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18th December 2012, 04:28 PM
As suggested, now on wards we will create an introduction thread at the end of every year, so that all the new and old members may be able to know each other even better, so that anyone and everyone, being regular at that point of time could be noted down...... I am keeping the larger part of the format as it is, with the addition of a few things, which I think would be nice...So people what are you all waiting for...?? So lets start knowing each other hoping that the world won't end on the 21st... , I think the best start to this will be a Sunita Varinder di, as she is the member with the maximum number of posts to her name... Moreover i would also request the mods to tell us about the seniority and activities about the old members, as per their number of posts and reputation points, that will actually enhance the amount of information...
About yourself...let People Know You Better...
All the members of shayri.com, please Let me & other Know about You In Detail... Thanks in advance!
Please Mention the Following-------------
Forum Name-
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)-
Sex-
Abode-
Birthday:
Sun Sign:
Favorite Drink:
Favorite Food:
Favorite book:
What you hate:
What you love:
Movies-
Music-
About You-
Hobbies-
Interests-
Secret Desire-
One word/phrase u use regularly:
Memorable moment:
Special Thing about You-
A Picture, Which Resembles You-
Favorite Shayar-
Favorite Shayar on SDC-
Favorite Sher or lines-
Favorite Song-
How You came to know about the website-
Your favorite form of reading or writing-
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you-
Whom you had read here before registration and why-
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members)
SDC pe aapka sabse qareebi ya sabse ahcha dost kaun hai,
aap kin kin logon se SDC ke personally mile haiN...
Two lines for this great place, i mean our shayri.com
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18th December 2012, 09:06 PM
Dear Lucky (Taish jii), ham aik baar phir aapke saamne hai, to lijiye sahiib aapke pooche gye sawalaat ke jawaab hazir hai
Forum Name- Sunita Virender
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Sunita Thakur
Sex- Female
Abode- Chandigarh
Birthday: certificates meiN 11th july par asal meiN 20th July
(20th july ko mere bhai ki death hue thi mere birth se kuch saal pahle to ghar waloN ne 20th ki bajaye 11th july likhwa diya)
Sun Sign: Cancer
Favorite Drink: Water
Favorite Food: Raajmah + Chawal, Makki ki roti + sarsoN ka saag saath meiN lassi
Favorite book: waqt aur umr ke hisaab se padne ki pasand bhi badalti rehti hai
What you hate: jooth aur baat baat par jooth bolne wale log
What you love: apni family aur frndz
Movies- Pakiza, Pinjar vaise aur bhi kai hai par yeh top par hai
Music- old songs, jagjit ji ki gaaye gazleN and punjabi folk song
About You- dil ki baat har kisi ko nahi bata paati, 1-2 khaas dost hai meri jo mere bare meiN sab jaanti hai, ab meri betiyaa bhi badi ho gye hai unke saath bhi har baat share karti hu. yehi koshish rehti hai ki meri vajha se koi dukhi na ho, apni khushi baanti hu sabse...jaldi gussa nahi karti, agar gussa aa b jaaye to gusse meiN kuch bolti nahi hu ya yoon kahiye ki bola hi nahi jaata...jab sab normal ho jaata hai tab saamne wale se kahti hu ki aapki wo baat muje bahut buri lagi thi
Hobbies- chitchat section meiN games khelna, ghar meiN jo plants lagaye hai unki dekh-bhaal karna, goomna bahut accha lagta hai aur Shopping
Interests- poetry padna uar kabhi kabaar kuch likh bhi lena, soft music, driving.
Secret Desire- ab to koi secret nahi hai...bas bacche accha pad likh jaaye yehi desire hai ab to
One word/phrase u use regularly: leave it...
Memorable moment: jab maine pahli baar apni bitiyaa ko uthaya tha aur aik khaas baat kal meri usi bitiyaa ka janamdin bhi hai
Special Thing about You- yeh to aapko batani chahiye na mere bare meiN...vaise mere frndz jo kahte hai wo maiN bataye deti hoon
Honest, bhagwaan ko maanti hu, jo bhi kaam karti hu dil se karti hu, khaana accha banati hu (yeh mere frndz kahti hai jo roz mere saath lunch karti hai)
A Picture, Which Resembles You- meri pic mere avtar meiN lagi hai usi ko dekh lijiye us se jayada to koi aur kya hogi
Favorite Shayar- vaise to sabhi shayar muje pasand hai par Faraz sahiib, Nida Fazili ji, Javed akhtar ji, sudarshan fakir jii, parveen shakiir khaas hai.
Favorite Shayar on SDC- yoon to sabhi acche shayar hai yahan par kuch naam aise hai jinka likha hua padna behad pasand hai, jaise ki Top par hai Maikash ji.....Paras dii, Danny bhaiyaa (MUshkil ji), Masoom shayar (Anil ji), Kasak, Palavi, Mast bhai (ANU ji) Taish Sahiib (Lucky), Acharya manoj ji, Manoj Khureel ji, Janumanu (Vikas), Diggaj dave, Harash Mahajan, Kshitiz, Mujeeb, Chottu (Dhaval), Zainy, Rashid Rahi, Uffaq ji, Hassan bhai, Prashant vsal ji, Rajveer ji, Shoaib, Ahmad Shakeel, Ahmad Hyderabaadi, Akant ji, Vipan ji, Sumit anjaan, Aslam Noor Noor ji, Barjinder Saagar ji, Chaand ji, Late Sharabi ji, Dheer, Diya jale, Fezan ji, Naresh bhai, Pooja_D, Kunaal (sifar), Mohamad Khasif ji, Zidd ji, Late Sanjoo ji, Shardda jain
Favorite Sher or lines-
"यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया,
के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए........!"
