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uski yaad ko lekar - 27th May 2008, 02:57 PM

Pane se jyada khona acha hai
Ansoo bahane se jyada rona acha hai
Har wakt tadapte hai uski yaad ko lekar
Inse to humesha ke liye so jana acha hai


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Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
   
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Pane se jyada khona acha hai
Ansoo bahane se jyada rona acha hai
Har wakt tadapte hai uski yaad ko lekar
Inse to humesha ke liye so jana acha hai
dinesh bhai bahut khoob..........!


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Pane se jyada khona acha hai
Ansoo bahane se jyada rona acha hai
Har wakt tadapte hai uski yaad ko lekar
Inse to humesha ke liye so jana acha hai
Dinesh ji..

Likha to bahut khoob hai aapne.. lekin lagta hai ishq me naumeed hoke aapne aisa likha.. to dost main aapke hi words ko aapse aisa kehna chaahugi..

Pane se jyada khona acha hai
Ansoo bahane se jyada rona acha hai
Har wakt tadapte hai uski yaad ko lekar
Unse milne ki chaah me khud ko bhul jana acha hai..

Think Positive Dinesh ji.. things would turn out gr8 for u!

Take Care..

~Priya



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Dinesh ji..

Likha to bahut khoob hai aapne.. lekin lagta hai ishq me naumeed hoke aapne aisa likha.. to dost main aapke hi words ko aapse aisa kehna chaahugi..

Pane se jyada khona acha hai
Ansoo bahane se jyada rona acha hai
Har wakt tadapte hai uski yaad ko lekar
Unse milne ki chaah me khud ko bhul jana acha hai..

Think Positive Dinesh ji.. things would turn out gr8 for u!

Take Care..

~Priya
haan apka likha huva bilkul sahi hai ye bhi ho sakta hai per mene likha tha shayad mere liye vahi acha tha isi liye mene akhir me aisa likh diya tha.
aur reply ke liye bahut bahut shukriya apka aur apne jo kaha muje bahut acha laga

jisko yaad karke tadapta tha
aaj vo kisi aur ke paas hai
unse do pal kya dur ho gaye
jo aaj uske dil me kisi aur ka ehshash hai


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