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kya hoga tumhare is dil me -
21st February 2008, 03:39 AM
kya hoga tumhare is dil me
ye main kabhi jaan nahi sakta
baitha hu tumhare hi intezaar me
par main tumhe chahkar bhi pa nahi sakta
tumhare saath tumhara saya banke rahena hai
par tumhari ye judai sahe nahi sakta
aankhe bandh kar ke sirf tumhi ko dekhta hu
tumhi raheti ho is dil me ye tumhe bata nahi sakta
aashiq hu deewano ki tarah chahta hu tumhe
par kismat me jo likha hai wo main mita nahi sakta
mere pyaar ki meri zindagi ki sirf tumhi aarzu ho
par majburi hai kuch meri jo tumhe samja nahi sakta
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21st February 2008, 08:49 AM
Jaatey Jaatey Kya Kya Dey Gaya Koi
Aansoo Bahaney Ka Bahaana Dey Gaya Koi
Koi Maqsad Na Tha Mairi Zindagi Ka
Jaatey Jaatey Apni Talaash Ka Aik Maqsad Dey Gaya Koi
Khuda Naraz Tha Ke Koi Ilteja Na Karta Main Uss Say
Jaatey Jaatey Khuda Ko Manaaney Ka Aik Maqsad Dey Gaya Koi
Likhney Parrhney Ka Koi Shoq Na Tha Mujh Ko
Terey Naam Ko Likhna Terey Naam Ko Perrhna,
Jaatey Jaatey Ye Shoq Bhi Sikha Gaya Koi….
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22nd February 2008, 07:21 PM
kya baat hai dearrrrrrrrr
very well writtennnnnnnnnnn
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22nd February 2008, 08:00 PM
wow krenil,,,,,, bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne. keep posting.
aap ki dost
natasha
~~~AaJ huM UnHe BeWaFa BaTaKe AayE HaI, uNkE kHaToN kO pAnI mEiN bAha Ke AaYe HaI, KoI NiKaL Ke PaDh Na Le uNhE, isS liYe PaNi mEiN bHi AaG LaGa kE AaYe HaI!!~~~
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22nd February 2008, 09:44 PM
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kya baat hai dearrrrrrrrr
very well writtennnnnnnnnnn
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aapka bahut bahut shukhriya sappuuuuu ki aapko ye pasand aaya bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
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22nd February 2008, 09:45 PM
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wow krenil,,,,,, bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne. keep posting.
aap ki dost
natasha
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aapka bahut bahut shukhriya natasha ki aapko ye pasand aaya bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
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22nd February 2008, 09:47 PM
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Originally Posted by krenil
kya hoga tumhare is dil me
ye main kabhi jaan nahi sakta
baitha hu tumhare hi intezaar me
par main tumhe chahkar bhi pa nahi sakta
tumhare saath tumhara saya banke rahena hai
par tumhari ye judai sahe nahi sakta
aankhe bandh kar ke sirf tumhi ko dekhta hu
tumhi raheti ho is dil me ye tumhe bata nahi sakta
aashiq hu deewano ki tarah chahta hu tumhe
par kismat me jo likha hai wo main mita nahi sakta
mere pyaar ki meri zindagi ki sirf tumhi aarzu ho
par majburi hai kuch meri jo tumhe samja nahi sakta
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wah dost bahut acha likha hai tumne aaj online mile app bahut khushi huyi
aur naraz ho kya humse jo ab baate bhi nahi karte ho yaar
AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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22nd February 2008, 10:03 PM
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wah dost bahut acha likha hai tumne aaj online mile app bahut khushi huyi
aur naraz ho kya humse jo ab baate bhi nahi karte ho yaar
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thanx dost ki tumhe ye pasand aaya aur ha main tumse naraz nahi hu lekin ab mann hi nahi kar raha hai yaar yaha pe aane ko bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
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22nd February 2008, 10:08 PM
VERY NICE THOUGHT DEAR ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Originally Posted by krenil
kya hoga tumhare is dil me
ye main kabhi jaan nahi sakta
baitha hu tumhare hi intezaar me
par main tumhe chahkar bhi pa nahi sakta
tumhare saath tumhara saya banke rahena hai
par tumhari ye judai sahe nahi sakta
aankhe bandh kar ke sirf tumhi ko dekhta hu
tumhi raheti ho is dil me ye tumhe bata nahi sakta
aashiq hu deewano ki tarah chahta hu tumhe
par kismat me jo likha hai wo main mita nahi sakta
mere pyaar ki meri zindagi ki sirf tumhi aarzu ho
par majburi hai kuch meri jo tumhe samja nahi sakta
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22nd February 2008, 10:10 PM
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VERY NICE THOUGHT DEAR ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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thanx yaar ki tumhe mere khayal pasand aaye bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
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23rd February 2008, 06:32 AM
Great writen yaar !!
"*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.*"
(^_^)
Keep It Up!!
AmitŪ~~Thunder4all@gmail.com
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23rd February 2008, 07:50 PM
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Great writen yaar !!
"*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear.*"
(^_^)
Keep It Up!!
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thanx yaar ki tumhe ye pasand aaya sach likha hai tumne love me aisa hi hota hai is ki shuruat smile ke saath hoti hai lekin and to tears ke saath hi hota hai bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
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23rd February 2008, 07:58 PM
HI salam ,
krenil
main app se yeh pochna chahogi k kya yeh appne apni real zindagi per bhaji hai app iska jawabdo phir mainappko iska baray main reply doongi... ........... ok i hope don't mind
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23rd February 2008, 08:05 PM
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HI salam ,
krenil
main app se yeh pochna chahogi k kya yeh appne apni real zindagi per bhaji hai app iska jawabdo phir mainappko iska baray main reply doongi... ........... ok i hope don't mind
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ha sanaji ye maine apni zindagi per likha hai lekin aapne bataya nahi ke aapko ye kaisa laga koi baat nahi main wait karunga batana jarur ke kaisa laga
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23rd February 2008, 08:12 PM
hi salam,
krenil
tumhari shayri waqai achi hai main yeh isliye poch rahi thi kyon tumhari is shayri ko perh kr mujhe laga .............. k shayad yeh appne apni zindagi per likhi hai .
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23rd February 2008, 08:26 PM
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hi salam,
krenil
tumhari shayri waqai achi hai main yeh isliye poch rahi thi kyon tumhari is shayri ko perh kr mujhe laga .............. k shayad yeh appne apni zindagi per likhi hai .
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aapka bahut bahut shukhriya ki aapko ye pasand aaya aur kya vichar hai aapke sach kaha ye maine apni zindagi par hi likha hai bas aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahena
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