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Wo jo mere naam ka ek shaks tha.... - 1st September 2014, 10:14 PM

Dhoond ke laa do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya …wo jo mere naam ka ek shaks tha…
Bahut dhunda use…. Ghar aangan yaha tak ki bazaro main….
Nahi mila, lagta hai.. kho gaya kahin.. waqt ke aandehiyaaron main…

Wo befikr si hansi… wo masumiyat.. wo bholapan…
Chup ke reh gaya kahi… chehron ke nakaabo main…
Maa ka aanchal… Babul ka aangan….
Kahin uljaah ke reh gaya… Zindagi ke sawaloon main….

Wo dosti ki kasme… sath nibhane ki rasmein…
Kurban hue sab… sapno ko sajane main…
Wo mausam ki bahar… wo apno ka pyar…
Ab dum todtta … ghar ki char diwaron main….

Aaj Mujh main… Main nahi… Koi aur hai ye jo reh raha….
Aur kisi ke kya kahe… khud aaina mujhse keh raha….
Wo jo mera wajood tha.. ab sirf humsaya-humsaya hi reh gaya…
Khud main khud ko dhundta… mrug-trishna sa ho gaya......

Aankho se beparwah behta hua… wo ek asq tha….
Samay ki ret per likha hua… wo mera naqsh tha….
Dhoond ke la do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya … wo jo mere naam ka ek saks tha…


Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
Suno… Aie… Zindagi…..
Is bar jate jate….
Jara milti jana……

   
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Love Welcome Back Ruchika ji - 1st September 2014, 10:29 PM

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Dhoond ke laa do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya …wo jo mere naam ka ek shaks tha…
Bahut dhunda use…. Ghar aangan yaha tak ki bazaro main….
Nahi mila, lagta hai.. kho gaya kahin.. waqt ke aandehiyaaron main…

Wo befikr si hansi… wo masumiyat.. wo bholapan…
Chup ke reh gaya kahi… chehron ke nakaabo main…
Maa ka aanchal… Babul ka aangan….
Kahin uljaah ke reh gaya… Zindagi ke sawaloon main….

Wo dosti ki kasme… sath nibhane ki rasmein…
Kurban hue sab… sapno ko sajane main…
Wo mausam ki bahar… wo apno ka pyar…
Ab dum todtta … ghar ki char diwaron main….

Aaj Mujh main… Main nahi… Koi aur hai ye jo reh raha….
Aur kisi ke kya kahe… khud aaina mujhse keh raha….
Wo jo mera wajood tha.. ab sirf humsaya-humsaya hi reh gaya…
Khud main khud ko dhundta… mrug-trishna sa ho gaya......

Aankho se beparwah behta hua… wo ek asq tha….
Samay ki ret per likha hua… wo mera naqsh tha….
Dhoond ke la do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya … wo jo mere naam ka ek saks tha…


Ruchika ji namaskaar

aapko bahut waqt ke baad SDC par dekh kar accha lga....kaisi hai aap ?

aapne jo ahsaas hamare saaths hare kiye ham unko ba-khoobi samaj sakte hai...accha lga aapko padna, aati rha kijiye




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1st September 2014, 11:21 PM

Wo befikr si hansi… wo masumiyat.. wo bholapan…
Chup ke reh gaya kahi… chehron ke nakaabo main…
Maa ka aanchal… Babul ka aangan….
Kahin uljaah ke reh gaya… Zindagi ke sawaloon main….

Ruchika jii,,

Ehsaasaat se bharpoor aap ki yeH nazm humeN bohat acchi lagi..!
teh-e-dil se nikli dherooN daad ki nazraana qabool kejiye...

Likhte rahiye,
Aate rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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17th September 2014, 04:18 PM

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Dhoond ke laa do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya …wo jo mere naam ka ek shaks tha…
Bahut dhunda use…. Ghar aangan yaha tak ki bazaro main….
Nahi mila, lagta hai.. kho gaya kahin.. waqt ke aandehiyaaron main…

Wo befikr si hansi… wo masumiyat.. wo bholapan…
Chup ke reh gaya kahi… chehron ke nakaabo main…
Maa ka aanchal… Babul ka aangan….
Kahin uljaah ke reh gaya… Zindagi ke sawaloon main….

