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9th October 2001, 10:05 PM
Dard ke phool bhi khilte hain bikhar jaate hain!
Zakhm kaise bhi hon kuch roz main bhar jaate hain!! Us dareeche main bhi ab koi nahin aur hum bhi! Sar Jhukaae hue chup chaap guzar jaate hain!! Raasta roke khadi hai yahi uljhan kab se! Koi pooche to kahain kya ke kidhar jaate hain!! Narm aawaz bhali baatain muhazzab lahje! Pahli baarish main he ye rang utar jaate hain!! |
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10th October 2001, 01:48 AM
Sach hi likha hai apne....
Dard ke phool bhi khilte hain bikhar jaate hain! Zakhm kaise bhi hon kuch roz main bhar jaate hain!! Nice ghazal  -neelo neelo ;-) |
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10th October 2001, 06:45 AM
neelo ji yeh jagjit singh ji ki ghazal hai....gulzaar sahib ne likhi hai...!!!
is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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10th October 2001, 09:41 PM
Sahi kaha maikash ji aap ne mujhe iqbaal karne main koi harj nahin yeh gazal jagjeet singh sahaab ne gai aur gulzaar sahaab ne liki hai
 Yoon to bahout bheed hai harsoo magar.... Ek shakhs saare shahar ko viraa^n kar gaya.... |
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12th October 2001, 01:54 AM
Kashif ji
I liked the nazm...the poet has written a gr8 ghazal...and U have posted a gr8 ghazal -neelo neelo ;-) |
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12th October 2001, 05:10 PM
Sabhi ko Kashif ka aadab
Mujhe bohot khushi hui ke meri chuni hui (Likhi hui nahin) gazals aap logon ko pasand ayien. Thanx Yoon to bahout bheed hai harsoo magar.... Ek shakhs saare shahar ko viraa^n kar gaya.... |
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