Favorite Song- Kabhi kisi ko mukamal yahan nahi milta, kahin zameeN to kahin aasmaaN nahi milta...!
How You came to know about the website- shayri doondte hue yeh site mil gye....aur ham yehi ke ho kar reh gye
Your favorite form of reading or writing- Gazal, Sher aur song
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you-
yeh rha link......
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=62261
"Yaad Aaye Bahut"
“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,
hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,
mushkil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,
jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,
umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,
mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,
kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.
(22.08.2008)
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2012, 09:46 PM
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Dear Lucky (Taish jii), ham aik baar phir aapke saamne hai, to lijiye sahiib aapke pooche gye sawalaat ke jawaab hazir hai
Forum Name- Sunita Virender
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Sunita Thakur
Sex- Female
Abode- Chandigarh
Birthday: certificates meiN 11th july par asal meiN 20th July
(20th july ko mere bhai ki death hue thi mere birth se kuch saal pahle to ghar waloN ne 20th ki bajaye 11th july likhwa diya)
Sun Sign: Cancer
Favorite Drink: Water
Favorite Food: Raajmah + Chawal, Makki ki roti + sarsoN ka saag saath meiN lassi
Favorite book: waqt aur umr ke hisaab se padne ki pasand bhi badalti rehti hai
What you hate: jooth aur baat baat par jooth bolne wale log
What you love: apni family aur frndz
Movies- Pakiza, Pinjar vaise aur bhi kai hai par yeh top par hai
Music- old songs, jagjit ji ki gaaye gazleN and punjabi folk song
About You- dil ki baat har kisi ko nahi bata paati, 1-2 khaas dost hai meri jo mere bare meiN sab jaanti hai, ab meri betiyaa bhi badi ho gye hai unke saath bhi har baat share karti hu. yehi koshish rehti hai ki meri vajha se koi dukhi na ho, apni khushi baanti hu sabse...jaldi gussa nahi karti, agar gussa aa b jaaye to gusse meiN kuch bolti nahi hu ya yoon kahiye ki bola hi nahi jaata...jab sab normal ho jaata hai tab saamne wale se kahti hu ki aapki wo baat muje bahut buri lagi thi
Hobbies- chitchat section meiN games khelna, ghar meiN jo plants lagaye hai unki dekh-bhaal karna, goomna bahut accha lagta hai aur Shopping
Interests- poetry padna uar kabhi kabaar kuch likh bhi lena, soft music, driving.
Secret Desire- ab to koi secret nahi hai...bas bacche accha pad likh jaaye yehi desire hai ab to
One word/phrase u use regularly: leave it...
Memorable moment: jab maine pahli baar apni bitiyaa ko uthaya tha aur aik khaas baat kal meri usi bitiyaa ka janamdin bhi hai
Special Thing about You- yeh to aapko batani chahiye na mere bare meiN...vaise mere frndz jo kahte hai wo maiN bataye deti hoon
Honest, bhagwaan ko maanti hu, jo bhi kaam karti hu dil se karti hu, khaana accha banati hu (yeh mere frndz kahti hai jo roz mere saath lunch karti hai)
A Picture, Which Resembles You- meri pic mere avtar meiN lagi hai usi ko dekh lijiye us se jayada to koi aur kya hogi
Favorite Shayar- vaise to sabhi shayar muje pasand hai par Faraz sahiib, Nida Fazili ji, Javed akhtar ji, sudarshan fakir jii, parveen shakiir khaas hai.
Favorite Shayar on SDC- yoon to sabhi acche shayar hai yahan par kuch naam aise hai jinka likha hua padna behad pasand hai, jaise ki Top par hai Maikash ji.....Paras dii, Danny bhaiyaa (MUshkil ji), Masoom shayar (Anil ji), Kasak, Palavi, Mast bhai (ANU ji) Taish Sahiib (Lucky), Acharya manoj ji, Manoj Khureel ji, Janumanu (Vikas), Diggaj dave, Harash Mahajan, Kshitiz, Mujeeb, Chottu (Dhaval), Zainy, Rashid Rahi, Uffaq ji, Hassan bhai, Prashant vsal ji, Rajveer ji, Shoaib, Ahmad Shakeel, Ahmad Hyderabaadi, Akant ji, Vipan ji, Sumit anjaan, Aslam Noor Noor ji, Barjinder Saagar ji, Chaand ji, Late Sharabi ji, Dheer, Diya jale, Fezan ji, Naresh bhai, Pooja_D, Kunaal (sifar), Mohamad Khasif ji, Zidd ji, Late Sanjoo ji, Shardda jain
Favorite Sher or lines-
"यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया,
के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए........!"
Favorite Song- Kabhi kisi ko mukamal yahan nahi milta, kahin zameeN to kahin aasmaaN nahi milta...!
How You came to know about the website- shayri doondte hue yeh site mil gye....aur ham yehi ke ho kar reh gye
Your favorite form of reading or writing- Gazal, Sher aur song
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you-
yeh rha link......
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=62261
"Yaad Aaye Bahut"
“toot kar jo hum bikhrey to gabraye bahut,
teri bahho.n ke sahaarey yaad aaye bahut,
hatheli par rakh ashq, jo tumne choom liya,
hua afsos! Ab tak yeh moti ganvaye bahut,
mushkil mein kyu koi haath na thaam saka,
kahne ko to dost humne bhi banaye bahut,
jane kaya tha uski udhaas si aanko.n mein,
woh jab bhi yaad aaye hain, rulaaye bahut,
umr-e-jawani apni kyuN tanha hi beet gaye,
yeh khalish abhi tak hai dil dukhaye bahut,
mazhabi junoon mein, sarhad bana daalii,
Phir apne faisley pe haiN pachtaye bahut,
kis kis ko batauN apnii udhaasi ka sabab,
ki “Sunita” ko ek pardesi yaad aaye bahut.
