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5th June 2005, 06:29 PM
ruthe-2 kahan baithe ho pata to likh diya hota,
dil lagane ka bahana ek hame bhi duya hota, ya to aisa zakhm de jate jo ki nasoor ban jata, uske dard ne tumhari yaad ko kuch kam kiya hota, hamari jaan par bani hai or tumhe khabar nahi, kisi ke jeene marne ka kuch khayal to kiya hota, hum to jeete hain tera hi naam le-2 kar, tumne bhi hamara naam kabhi liya hota..... |
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5th June 2005, 06:57 PM
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welcome to this family. well reading u for the first time. nice to read ur thoughts.keep flowing ur thoughts n keep writing ahead too. looking forward to read more of ur posts here. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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6th June 2005, 12:06 AM
hi gagan ji,
welcome to the site and family...hope you enjoy your stay here...abt your poem...it is superb ad charming..bohot accha likha hai keep writing take care bye »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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