Wo dosti ki kasme… sath nibhane ki rasmein…
Kurban hue sab… sapno ko sajane main…
Wo mausam ki bahar… wo apno ka pyar…
Ab dum todtta … ghar ki char diwaron main….

Aaj Mujh main… Main nahi… Koi aur hai ye jo reh raha….
Aur kisi ke kya kahe… khud aaina mujhse keh raha….
Wo jo mera wajood tha.. ab sirf humsaya-humsaya hi reh gaya…
Khud main khud ko dhundta… mrug-trishna sa ho gaya......

Aankho se beparwah behta hua… wo ek asq tha….
Samay ki ret per likha hua… wo mera naqsh tha….
Dhoond ke la do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya … wo jo mere naam ka ek saks tha…
Waah Ruchika ji waah...beautifully written.
Rgds,
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17th September 2014, 04:34 PM

Ruchika jee.,kya khoobsurat nazm likhi hai aapne.........ehsaason se bharpur ek kaamyaab nazm.



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Dhoond ke laa do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya …wo jo mere naam ka ek shaks tha…
Bahut dhunda use…. Ghar aangan yaha tak ki bazaro main….
Nahi mila, lagta hai.. kho gaya kahin.. waqt ke aandehiyaaron main…

Wo befikr si hansi… wo masumiyat.. wo bholapan…
Chup ke reh gaya kahi… chehron ke nakaabo main…
Maa ka aanchal… Babul ka aangan….
Kahin uljaah ke reh gaya… Zindagi ke sawaloon main….

Wo dosti ki kasme… sath nibhane ki rasmein…
Kurban hue sab… sapno ko sajane main…
Wo mausam ki bahar… wo apno ka pyar…
Ab dum todtta … ghar ki char diwaron main….

Aaj Mujh main… Main nahi… Koi aur hai ye jo reh raha….
Aur kisi ke kya kahe… khud aaina mujhse keh raha….
Wo jo mera wajood tha.. ab sirf humsaya-humsaya hi reh gaya…
Khud main khud ko dhundta… mrug-trishna sa ho gaya......

Aankho se beparwah behta hua… wo ek asq tha….
Samay ki ret per likha hua… wo mera naqsh tha….
Dhoond ke la do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya … wo jo mere naam ka ek saks tha…
Aaj pahli baar aapko padne ka mauka mila ruchika ji...
Bahut achche lagi aapki nazm...bahut achchi tarah bayaan huye hain zazbaat.....dheron daad dil se..



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Dhoond ke laa do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya …wo jo mere naam ka ek shaks tha…
Bahut dhunda use…. Ghar aangan yaha tak ki bazaro main….
Nahi mila, lagta hai.. kho gaya kahin.. waqt ke aandehiyaaron main…

Wo befikr si hansi… wo masumiyat.. wo bholapan…
Chup ke reh gaya kahi… chehron ke nakaabo main…
Maa ka aanchal… Babul ka aangan….
Kahin uljaah ke reh gaya… Zindagi ke sawaloon main….

Wo dosti ki kasme… sath nibhane ki rasmein…
Kurban hue sab… sapno ko sajane main…
Wo mausam ki bahar… wo apno ka pyar…
Ab dum todtta … ghar ki char diwaron main….

Aaj Mujh main… Main nahi… Koi aur hai ye jo reh raha….
Aur kisi ke kya kahe… khud aaina mujhse keh raha….
Wo jo mera wajood tha.. ab sirf humsaya-humsaya hi reh gaya…
Khud main khud ko dhundta… mrug-trishna sa ho gaya......

Aankho se beparwah behta hua… wo ek asq tha….
Samay ki ret per likha hua… wo mera naqsh tha….
Dhoond ke la do use… wo jo mera aks tha…
Aaj jaane kaha kho gaya … wo jo mere naam ka ek saks tha…

Ahhhh kitnaa dard hai isme , kitnii shiddat se bayaan kiyaa hai aapne haale dil ruchika jii...... iski tareef me kuch kahnaa kam hoga..... bas yahi chaahte hain ke aap likhti rahen ur apne ehsaason se hame rubaroo karaatii rahen.... khush rahiye

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Jazbaaton ko pasand karne ke liye ... aap sabka ka tahe-dil se sukriya.......Thanks


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