(22.08.2008)
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sunita ji bahut achcha laga apka ye introduction aapke baare mein kaafi baatein jaanane ko mili thankyou for being here .be blessed ji
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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18th December 2012, 09:29 PM
Whom you had read here before registration and why-
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members)
ye wala bach gaya didi......
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18th December 2012, 09:36 PM
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Whom you had read here before registration and why-
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members)
ye wala bach gaya didi......
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Maine es site par sabse pahle kisko pada tha yeh acchi tarah yaad nahi hai...shayad Manoj kureel ji ko pada tha, aur phir uske baad kai aur members ko pada aur 2nd ya 3rd day SDC join kar li thi...us waqt muje poetry likhne ka khaas pta nahi tha...par dheere sabko pad kar hamne bhi apne dil ki baat poetry meiN kehna thoda bahut seekh liya
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th December 2012, 11:13 PM
Forum Name- Dhaval
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Dhaval
Sex- Male
Abode- Ahmedabad,Gujarat
Birthday:16th Aug.
Sun Sign: Sagatarius
Favorite Drink: paani... adrak waali strong chaa'ii
Favorite Food: Daal-Bhaat (gujarati)
Favorite book: yeh option mere liye banaa hi nahiiN
What you hate: JhooThe banaawaTi log
What you love: meraa Pariwaar aur mere dost
Movies- Titanic
Music- Romantic and Rock
About You- maiN KhuShmijaaz ShaKs huuN... dostoN ke saath haNsii mazaak karnaa aur zindagee ko aise hi jeenaa mujhe pasand haii... maiN life mein serious kabhee kabaar hi hotaa huuN... maiN maantaa huuN ki Ghum zindagee se baDaa nahiiN zindagee kisii bhee Ghum se baDii honi chaahiye.. kyuuNki zindagee anmol hai aur bahot ChhoTii hai to KhuShi ke saath ..pyaar bhare lamhoN ke saath beetaa do !!
Dhaval- Ek Ehsaas
Hobbies- Racing ..Painting....Shaa'iiree liKhnaa.. dostoN ke saath Ghumna firnaa nayi nayi jaGah par... aur aaraam se sonaa
Interests-
Mechanical Engineering
Secret Desire- Secret Desire
One word/phrase u use regularly: Jai mata ji
Memorable moment:
jab maine Shayri.com ko join kiyaa thaa aur maalUm na thaa ki riShtaa sab se itnaa gehraa ho jaayengaa aur mujhe itnaa baDaa Pariwaar milengaa.. yaadgaar lamhaa aaj bhee mujhe yaad haii.. aur maiN KhuShkiskamt samjhtaa huuN Khud ko ees ke liye
Special Thing about You- special aisaa kuChh hai to nahiiN ..bas mujhe saadagii bahot pasand haii....
A Picture, Which Resembles You-
Favorite Shayar-
Daag dehlvi...Parveen Shakir... Meer... Nida fazli... Ghalib n many more...
Favorite Shayar on SDC-
sabhee jo Shaayar hai
Favorite Sher or lines-
gar baazii ishq kii baazii hai jo chaaho lagaa do dar kaisaa
gar jiit gae to kyaa kahanaa haare bhii to baazii maat nahiin
Favorite Song-
Aey dil-e-naadaan aarzoo kyaa hai...
How You came to know about the website-
Shaa'iiree Pairvaar ke kuch sadasya jaante haiN kii maiN yahaaN kaise aayaa.. dar-aSal maiN ees site par SMS DhooNDhne aayaa thaa... maiN jab ees site par aayaa to mujhe lagaa thaa ki arre bhaa'ii yahaaN to sms kaa Khazaanaa haii.!! mujhe yeh naheeN pataa thaa ki yahaaN log Khud apne dil ke ehsaas lafzoN ke Zar'iiYe bayaaN karte haiN.. kyuuNki uss waQt mujhe Shaa'iiree ke bare meN zaraa saa bhee ilm naheeN thaa.. ki Shaa'iiree hotee kyaa haii!!... fir mujhe lagaa maiN bhee yahaaN SMS post kar ke deKhtaa huuN to maiNe apne cell ke inbox meiN se kuch msgs yahaaN post kiye the..[ aap deKh sakte haiN mere pooraane Threads!! haha.] fir mere thread par replies aane Shuru huye.. aur Shaa'iiree Parivaar ke ek sadasya ne mujhse kahaa ki tum Khud kyuuN naheeN liKhate.. Khud try kar ke deKho... to maiNe uss din pehli koShiSh kii thee apne aap kuch liKhane kii.. aur wo sadasya jinhone meraa housilaah baRhaayaa thaa wo ko'ii aur naheeN "Sunita virender singh" the.. jinhe aap sab baRe achchhe se jaante hain..! bas usii din se maiN aaj tak liKhataa aa rahaa huuN!! aayaa thaa SMS DhooNDhne aur ab Khud liKh rahaa huuN..
Your favorite form of reading or writing-
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
Ghazal ..Song
A few lines written by you-
Soch kar socho kyaa saath jaayega
waQt jo beetegaa fir nah aayegaa
Bewafaa'ii kaa zamaanaa haii wafaa kyuuN karte hoN
zaKhm Khaate hii raho yaaroN dawaa kyuuN karte hoN
naa gilaa tujh se naa ko'ii Shikaayat mi'ree
waQt marham yaaroN ki duaa dawaa ho ga'ii
baat ChhoTii sii haii maaniYe saahib
ik naZar hum ko bhee deKhiYe saahib
kaaSh dunyaa meN ye"kaaSh"na hotaa,
ziNda ho kar bhii maiN laaSh na hotaa
hum rote nahiN tere jaane kaa Ghum kar ke
baiThe rehte nahiN apnii aaNkhoN ko nam kar ke
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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19th December 2012, 09:49 PM
dhaval ji aapko pada, jana, samjha achcha laga always be happy .
