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Exclamation **~*Mera Pyaar,Mera Har Armaan Ho Tum*~** - 25th February 2006, 04:18 PM
bazm ko mera salaam...

khushboo banke mehko tum yuhin meri saanson me...dhadkan banke dhadko tum yuhin mere dil me....khwaab banke chamko tum yuhin meri aankhon me...pyaar na ho yeh khatm kabhi....kuch yoon sama jaao meri jaan me.... ke...Mera pyaar,mera har armaan ho tum.............. @}-;
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Dil ki har dhadkan pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai
dhadkan ki har ek saaz pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam
Har ayk khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai

Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj
Har ik sitaare ki kirnon pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte jaanam
Har chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......!

"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."

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Re: **~*Mera Pyaar,Mera Har Armaan Ho Tum*~** - 25th February 2006, 04:24 PM
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bazm ko mera salaam...

khushboo banke mehko tum yuhin meri saanson me...dhadkan banke dhadko tum yuhin mere dil me....khwaab banke chamko tum yuhin meri aankhon me...pyaar na ho yeh khatm kabhi....kuch yoon sama jaao meri jaan me.... ke...Mera pyaar,mera har armaan ho tum.............. @}-;
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Dil ki har dhadkan pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai
dhadkan ki har ek saaz pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam
Har ayk khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai

Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj
Har ik sitaare ki kirnon pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte jaanam
Har chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......!
Farhana Ji,
Aapke lajawaab lafzon ki taareef ke liye shabdon ki kami parhrahi hai mujhe,.
Khair, likhtey rahiyega....aapka dhanyavaad

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farhana - 25th February 2006, 04:25 PM
bahut achha bahut khoob

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

wah achha hai
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25th February 2006, 04:43 PM
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25th February 2006, 04:59 PM
my lovely faru
hmmmmmmmm first mere sawal koun hai ji ?

hehehehehe

ye sher bhaut achha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

bhaut hi ghraaee k saath tumne apne jazbon ko alfazz diye hume psand aaye

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Re: Re: **~*Mera Pyaar,Mera Har Armaan Ho Tum*~** - 25th February 2006, 05:59 PM
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Farhana Ji,
Aapke lajawaab lafzon ki taareef ke liye shabdon ki kami parhrahi hai mujhe,.
Khair, likhtey rahiyega....aapka dhanyavaad

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mera kalaam aapko itna pasand aaya jaanke bahaut khushi horahi hai mujhe.........aapka saath aage bhi yuhin milta raha toh zarur likhti rahungi..khyaal rakhiyega apna.

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Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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Re: farhana - 25th February 2006, 06:51 PM
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bahut achha bahut khoob

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

wah achha hai
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thank u verymuch anil sahab..........aapko kalaam pasand aaya jaanke khushi hui..........yuhin aate rahiyega........
aapse mehfil me jaan hai...

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25th February 2006, 07:29 PM
TeRe NaAm
gana yaad aa gaya mujhe to


sacch bahut hi pyaara likkha hai tumne...


"Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai"

sabse khoobsoorat line




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wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...

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25th February 2006, 09:29 PM
awsomee...
it was wonderful to read...
really nice...
take care

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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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26th February 2006, 12:03 AM
Farhana Jee Aadab!

Farhana ji behad umda likha hai aapne , dil se likhi ye dastaan tareef-e-kabill hai ...

likhte raho
yun hi muskurate raho..

i liked these lines the most :-

Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj
Har ik sitaare ki kirnon pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte jaanam
Har chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......!


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26th February 2006, 11:42 AM
Farahana....

Kya khoob likha hai tum ne.. Such mai kamaal kar diya.... Koyi shbd hi nahi mil raha hai yaar.... aur ye do sher ke to kahne hio kya.. Aise lag raheN haiN Jaise SitaaroN ke bich Chandrama ho... par tum ne bataaya nahi kis ka naam likha hai

Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam
Har ayk khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Likhti Raho..

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26th February 2006, 12:54 PM
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hmmmmm mujhe bhi bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut bahaut khushi hui hai jo tumne kalaam ko tareefe kaabil samjha..aate rehna sweetu.

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26th February 2006, 12:56 PM
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my lovely faru
hmmmmmmmm first mere sawal koun hai ji ?

hehehehehe

ye sher bhaut achha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

bhaut hi ghraaee k saath tumne apne jazbon ko alfazz diye hume psand aaye

shrdh

meri jaan..tum aayi accha laga...kalaam ki tareef ki tumne toh aur bhi accha laga.

yuhin aati raha karo hamesha....accha lagta hai tumhara saath sweets.

"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
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26th February 2006, 01:01 PM
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gana yaad aa gaya mujhe to


sacch bahut hi pyaara likkha hai tumne...


"Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai"

sabse khoobsoorat line




take care dear
dear shweta.....mein wahi sochrahi thi ke meri pyaari si bulbul abtak kyun nahi ayi meri post pe...tumhare bina soona soona lagta hai mera kalaam...pasand karne ke liye shukriya sweets...aati rehna...

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26th February 2006, 01:09 PM
nikal ke tere bahoN ke ghere se...
jauN to jauN maiN kahaN..
fisal ke tere jism se boond ban...
mitti maiN mil jauN kahaN...
har raat safar karta hun tere sang..
aur berang safar pe jauN kahaN..

pyaari faru...

Kis jazbaat pe nisaandehi karuN .. ye sab apne hi to haiN... sabse yahi kehta hua aaaya huN .. ki shayri wahi hai jisme apna aks dikhaye de .. aue isme to aks mera hi mera hai ....shayad yahi sacchi shayri hai .. jo dil se dil ke beech ankahi hoti hai .. par iske alfaaz door door tak sune ja sakte haiN .. itne ubhre hue jazbatoN ne ye subah chamka di hai .. tum yuN hi likhti rehna ... aur pyar maiN khoyi rehna

tumhara apna

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26th February 2006, 03:43 PM
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mujhe aaj mauqa milaa aap ki is ghazel ko parhne ka.
in 2 ashaar ne mujhe chaukaayaa.

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.!

bohat hi gehri mager bohat pur asr baat aur bohat sahel andaaz mein bayaan ki aap ne.
aap ke yeh uthaan dekhte huey mein keh sakta hoon ke aap aayeinda is se bhi behter likhein gi,
bohat khoob farhana, meri bharpoor daad qabool karein.

God bless you.

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26th February 2006, 05:54 PM
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take care
hi karthik..how r u doin sweets...
im glad u liked the kalaam....
do keep coming sweets..and take care alwaz...
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26th February 2006, 05:56 PM
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Farhana Jee Aadab!

Farhana ji behad umda likha hai aapne , dil se likhi ye dastaan tareef-e-kabill hai ...

likhte raho
yun hi muskurate raho..

i liked these lines the most :-

Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj
Har ik sitaare ki kirnon pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte jaanam
Har chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......!

dear khozi sahab...
kaise hain aap?aapko apni post pe dekhke bada accha lagraha hai...kalaam ko aapne tareefe kaabil samjha yeh meri khushnaseebi hai hai..
yuhin aindah bhi aate rahiyega..mere kalaam ko aapka intezaar rahega........shukriya


khoziii....

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26th February 2006, 06:13 PM
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sabse pahle main upar wale ka shukriya ada karna chahunga.ki aap ne mujh gareeb ke liye jeene ka aasra banaya ye shayri.com. aur mujhko meri bahan ke roop me aap milin.sach kahoon to mujhe khud par naaz hai jo mujhe aap jaisi bahen milin.jo ki itna pyara likhti hain ki har koi unka pankha hai.aap likhte rahiye hum padhte rahenge.take care .allah hafiz
mere pyaare shoaib..kaise ho tum?
tum jabbhi mere kalaam pe aate ho dil baagh baagh hojata hai....
itni tareef mat kiya karo meri aur mere kalaamon ki....hehe
chane ke jhaad pe mat chadhaya karo mujhe tum....
tumhara aana hi mere liye kaafi hai...
khush raho sada.

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Re: **~*Mera Pyaar,Mera Har Armaan Ho Tum*~** - 26th February 2006, 06:35 PM
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bazm ko mera salaam...

khushboo banke mehko tum yuhin meri saanson me...dhadkan banke dhadko tum yuhin mere dil me....khwaab banke chamko tum yuhin meri aankhon me...pyaar na ho yeh khatm kabhi....kuch yoon sama jaao meri jaan me.... ke...Mera pyaar,mera har armaan ho tum.............. @}-;
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Dil ki har dhadkan pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai
dhadkan ki har ek saaz pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam
Har ayk khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai

Ugh bhi jaye aasmaan mein dheron chand aur sooraj
Har ik sitaare ki kirnon pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Ruk bhi jaayein saansein meri chalte chalte jaanam
Har chalti rukti saans pay bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.......!
"Ye badale mosam k mizaz hamein raas aane lage hai,kush hai ki patjhad bhi ab basant ki dhun gungunane lage hai" Padh li Acha laga padhkar tumko..Aur khushi bhi hui..Kya baat hai ye ek phool hai wo bhi gulab ka jiski khushboo hamein yaha tak le aayi hai..Apna khayal rakhiyega..Yuhi likhti rahiye Izajat
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26th February 2006, 06:48 PM
Aapse milna chahta hun,
dil ki baat batana chahta hun,
aap itna accha likhti hain ke ...
ke sab sab kuch bhula ke aapko hi sunna chahta hun .....

it was really nice
bye TC

Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)

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27th February 2006, 12:59 AM
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Farahana....

