albela_rose
Registered User
albela_rose is on a distinguished road
 
albela_rose's Avatar
 
Offline
Posts: 50
Join Date: Mar 2008
Location: at rajasthan,in india
Rep Power: 14
asslam alykum - 14th April 2008, 01:50 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Love Neha View Post
ur weLL come
jo stanza apne likha hai its really amazing n nicest'

itna k main ise apne "Love 1" ko dedicate karna chahongi agar apki permission ho tu....

thanks a lot
asslam alykum Neha,
ummid he aap par allah ka karam hoga or aapki dua se hamari dua kabool ho rahi hogi...
ummid he yeh chand ash-aar pasand aayenge

Mohabbat ka ajeeb karobar humne kiya,
Who bewafa sahi magar pyar humne kiya,
Agar woh chadd agye tanha to mat kaho buraunko,
Kasorr unka nahi aitbaar humne kiya………

albela_rose
   
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump

Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Meri Ankho ki Nami Ya Meri Muskurahat anilkr.arora Shayri-e-Dard 2 30th November 2010 12:46 AM
Meri hathon ki lakeer ab meri nahi___ sadiq.a Aapki Shayri 4 27th November 2010 01:17 PM
Kabhi yun bhi aa meri aankh mein ke meri nazar ko khabar na ho Mohammad Kashif Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 0 23rd June 2010 10:01 PM
Mere Khuda, Lauta de meri khushi, meri Mohabbat mujhko TheDemonPrince Shayri-e-Dard 0 29th June 2009 10:43 AM
kis say pochoon meri sakhiyyan.meri guriya,mera bachpun kon la ker day ga Sawerah Hayat Shayri-e-Dard 0 8th May 2003 11:02 AM



Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2021, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com