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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18th December 2012, 11:11 PM
Sunita di thanks for your support and to let us know so much about you... Now i would request zainy saaheeba and dhaval saahab, n for that all the volunteers, and each and every member present over here to start telling us about themselves, once again for new people and even to refresh a few things about them.....
And I think Marital status should also be mentioned over here fter Sex- hehehehe neways come on guys....
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18th December 2012, 11:39 PM
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Sunita di thanks for your support..
And I think Marital status should also be mentioned over here fter Sex- hehehehe neways come on guys....
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Lucky, thanx wali koi baat nahi hai....muje behad accha lga yahan aakar apne bare meiN batana
aur bhai Marital status....Married hu (2 betiyaa bhi hai meri)
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th December 2012, 11:27 PM
Ye wala to bhool hi gaye janaab......
Whom you had read here before registration and why-
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18th December 2012, 11:36 PM
Whom you had read here before registration and why-
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members)
Rajveer jee ... Sunita Virender Singh.. Parastaar... Pulkit Gupta
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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18th December 2012, 11:46 PM
Dhaval saahab mazaa aaya aake baare me itna kuch jaan kar, kayi baaton se main anjaan tha.... aur qareeb se jaana maine aapko....
Sunita di pata hai mujhe, shayad meri umar ki hi hongi vo....
haaN who is next.....??
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18th December 2012, 11:49 PM
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Sunita di pata hai mujhe, shayad meri umar ki hi hongi vo....
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hmmmmm........aisa kya ..........................
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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18th December 2012, 11:52 PM
Chottu (Dhaval) accha lga tumhare bare meiN yeh sab padkar, vaise to maiN pahle se hi jaanti hu phir bhi padne meiN aur jaan.ne meiN kuch na kuch farak to hota hi hai...hai na
aur accha lga yeh jaan kar ki tumhe aaj bhi yaad hai maine tumhe likhne ko kaha tha...accha lagta hai jab un dino ko yaad karti hu, jab ham sab naye thy yahan...chotti chotti baate bhi hamare liye bahut khaas hoti thi
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2012, 12:10 AM
sister kaise bhalaa bhool saktaa huuN maiN wo pal... aap na kehte to maiN yahaaN na hotaa. yahaaN se SMS collect kar ke chal diyaa hotaa.... aapki hausilaah afzaaii aur islaah ne hi to bahot kuchh seeKhaayaa haii... aapko aise hi thoDii apnaa GURU maanaa hai Shaayri kaa...mujhe to Shaa'iiree kaise likhte hai wo maalUm hi na thaa aapne seeKhaaya jaise ik beTaa apni maaN ki uNgli pakaD kar chalnaa seeKhtaa haii Theek waise ..mujhe KhuShii hai ees baat kee .. aur yeh baat sahee hai Pariwaar mein sab se zyaadaah gar koiii mujhe jaantaa hai to we aap hi hai aapko sab pataa hi rehtaa hai meraa
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19th December 2012, 12:14 AM
bas chottu.....muje rona bahut jaldi aa jata hai..............................sister loves u alot
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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19th December 2012, 12:04 AM
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Dhaval saahab mazaa aaya aake baare me itna kuch jaan kar, kayi baaton se main anjaan tha.... aur qareeb se jaana maine aapko....
Sunita di pata hai mujhe, shayad meri umar ki hi hongi vo....
haaN who is next.....??
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19th December 2012, 12:01 AM
sunita di.... aapko janna aur itne kareeb se janna bahot acha lag raha hai.... yun laga jaise aapke sath aapke samne baithkar apse baatei ho rahi hon.... thnx alot di,,,, aapka ye pyar bhara nature hi hai jo sabko aapki taraf khinchta hai aur apno me shamil karta hai... yunhi khush khush rahiyega di.. and yes happy birthday to bitiya rani... chhotisi jo aj ek saal aur badi ho gai....
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19th December 2012, 12:06 AM
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sunita di.... aapko janna aur itne kareeb se janna bahot acha lag raha hai.... yun laga jaise aapke sath aapke samne baithkar apse baatei ho rahi hon.... thnx alot di,,,, aapka ye pyar bhara nature hi hai jo sabko aapki taraf khinchta hai aur apno me shamil karta hai... yunhi khush khush rahiyega di.. and yes happy birthday to bitiya rani... chhotisi jo aj ek saal aur badi ho gai....
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ohhhh Thanx Ahna, ham aapke bhi dii ban gye hai accha lga jaan kar
duaoN ke liye shukriya.....betiyaa pta hi nahi chala kab badi ho gye, aise lag rha hai ki abhi kuch saal pahle to chotti si thi...
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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19th December 2012, 12:09 AM
yunhi hota hai di....... waqt kab chale jata hai pata hi nahin chalta.....
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18th September 2013, 11:17 PM
Namaskaar... Adaab... Kaise Hain Aap Sab? aaj kafi din baad apne SDC Pariwar se rubaroo ho rahi hu... samajh nahi aa raha tha kaha se shuru karu.. ye thread dikhayi diya toh laga, baateing shuru karne ka isse accha mauka ho hi nahi sakta. bahut saare naye mehmaan bhi dikhe apne ghar mein, sarsari nigaah se paDhne mein accha laga. Vahi apnapan, masumiyat, sadgi liye SDC...sab bilkul pehle jaisa...shayad yhi baat humre ghar ko duniya se alag karti hai. Apni hi Purani posts ne fir se vahi gujra waqt yaad dila diya jab khushi mein yha aa kar has liya karti thi aur aansu bhi baaNt liya krti thi. Riwaz ke anusar, meri choti si kahani aapke saamne rakh rahi hu... ummeed hai aap log mujhe bhoole nahi honge...