Kya khoob likha hai tum ne.. Such mai kamaal kar diya.... Koyi shbd hi nahi mil raha hai yaar.... aur ye do sher ke to kahne hio kya.. Aise lag raheN haiN Jaise SitaaroN ke bich Chandrama ho... par tum ne bataaya nahi kis ka naam likha hai

Khil bhi jaayen hazaaron phool baaghon mein sanam
Har ayk khiltay phool pay bas tumhaara naam likkha hai

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Likhti Raho..

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dear mayank..kaise ho??tumhe apme kalaam pe dekhke bada accha lagraha hai...ab tumhe kya bataun kiska naam likkha hai..hai ik naam jo ab takdeer hai meri....tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke dil ko sukoon mila..aate rehna yuhin.

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27th February 2006, 01:04 AM
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nikal ke tere bahoN ke ghere se...
jauN to jauN maiN kahaN..
fisal ke tere jism se boond ban...
mitti maiN mil jauN kahaN...
har raat safar karta hun tere sang..
aur berang safar pe jauN kahaN..

pyaari faru...

Kis jazbaat pe nisaandehi karuN .. ye sab apne hi to haiN... sabse yahi kehta hua aaaya huN .. ki shayri wahi hai jisme apna aks dikhaye de .. aue isme to aks mera hi mera hai ....shayad yahi sacchi shayri hai .. jo dil se dil ke beech ankahi hoti hai .. par iske alfaaz door door tak sune ja sakte haiN .. itne ubhre hue jazbatoN ne ye subah chamka di hai .. tum yuN hi likhti rehna ... aur pyar maiN khoyi rehna

tumhara apna

kunal
mere pyaare kunal....

tum toh jaante ho ki tumhe yahan dekhke mujhe kitna khushi milrahi hai...tumhare bina toh mera kalaam poora adhoora tha...ab tum aagye ho toh likhna safal hogaya mera...
tumhara sher sach bahaut hi pyaara laga...bahaut hi nazuk khyaal bahaut hi khoobsoorat andaaz me...dil ko bhaa gaya...apna khyaal rakhna sweetu...aur haan yuhin aajaya karo..kyunki tum jaante hona ke mera likhna adhura hai tumhare bina.khush raho sweets...

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27th February 2006, 01:54 PM
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farhana

mujhe aaj mauqa milaa aap ki is ghazel ko parhne ka.
in 2 ashaar ne mujhe chaukaayaa.

Dhal bhi jaaye umar ke saath mera ye jism magar
Mere rooh ke har hisse pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai

Khatm bhi hojaye zindagi yunhi ik roz meri jaan lekin
Is zindagi kay har pal pe bas tumhara naam likkha hai.!

bohat hi gehri mager bohat pur asr baat aur bohat sahel andaaz mein bayaan ki aap ne.
aap ke yeh uthaan dekhte huey mein keh sakta hoon ke aap aayeinda is se bhi behter likhein gi,
bohat khoob farhana, meri bharpoor daad qabool karein.

God bless you.

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musharraf sahab,

kaise hain aap?aapko kaafi arse baad apne kalaam pe dekhke bahaut khushi horahi hai sach me...aapne mere kalaam ko tarif ke kaabil samjha yeh meri khusnaseebi hai...aapke kalaam pe aane se mera likhna saarthak hogaya....
aap sabhi ke pyaar aur duawon ka nateeja jo aaj mei kuch behtar likhne lagi hoon...inshallah aur bhi behtar likhoon yeh meri koshish rahegi.aap yuhin aajaya kariye..accha laga aapko dekhke yahan.

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Re: Re: **~*Mera Pyaar,Mera Har Armaan Ho Tum*~** - 27th February 2006, 01:59 PM
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"Ye badale mosam k mizaz hamein raas aane lage hai,kush hai ki patjhad bhi ab basant ki dhun gungunane lage hai" Padh li Acha laga padhkar tumko..Aur khushi bhi hui..Kya baat hai ye ek phool hai wo bhi gulab ka jiski khushboo hamein yaha tak le aayi hai..Apna khayal rakhiyega..Yuhi likhti rahiye Izajat
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shukriya tumhara jo tumne mujhe padhne ka waqt nikaala...jabbhi tumhe apni post pe dekhti hoon..naaz hota hai ke diggaj mera dost hai jo hamesha mere har post pe mera saath dee ajata hai....khushi hoti hai...shukriya.apna khyaal rakhna tum...aur khush rehna sada.

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Aapse milna chahta hun,
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aap itna accha likhti hain ke ...
ke sab sab kuch bhula ke aapko hi sunna chahta hun .....

it was really nice
bye TC
waah kya sher kehdiya tumne...bahaut khoob..subhanallah.
tumhe kalaam pasand aaya jaanke khuhsi hui....padhne ke liye shukriya dost....apna khyaal rakkho.

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