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Mai khud nu badal dita - 8th December 2007, 11:15 AM

Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya

Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya

Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya

Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya

Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya

Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya







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Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya

Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya

Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya

Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya

Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya

Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya






oya heer tenu kinda sonna likhda hai menu to bahot hi pasand aaya hai oya aange bhi aise hi likhdi rahena maaf karna agar koi bhul ho to mujhe bas itna hi punjabi aata hai
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really great written
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oya heer tenu kinda sonna likhda hai menu to bahot hi pasand aaya hai oya aange bhi aise hi likhdi rahena maaf karna agar koi bhul ho to mujhe bas itna hi punjabi aata hai

Thx Krenil ji ke aapne ne iss poem ko like kiya and mujhe punjabi ne reply dene ki koshish ki, Thx again to read this poem



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really great written
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Hello Amit ji

Thx to spend your costly time for this poem, and also thx to like this



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Sach dasa tuhadi reply dekh ke bahut hi khushi hundi hai, Thank u ke tusi punjabi poetry vi read karde ho, mere varge nu reply den liya aapna kimati time dende ho, tuhada teh dilo dhanwaad




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heer ji SSA,
bhut hi khushi hoee ke thodi kalm fir to uth khloee, mein hmesha hi thodi poem de intjar vich rehnda han, thanku so much heer ji, punjabi poetry vich jldi vapsi kreo
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heer ji SSA,
bhut hi khushi hoee ke thodi kalm fir to uth khloee, mein hmesha hi thodi poem de intjar vich rehnda han, thanku so much heer ji, punjabi poetry vich jldi vapsi kreo
Thx Preet ji, aapna kimti time spend karan liye and reply den liye




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bahut khoob HEER,tusi shabda da ajeha reshmi jaal bunde ho ki read karan vala bas fisalda hi janda hai te qaid ho ke reh janda hai.har bhav komal te sada jeha. likde reha karo .

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bahut khoob HEER,tusi shabda da ajeha reshmi jaal bunde ho ki read karan vala bas fisalda hi janda hai te qaid ho ke reh janda hai.har bhav komal te sada jeha. likde reha karo .

o mere malik sukar hai tera ke ajj ta is mehfil de mashoor shyar bhi hajir han, Thank u dost ke tusi aapna costly costly time sade varge loka liye vi spend kita,
jis poem nu iss mehfil de sare hi good poet reply de ke tareef kar den, oh poem taa aapne aap sohni ho jandi hai,




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Love Hello Punjaban Heer .. Sajan - 23rd December 2007, 08:51 PM

Heer g Bahut Badhiya,
Heer g Sab kutch Badal ditya par Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki .kini sohni line hai ye.
keep it up carry on....






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Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya

Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya

Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya

Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya

Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya

Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya






   
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Heer g Bahut Badhiya,
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kini sohni line hai ye.
keep it up carry on....

Thank u Sajan ji ke iss poem nu like karan liye, and ethe samil hon liye


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[QUOTE=aman khan;263359]o'heer tuci kedi galla karde ho.acci tuanu naal heinge ji.Itni Udaas kyoon ho
Seriously Aapne Bahut hi Achchi Poem Likhi hai.Mujhe to bahut pasand aaye.Magar pata nahi kyoon ic ko padh ke Aisa kyoon Laga ke Aap kuch udaas hein.Come On Heer Panjabi to Bahut Zinda Dil Hote hein.yeh Shayri.com Ek Family ki Tarha Hai.Ic ko join karne wala Akela Nahi Rehta.Hum Sab Aapke Saath Hein.Keep Smile
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Seriously Aapne Bahut hi Achchi Poem Likhi hai.Mujhe to bahut pasand aaye.Magar pata nahi kyoon ic ko padh ke Aisa kyoon Laga ke Aap kuch udaas hein.Come On Heer Panjabi to Bahut Zinda Dil Hote hein.yeh Shayri.com Ek Family ki Tarha Hai.Ic ko join karne wala Akela Nahi Rehta.Hum Sab Aapke Saath Hein.Keep Smile

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Heer ji Ek bahut hi wadhia poem read karan nu mili, tusi bahut hi sohna likhea hai.

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Heer ji Ek bahut hi wadhia poem read karan nu mili, tusi bahut hi sohna likhea hai.

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sat sri akal heer,
mein poetry di duniya ch ik naya kadardan han....mein samjhda haan ki tusi changa likhde ho n always write like this.....also promote these on other social sites also....
and we can see punjabi poetry again gaining new heights......

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Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya

Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya

Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya

Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya

Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya

Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya




   
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Heere, bahut sohna likheya hamesha wang..
loki kehnde ....
" ni heere ni heere,
teryan dukhan da maara ranjha jogi hoyea.."
par mainu ethe kam putha hi lagda,
ethe tan lagda ranjhe ne dukhi kita te
heer jogan ho gyi aa,
enni udassi is not so good for health.. take care..


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Bdlde waqt naal main Insaan Badlde dekhe ne...
kuch palan ch Loki apni pehchan badlde dekhe ne....
Har ik nu Badln di lagi hoi hai iss duniya ch,
Neein v main hanjuan ton Muskaan badlde dekhe ne.....


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Heere, bahut sohna likheya hamesha wang..
loki kehnde ....
" ni heere ni heere,
teryan dukhan da maara ranjha jogi hoyea.."
par mainu ethe kam putha hi lagda,
ethe tan lagda ranjhe ne dukhi kita te
heer jogan ho gyi aa,
enni udassi is not so good for health.. take care..
thank u very much rupi ji, tuhadi iss reply layi

some time udassi is also make u perfect


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Bdlde waqt naal main Insaan Badlde dekhe ne...
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Har ik nu Badln di lagi hoi hai iss duniya ch,
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for ur poetry.....ur poetry is very true to reality

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bohat pyara likhya badlan bare.
sanu v sikha de kinj badlain apni soch nu main,
ke hun hor mere toin hijar di peed handai naio jani

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sat sri akal heer,
mein poetry di duniya ch ik naya kadardan han....mein samjhda haan ki tusi changa likhde ho n always write like this.....also promote these on other social sites also....
and we can see punjabi poetry again gaining new heights......

Thanks simmer ji, tuhadi iss reply layi


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Aaj bahut din baad Online hua hoon..Lagbhag 1 Saal baad...aapka reply padha.Achcha laga...Thanks Heer...Suno..
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Kujh door ho gaya si maiN SDC toN. Deep atey Heer diyaaN nazmaaN mainu fer waapis lai aandaa. Bahut hi wadhiyaa likhia hai. Wasdey raho


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Kujh door ho gaya si maiN SDC toN. Deep atey Heer diyaaN nazmaaN mainu fer waapis lai aandaa. Bahut hi wadhiyaa likhia hai. Wasdey raho
Thank u very much Tilak ji for this beautiful reply.
bahut hi khushi di gall aa ke iss punjabi poetry di mehfil ne tuhanu waapis lai aaanda, Umeed aa ke tuhadi iss mehfil ch hazari lagdi rahegi

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