Forum Name- Ritu18525
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Ritu
Sex- F
Abode- India
Birthday: Day Aftr Valentine's Day
Sun Sign: Aqua
Favorite Drink: pa para pa pArArii... Nescafe!
Favorite Food: most of vegetarian food
Favorite book: The one which I'll write someday...
What you hate: buttering
What you love: simplicity
Movies- long list... aanand, Kabhi Kabhi, Mugha-e-Aazam.... to Black, Dil Chahta Hai, Taare Zameen Pe, Kahani etc etc
Music- soft, sufi, Ghazals
About You- Udhta panchi
Hobbies- poetry, writing diaries and khud se baate karna
Interests- SDC, logo se milna, unhe samajhna, and to enjoy what each day brings
Secret Desire- to be loved
One word/phrase u use regularly: sahi baat!
Memorable moment: is yet to come
Special Thing about You- koi mujhe puri tarah jaan hi nahi saka, I am just opposite to the image you portray of mine... full of surprises
A Picture, Which Resembles You- my dp... bheed mein kho jaane ki tamanna hai
Favorite Shayar- Nida ji, Kumar vishwas, my father and me
Favorite Shayar on SDC- Sunita Di, Dhaval bhai, Sameer,Kwahish, Arvund ji, Naresh ji,Nalin ji, Zidd Sahab, Zainy and many More (M missing out some great shayars, STML regretted.. so sorry)
Favorite Sher or lines- Neeyat-e-Shauq Bhar Na Jaye Kahi.n, Tu Bhi Dil Se Utar Na Jaye Kahi.n...
Favorite Song- Many they are indeed.. Aaj kal most fav "Maula Mere le le meri Jaan, Dard Se mera Daaman bhar de ya allah
How You came to know about the website- upar wale ka karam hua aur kuch saal pehle jeene ka ek aur bahana mil gaya SDC ke roop mein... aur sath hi bahut pyare dost, taaNg kheeNchne wale dost aur har baar hausla dene wali family bhi...
Your favorite form of reading or writing- m not a strict writer/poet, jis for mein bhi ehsaas dil ko chhu jate hain vahi apni ho jati hai. vaise mujhe Aazad nazm likhna pasand hai jo meri personality ka hi ek roop hai... aazad!
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you- Feeling very nostalgic.. please refer to poems I wrote on SDC.
One of my fav. "Chalte Chalte humko Rukne Ke Bahane Aa gaye,
Kal Dekha unhe jab sapne mein, Sone ke Bahane Aa gaye"
Whom you had read here before registration and why
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members)- as far as I remember, it was a poem written by Sunita Di or Mayank Ji about girl...I was in tears reading that
SDC pe aapka sabse qareebi ya sabse ahcha dost kaun hai: pichle kuch tym se touch me nahi hu, dil ke sabse qareeb Sunita di, dinu bhaiya aur naresh ji.
aap kin kin logon se SDC ke personally mile haiN... no one.. bad luck (though some of them are on my fb)
Two lines for this great place, i mean our shayri.com: tere jaisa yaar kaha, kaha aisa yaarana...
Bas ye thi meri choti si kahani...
Ummeed karti hu dosto aap ka samay accha beete.
God Bless You.
~Ritu
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
But,
Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
# Feel The Difference #
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23rd September 2013, 01:56 PM
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Namaskaar... Adaab... Kaise Hain Aap Sab? aaj kafi din baad apne SDC Pariwar se rubaroo ho rahi hu... samajh nahi aa raha tha kaha se shuru karu.. ye thread dikhayi diya toh laga, baateing shuru karne ka isse accha mauka ho hi nahi sakta. bahut saare naye mehmaan bhi dikhe apne ghar mein, sarsari nigaah se paDhne mein accha laga. Vahi apnapan, masumiyat, sadgi liye SDC...sab bilkul pehle jaisa...shayad yhi baat humre ghar ko duniya se alag karti hai. Apni hi Purani posts ne fir se vahi gujra waqt yaad dila diya jab khushi mein yha aa kar has liya karti thi aur aansu bhi baaNt liya krti thi. Riwaz ke anusar, meri choti si kahani aapke saamne rakh rahi hu... ummeed hai aap log mujhe bhoole nahi honge...
Forum Name- Ritu18525
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Ritu
Sex- F
Abode- India
Birthday: Day Aftr Valentine's Day
Sun Sign: Aqua
Favorite Drink: pa para pa pArArii... Nescafe!
Favorite Food: most of vegetarian food
Favorite book: The one which I'll write someday...
What you hate: buttering
What you love: simplicity
Movies- long list... aanand, Kabhi Kabhi, Mugha-e-Aazam.... to Black, Dil Chahta Hai, Taare Zameen Pe, Kahani etc etc
Music- soft, sufi, Ghazals
About You- Udhta panchi
Hobbies- poetry, writing diaries and khud se baate karna
Interests- SDC, logo se milna, unhe samajhna, and to enjoy what each day brings
Secret Desire- to be loved
One word/phrase u use regularly: sahi baat!
