sitam me kami late ho kyon..
 

sitam meiN kami laatey ho kyuN!
meri aah pe daude chaly aate ho kyuN

Nahi de sakte jo mohabbat mujhe
Dard ki raah par sang jaatey ho kyon

gar meri nahi hai zaroorat tumhe
Bheed me tanha khud ko paate ho kyon...

Kehte ho hamesha ki maiN khush rahooN
Door jaa ke mujhe fir sataate ho kyon.

Teri yaad se jo niklna bhi chahoon..
Aur bhi dhadkno me samaate ho kyon..

tumhi ne sikhaya hai ‘madhu’ ko muskrana..
yoon rooth kar us ko rulaate ho kyon...

Madhu ji, Namaskar !

Har ek sheyr pe alag alag se daad.. Bohot he umdaa likha hai. Aapko paRh kar dil khush ho jata hai. Simple ilfaaz mein bhi itni umdaa shayari, ke jawab nahi. Yunhi mehfil mein aati rahein.

DuaaoN ke saath.

SAGAR AASHNA

waaahhh madhu jji baahot sunder peshkash hai aapki..........

bahot ajeebb se aur pyaaare se shiqve kiye hain aapne isme..... subhaan allah


likhtii rahiye

Shaad...

Madhu ji, namaskaar

pehli baar aapko padhne ka fakhr haasil hua hai (jee, Ye meri nalaayiqui hai) aur yaqeen jaaniye aapki is kaavish se bohat mutaasir hua hooN

daad aur mubarakbaad par aapka haq sau fee sadi ban'ta hai to qabool kijiye

mashq jaari rakhiye, aap bohat khoob likhti haiN

Rab raakha
Maikash

Waah madhu ji waaaaah kya ravangee hoti hai aap ki ghazaloN meiN.
Bahut sunder aur gehre ehsaas ...Maqta tau lajawab tha aapka.

YuN hi likjti rahiye aur is bazm ki raunak badate rahiye.

Sanjay Sehgal

Bahut bahut shukriya sagar ji...aapke dil ko khushi pahunchi
ye jaan kar mujhe khushi huyi ..yoon hi sath dete rahiye..
khush rahiye.....

Madhu ji Behad umda....khoobsurat.......aur......muhabbat se saraboor gazal kahi aapne...
Bohot pasand aai ye peshkash...
Daad kubul kijiyega

Bade achhe achhe ashaar kahe hain Madhu Sahiba aapne.

Kehte ho hamesha ki maiN khush rahooN
Door jaa ke mujhe fir sataate ho kyon.

Teri yaad se jo niklna bhi chahoon..
Aur bhi dhadkno me samaate ho kyon..

Wah..mazah agaya

Mujeeb Parwaaz

Pasandigi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya shaad jee....
khush rahiye..
aate rahiye..

Bahut bahut shukriya di...aap ki daad pakar dil khush ho jata hai.....yoon hee sath banaye rakhiye..
aati rahiye....:)

madhu jee...kya baat hai....deri se reply ke liye maafi chahta hu....par aisa lag rha tha jaise ko mujhse apna dard bayaan kar raha hai.....loved it...

Bahut bahut shukriya...hassan jee..
aate rahein..
khush rahein...:)

Madhu ji

kamaal kar diya aapne! itna khoobsurat aur dard bhara hai ye kalaam!

aaj tak ke apke likhe sab kalaamon mein mera tob favourite ban gaya hai ye.

waah waaah Madhu ji.............. dil me utarti har line...bahut khubbbb
ek ek shabd dil ko chhutaa huaa.............likhte raheN....

Adaab maikash ji...

Sabse pahle to mafi chahti hoon ki..itni der se jawaab de rahi hoon...aaj achanak nazar padi to behad sharmindgi huyi ki aap jaise aala hazrat mere kalaam par aaye aur main shukriya ada karna bhi bhool gayi.....
aapko mera ye mamooli sa kalaam pasand aaya te meri khushkusmti hai janaab...yakeen maniye aapki daad ne hausla dugna kar diya hai.....bahut shukriya aapka...
Apna keemti vaqt nikal kar aate rahiyega yahi guzarish hai aapse..

Mashq beshak jaari rahega......:)
salamat rahein..

Adaab maikash ji...

Sabse pahle to mafi chahti hoon ki..itni der se jawaab de rahi hoon...aaj achanak nazar padi to behad sharmindgi huyi ki aap jaise aala hazrat mere kalaam par aaye aur main shukriya ada karna bhi bhool gayi.....
aapko mera ye mamooli sa kalaam pasand aaya te meri khushkusmti hai janaab...yakeen maniye aapki daad ne hausla dugna kar diya hai.....bahut shukriya aapka...
Apna keemti vaqt nikal kar aate rahiyega yahi guzarish hai aapse..

Mashq beshak jaari rahega......:)
salamat rahein..

Mafi chahti hun sanjay ji Jane kaise reply nahi kiya ....

Koshish karti rahti hun aaj bhi ki kuch likh pain Jo aap San ko pasand aaye...

Aap bhi aaya Karein hausla afzai karne Yahi guzarish hai

Behad shukriya....

Regards

Madhu

Bhushan ji Dil se shukriya apka...

Salamat rahiye