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fakira 26th November 2006 02:03 PM

Dard
 
DEKEH KA DARD HAMARA, AAP KYO SEHAR UTHAA
AAG HAMARA DIL MAI KAGI, AAP KYO JAL UTHAA

YA DERD-E-DIL AAP HI NA DIYA HAI
PHIR AAP HI KYO PHIR AAP HI KYO BAACHAN HO UTHAA

shrdh 26th November 2006 04:44 PM

welcome dear
 
sawagat hai aapka


bhaut achhe sher se aapne mahfil mai shirkat ki hai

aapko aur bhi padhne ko milgea yahi umeed karte hai

keep writng

TariqAhmadAzmi 26th November 2006 06:52 PM

Salam,
Bhahut achaa shair likha aap ne derd par aap ne bahut chota shair likha hai please is shair ko pora likh, to mujhe bahut khushi hohi, mujhe aap ke pori gazal ka intezaar rahega aap yun hi likhte rahe

Your Friend SHAAN

fakira 27th November 2006 01:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi (Post 219819)
Salam,
Bhahut achaa shair likha aap ne derd par aap ne bahut chota shair likha hai please is shair ko pora likh, to mujhe bahut khushi hohi, mujhe aap ke pori gazal ka intezaar rahega aap yun hi likhte rahe

Your Friend SHAAN

SALAM HAI AAP KO BHI IS [/COLOR][/COLOR]FAKIRA KAA, OR AAP KAA INTAZAAR KO LAMBA NAHI REHNA DEGAA. ...YA WADA HA IS FAKIRA KAA

fakira 27th November 2006 01:31 PM

Hi Shrdh Isi Umeed Sa Aya Ho Ki Ko "is Fakira " Ko Samaj Saka....

Dhaval 27th November 2006 05:02 PM

mere dost fakira ji ko dhaval ka namskaar

mere dost aapka sawagat hai is parivaar me , bahot hi achhey sher aapne apni peshkas me bayan kiye hai mere dost aise hi apne ehsas ko bayan kijiyenga hamesa , aur apne ehsas ko kayam rakhiyenga taki aap kuch likh sake mere dost ummid hai aap apni likhi peshkas ke zariyeis mehfil ko sajate rahenge aapki agli peshkas ka intezar rahenga

khus rahiye apna khayal rakhiye

welcome again

aapka dost
dhaval

fakira 27th November 2006 05:30 PM

thnkx dhaval likta ho par aap jaisa nahi dear , or rahi hamari dusari . dastaa wo pesh hai..dear.... sweet n luv


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