Memorable moment: is yet to come
Special Thing about You- koi mujhe puri tarah jaan hi nahi saka, I am just opposite to the image you portray of mine... full of surprises
A Picture, Which Resembles You- my dp... bheed mein kho jaane ki tamanna hai
Favorite Shayar- Nida ji, Kumar vishwas, my father and me
Favorite Shayar on SDC- Sunita Di, Dhaval bhai, Sameer,Kwahish, Arvund ji, Naresh ji,Nalin ji, Zidd Sahab, Zainy and many More (M missing out some great shayars, STML regretted.. so sorry)
Favorite Sher or lines- Neeyat-e-Shauq Bhar Na Jaye Kahi.n, Tu Bhi Dil Se Utar Na Jaye Kahi.n...
Favorite Song- Many they are indeed.. Aaj kal most fav "Maula Mere le le meri Jaan, Dard Se mera Daaman bhar de ya allah
How You came to know about the website- upar wale ka karam hua aur kuch saal pehle jeene ka ek aur bahana mil gaya SDC ke roop mein... aur sath hi bahut pyare dost, taaNg kheeNchne wale dost aur har baar hausla dene wali family bhi...
Your favorite form of reading or writing- m not a strict writer/poet, jis for mein bhi ehsaas dil ko chhu jate hain vahi apni ho jati hai. vaise mujhe Aazad nazm likhna pasand hai jo meri personality ka hi ek roop hai... aazad!
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you- Feeling very nostalgic.. please refer to poems I wrote on SDC.
One of my fav. "Chalte Chalte humko Rukne Ke Bahane Aa gaye,
Kal Dekha unhe jab sapne mein, Sone ke Bahane Aa gaye"
Whom you had read here before registration and why
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members)- as far as I remember, it was a poem written by Sunita Di or Mayank Ji about girl...I was in tears reading that
SDC pe aapka sabse qareebi ya sabse ahcha dost kaun hai: pichle kuch tym se touch me nahi hu, dil ke sabse qareeb Sunita di, dinu bhaiya aur naresh ji.
aap kin kin logon se SDC ke personally mile haiN... no one.. bad luck (though some of them are on my fb)
Two lines for this great place, i mean our shayri.com: tere jaisa yaar kaha, kaha aisa yaarana...
Bas ye thi meri choti si kahani...
Ummeed karti hu dosto aap ka samay accha beete.
God Bless You.
~Ritu
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Ritu ji aadaab.... behad khushi hui aapke baare me padhkar jaankar... deree se aane ke liye maafii chahunga, darasal shayad nazar chook gayee thi is post ko padhne me..
aapke baare me jaan kar accha lagaa.. aapke khayaalaat jaankar behad khushi hui... aapka zindgee ko lekar jo nazariyaa hai use dekh kar aur bhi khuhsi hui.... kaash ke hum sab aise hi znda dil ho jaaen.....
bahot khushi ho rahi hai ke aap SDC me wapas lout aain hain, ab yahi guzaarish hai ke aap aati raha kareN regularly... aap members ki wajah se hi ye site ab tak qaayam hai, iski khoobsurti ab tak barkaraar hai...
apna khayaal rakkhen.... khush rahen...
Shaad.....
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19th December 2012, 12:04 AM
Dhaval ji
bahot sachai se aapne bataya sabkuch apne bare me.. apne likhne ke bare me... har chhoti chhoti baat janna unke bare me jinhe aap roz padhte hain ..jinke ehsason ko jeete hain kuch pal unki rachnayen padhkar.. unhe aur kareeb se janna ek alag experirnce hai..... thnx alot ji
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19th December 2012, 12:12 AM
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Dhaval ji
bahot sachai se aapne bataya sabkuch apne bare me.. apne likhne ke bare me... har chhoti chhoti baat janna unke bare me jinhe aap roz padhte hain ..jinke ehsason ko jeete hain kuch pal unki rachnayen padhkar.. unhe aur kareeb se janna ek alag experirnce hai..... thnx alot ji
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ShuKriyaah ahnaa jee itni izzar afzaaii ke liye
aapka
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19th December 2012, 11:32 AM
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Dhaval ji
bahot sachai se aapne bataya sabkuch apne bare me.. apne likhne ke bare me... har chhoti chhoti baat janna unke bare me jinhe aap roz padhte hain ..jinke ehsason ko jeete hain kuch pal unki rachnayen padhkar.. unhe aur kareeb se janna ek alag experirnce hai..... thnx alot ji
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19th December 2012, 11:41 AM
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fir to aapse hi shuru karun chaaploosi principal ji......... mere liye thodi si to narmi rahegi na... punishment me.... :P
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19th December 2012, 12:13 AM
ahana ji ab aap aayin haiN, to aapki baari bhi aa gayi... ab aap bhi shuru ho jaayeN.....
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19th December 2012, 12:20 AM
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ahana ji ab aap aayin haiN, to aapki baari bhi aa gayi... ab aap bhi shuru ho jaayeN.....
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maine to kuch din pehle hi reply kiya hai... aap hain yahan now u have to reply taish ji.... chaliye aajaiye maidaanme ,..aur jawab dijiye apni hi sawalon ka :P
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19th December 2012, 12:24 AM
ahana ji isme changes haiN, ab dhang se yahaan saare sawaaloN ka jawaab de bhi dijiye, aur maine to thread banay hi hai, to mera number thoda late se hi aayega.....!!
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19th December 2012, 01:23 AM
ok Taish ji aap kehte hain to hum hi silsila age badha dete hain... waise to kuch din pehle hi reply diye hain but is bar kuch aur variations hain to hum bhi aur detail me batayenge
Forum Name- @ahna@
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Aahnaa
Sex- female
Abode- mumbai
Birthday: 12th may
Sun Sign: taurus
Favorite Drink: cold drink me sprite and hot strong coffee wo bhi Baristaa ki ho to kya baat hai... yummyyyyyyyy
Favorite Food: manchow soup... vada pav
Favorite book: depeds on my mood...... par ek bar GUlzar saheb ki poetries ki book padhi thi maine uska naam nahin pata ,, cover nahin tha uska.. wo aaj bhi dhundh rahi hun par mili nahin
What you hate: back biters.. jo mere muh par to acha acha kehte hain aur mere jate hi bas shuru ho jate hain buraiyon k pulinde lekra
What you love: everything....
Movies- rockstar,,, DDlJ,,, kuch kuch hota hai,,,Robot shivaji ... i love watchig them again and again... tollywood dubbed mvss
Music- jo mere man ko sukun de wo sab.....
About You- sab kehte hain pagli hai lekin man ki sachi hai.. hasna hasana masti karna aadat hai meri... kai bar iss wajah se gadbad bhi kar deti hun... par jab serious hoti hun to shayd kuch zyada hi serious ho jati hun...
hurt nahin hoti bura nahin lagta na gussa aata hai..... bas ek chiz jo buri lagti hai wo ye ke jab koi kareeb aakar dur chala jata hai.....
Hobbies- poetries padhna..... aajkal samjhna bhi..... music .. dance... doston se khub baatein sunna
Interests- jo mujhe bandh le wo intersting baki nahin... main bahot jaldi bore ho jati hun.....
Secret Desire- secret hai na yahan kaise kahun sabke samne...
One word/phrase u use regularly: ohhoooooo.... aahhhhaaaa
Memorable moment: every second of my life is memorable..
Special Thing about You- i love myself a lottttttttt.... mujhse achhi koi nhi...
A Picture, Which Resembles You- mera aainaa
Favorite Shayar- gulzar and javed akhtar
Favorite Shayar on SDC- abhi to sabko thik se padha nahin hai to keh nahin sakti...
Favorite Sher or lines- fikr saheb ka ek sher jo mere dil k bahot kareeb hai.....
jism tak chhune ka salika nahin
log rooh ko chhune ki bat karte hain...
Favorite Song- mera kuch saaman tumhare pas rakha hai... and ye dooriyaan
How You came to know about the website- AnjAAn ji aur shaad ne bataya is site k bare me....
Your favorite form of reading or writing- sher nazm gazal
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you- ye meri ek koshish
lamha lamha bikhar rahi hun main
aake samet le mujhe baajuon me
kahin kho na dun khudko hi main
inn tanha pareshan si raaton me
gehre zakhmon se rista ye lahoo
dekh tapak raha meri aankhon se
ab aur saha mujhse jata nahin
tu baitha rahe kisi ki raahon me
jism ka rom rom keh raha hai aah ye
na nikaal payega mujhe apni yaadon se.....
@ahna@
Whom you had read here before registration and why-
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members) yahan jise kafi padha hai as guest wo hain janumanu ji .. naresh ji.. shaad ji.. hassan ji.. amanush .. ahmed bhai...ishq ek ibadat.. rashmi ji... zainy ji,,aur bhi kai logon ko padha.... some are friends and some have posted links on fb to wahan se yahan aa jati thi to jo samne mila use padh liya..... tab itni serious nahin thi for poetry.
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19th December 2012, 07:54 AM
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ok Taish ji aap kehte hain to hum hi silsila age badha dete hain... waise to kuch din pehle hi reply diye hain but is bar kuch aur variations hain to hum bhi aur detail me batayenge
Forum Name- @ahna@
Real Name (if You Want To Disclose!)- Aahnaa
Sex- female
Abode- mumbai
Birthday: 12th may
Sun Sign: taurus
Favorite Drink: cold drink me sprite and hot strong coffee wo bhi Baristaa ki ho to kya baat hai... yummyyyyyyyy
Favorite Food: manchow soup... vada pav
Favorite book: depeds on my mood...... par ek bar GUlzar saheb ki poetries ki book padhi thi maine uska naam nahin pata ,, cover nahin tha uska.. wo aaj bhi dhundh rahi hun par mili nahin
What you hate: back biters.. jo mere muh par to acha acha kehte hain aur mere jate hi bas shuru ho jate hain buraiyon k pulinde lekra
What you love: everything....
Movies- rockstar,,, DDlJ,,, kuch kuch hota hai,,,Robot shivaji ... i love watchig them again and again... tollywood dubbed mvss
Music- jo mere man ko sukun de wo sab.....
About You- sab kehte hain pagli hai lekin man ki sachi hai.. hasna hasana masti karna aadat hai meri... kai bar iss wajah se gadbad bhi kar deti hun... par jab serious hoti hun to shayd kuch zyada hi serious ho jati hun...
hurt nahin hoti bura nahin lagta na gussa aata hai..... bas ek chiz jo buri lagti hai wo ye ke jab koi kareeb aakar dur chala jata hai.....
Hobbies- poetries padhna..... aajkal samjhna bhi..... music .. dance... doston se khub baatein sunna
Interests- jo mujhe bandh le wo intersting baki nahin... main bahot jaldi bore ho jati hun.....
Secret Desire- secret hai na yahan kaise kahun sabke samne...
One word/phrase u use regularly: ohhoooooo.... aahhhhaaaa
Memorable moment: every second of my life is memorable..
Special Thing about You- i love myself a lottttttttt.... mujhse achhi koi nhi...
A Picture, Which Resembles You- mera aainaa
Favorite Shayar- gulzar and javed akhtar
Favorite Shayar on SDC- abhi to sabko thik se padha nahin hai to keh nahin sakti...
Favorite Sher or lines- fikr saheb ka ek sher jo mere dil k bahot kareeb hai.....
jism tak chhune ka salika nahin
log rooh ko chhune ki bat karte hain...
Favorite Song- mera kuch saaman tumhare pas rakha hai... and ye dooriyaan
How You came to know about the website- AnjAAn ji aur shaad ne bataya is site k bare me....
Your favorite form of reading or writing- sher nazm gazal
(for example: ghazal, nazm, sher, english poetry, song, etc)
A few lines written by you- ye meri ek koshish
lamha lamha bikhar rahi hun main
aake samet le mujhe baajuon me
kahin kho na dun khudko hi main
inn tanha pareshan si raaton me
gehre zakhmon se rista ye lahoo
dekh tapak raha meri aankhon se
ab aur saha mujhse jata nahin
tu baitha rahe kisi ki raahon me
jism ka rom rom keh raha hai aah ye
na nikaal payega mujhe apni yaadon se.....
@ahna@
Whom you had read here before registration and why-
(But I think it will be applicable more over the new members) yahan jise kafi padha hai as guest wo hain janumanu ji .. naresh ji.. shaad ji.. hassan ji.. amanush .. ahmed bhai...ishq ek ibadat.. rashmi ji... zainy ji,,aur bhi kai logon ko padha.... some are friends and some have posted links on fb to wahan se yahan aa jati thi to jo samne mila use padh liya..... tab itni serious nahin thi for poetry.
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Ahna ji dekha aapne kitna simple tha........ Nw it was a pleasure going thru the things about you, cme to know about a lot of things about you... Waise ek baat pata chal gayi ki aap jhooth kehti thi ki aapne nahi likha hai kabhi ahchi kosish thi mohtarma, umeed karta hun aapki ye masti aur chulbulapan humesha yahaaN ki sobha badhaata rahe.....
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19th December 2012, 08:14 AM
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Ahna ji dekha aapne kitna simple tha........ Nw it was a pleasure going thru the things about you, cme to know about a lot of things about you... Waise ek baat pata chal gayi ki aap jhooth kehti thi ki aapne nahi likha hai kabhi ahchi kosish thi mohtarma, umeed karta hun aapki ye masti aur chulbulapan humesha yahaaN ki sobha badhaata rahe.....
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Thanx Taish......
ise koi likhna kehte hain... na sur na taal na khyaal..... yahan jitno ko padha hai wo isse minimum 1000 times better likhte hain...
aur masti to chalti rahegi jab tak sansein hain...
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19th December 2012, 09:00 AM
ahana ji kabhi bhi kisi bhi do insaan ki writing compare nahin ho sakti hai, kam se kam khayal me to bilkul bhi nahiN, aur sur-tal aur technicalities ki baat, to usme thoda waqt to lgta hi hai, par yaad rakhiyega hum jo shuruaati dinoN me bina bandhan aur rules ke raw ideas ke saath likhte haiN, ye bhi sabse yaadgaar panne ban jaayenge aapki shayri ke safar meN...
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19th December 2012, 09:15 AM
Dear Ahna.....mood mast mast ho gya aapka intro fourm padkar aapki hansi musurahat yoon hi bani rhe...yehi duaa karte hai ham.
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2012, 09:20 AM
Dear Sumit.....aapko pada hai par aapke bare meiN aaj jaana, aik baat kehna chahti hooN ki zindgi ko has ke jiyo...up-downs life meiN aate rehte hai, abhi to aab bahut chotte ho zindgi bahut badi hai mere bhai...khushiyaa gam dono saath saath chalte rehte hai...so har pal ko jeena seekho...!
BHagwaan agar aik raasta hamare liye band karte hai to 10 aur raaste kholte hai, bas hame un raastoN ko pahchan.ne ki deri hai
duaoN ke saath
dii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2012, 09:43 AM
Mera gham baantne ke liye behad shukrguzaar hu'n aapka dii. Believe me I am really ok. sirf khushi aur gham ka antar bhula chuka hu'n. ek rasta band hone ke baad 10 naye khule bhi hai'n lekin ye wo dagar nahi'n jahaa'n mujhe chalna hai. parayi galiyo'n aur praaye desh ke chakkar laga raha hu'n. Ghar kya hota hai ye shayad mai'n nahi'n jaanta aur ghar kya hota hai ye meri rooh mar ke bhi nahi'n bhula paayegi.
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19th December 2012, 09:37 AM
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Dear Ahna.....mood mast mast ho gya aapka intro fourm padkar aapki hansi musurahat yoon hi bani rhe...yehi duaa karte hai ham.
god bless u
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sunita di...
aapka mood mast karke mera din bhi khushgawaar ho gaya... aapki smile ne din me raunak laa di... yunhi mast mood me sabko mast rakhiyega...
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19th December 2012, 10:32 AM
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sunita di...
aapka mood mast karke mera din bhi khushgawaar ho gaya... aapki smile ne din me raunak laa di... yunhi mast mood me sabko mast rakhiyega...
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ji hazoor jaroor.....vaise ham khud jaise bhi mood meiN ho doosroN ka mood accha hi banaye rakhte hai
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....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th December 2012, 09:35 AM
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ahana ji kabhi bhi kisi bhi do insaan ki writing compare nahin ho sakti hai, kam se kam khayal me to bilkul bhi nahiN, aur sur-tal aur technicalities ki baat, to usme thoda waqt to lgta hi hai, par yaad rakhiyega hum jo shuruaati dinoN me bina bandhan aur rules ke raw ideas ke saath likhte haiN, ye bhi sabse yaadgaar panne ban jaayenge aapki shayri ke safar meN...
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haan taish sach hai
jis tarah pehle bina soche likhti thi dil ki har baat ab miss karti hun wo likhna.. pata nahin kahan se ye behr aur kafiye radif matla makta aa gaye dimag me .. khyal inhi me bandh k reh gaye....
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