Ek Pyara Sa Dost
Doston
Mai aapke samne ek nazam pash ker raha hoon. Umeed kerta hoon ki aapko pasand aayegi ye nazam mere kisi khaas DOST ke liye hai... Zindagi ki bheer me ke ajnabi mila, Phir paas aaya mere or zindagi bana. Kuch din to mere saath chala dost banke wo, Phirbhi har moor per kuch fasla raha. Jiska hua tujhe kabhi aihsaas tak nahi, Wo derd humne zindagi ka beinteha saha. Aie DOST tere dil ki kasak jaanta hun mai, Gar mai nahi to chain se tu bhi nahi raha. Aap ka dost SHAAN:) |
Assalam walekum SHAAN ji,
kaise hain aap? bohot achhi koshish thi aapki, yeh Ashaar hamein khaas kar pasand aaya Aie DOST tere dil ki kasak jaanta hun mai, Gar mai nahi to chain se tu bhi nahi raha. Allah aur achha likhne ki taufik ata kare AAMIN ************************ Dost milte hain magar har kisi ka saath sachha nahi hoTA per aapka aur hamara milna aisa bhi har baar nahi hoTA ************************ allah hafiz **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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Munfairy ji K0 Mera Salam Mai thik hun. Aap ne mere Ashaar parhe such mujhe bahut achaa laga or khaas ker aapka mere liye or achaa likhne ki khuda se duaa maagna suche bahut achaa laga perhker. Aap isee tarah mujhe parhte rahe or agar aapki dua or khuda ka saath raha to mai or bhi achaa likhne ki koshish karonga..Ameen Aap esee tarah mujhe housala dete rahe.. Allah Hafiz SHAAN:) ------------------------------------------------------------- Gamo ki keder karo or unke saath jiyu. Kyuki Gam kabhi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. Shaan |
mujhe sayai nahi aati
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Thanx
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Rohit ji ye achee baat hai ki aapko shayri nahi aati jo insaan waqt se chot khaya hota hai wahi shaire kar sakta hain aap itna kaam to zaroor ker sakten ki logo ko hosala dete rahen jyasa ki abhi aapne mere ashar per diya hai bas kisi shair ko yahi cheez chahye aap isee tarah humlogo ko perhte rahe.bas is umeed ke saath mai likhna banad karta hun. ok take care SHAAN |
shaan ji adaab aur namskaar
bahot hi achhi kosisH hai ye aapki aur se paRh ke bada achha laga .aapke ehsaas is meiN dikhai de rahe haiN ummid karta huN aap aage bhi yuhiN likhte raheNge khus raheN aur apna khayal rakheN duaoN ke sath ijazat allah hafiz aapka dost dhaval |
Bahut Shukriya
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Aapne mere ashar pare Bahut bahut shukriya is nacheez ko hosla dene ke liye, Aap sab jyase dost ki wajah se hi mai shayri.com per aata hun yahan bahut or bahut achee log jo humare dost ban chuke hain. Aap isee tarah mujhe parte rahen mai koshish karonga ki kuch achaa likhon... Ap ijazat dijiye Apna khyaal rakhiye or khush rahen, Take care Alllah Hafiz SHAAN |
Namaskar
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waise main bhi shayri karta hoon ek do najarana pess kar raha hoon kisi se pyar karna bura to nahi kisi ko dil me basana khata to nahi gunah hai yeh jamane ki nazar me to kya jamane wale khuda to nahi |
Aap to shiyar bhi hain
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Kyaa baat hai rohit ji dheere dheer aap ke sabhi raaj khul rahen hai. Aap to ek achee shair bhi hain or aap ne ye raaj humse chupaya rahkhaa koi baat nahi shayri.com side hi aisee hai ki wah sabhi shayron ke dil ki awaz ko pesh kerne me hub sub ko ek plateform deta hai. Mai is side ka bhi shukerguzaar hun khyair aap isee tarh likhte rahne or khuda ne chaha to aap bhi shayri.com apne jagah bana sakte hai. ok ab chalta hun [B]take care Allah Hafiz SHAAN[/B] ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Gamo ki keder karo or unke saath jiyu, Kyuki Gam kabhi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. Shaan |
hello sana
sana ko mera salam
shaan ------------------------------------------------------------------------ Gamo ki keder karo or unke saath jiyu, Kyuki Gam kabhi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah. Shaan[/QUOTE] |
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Aie DOST tere dil ki kasak jaanta hun mai, Gar mai nahi to chain se tu bhi nahi raha. tc bye --aryan |
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aapko humari koshish achaa lagi, bas aap mujhe yun hi hausla dete rahen take care SHAAN |
TariqAhmadAzami wah wah kya shayere he aapke. Aapke shayere dekkar main to bade bade Shayeroke shayere bholgaye Bahot acha kalah hain aapka!!![COLOR="Red"]
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" Yadin, yadin hoti hain, Zindgi to nahin.Hum aap ke dil may rahatay hain, dooooor to nahin... "
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namaskaar shaan ji.............aapki nazam bahut acchi lagi...sabhi sher tareef ke kabil haiN :) god bless u |
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aapko itne pasand aai Yaadon se mere dost jaya na kijye, mujhe tanhayun me rulaya na kijiye thanx yun hi padhti rahe take care ~Shaan~ |
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bohat khoobsurat ehsaas hain.............ummid hai aapki ye pyari si nazm aapki dost ko zarur pasand aayi hogi...:) zainy |
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thanx........................ humare ahsaas ji aapne samjha yun hi likhte rahe..... |
Tariq Saheb bahut hi khoooobsurat ehsaas hai
dosti kya hai ye sabko aapse seekhna chahiye tahey dil se daad quboool kijiye... dil fareb aur dil ko chu ne wali ghazal hai...khush raheye Baqz ( Sameer in disguise) |
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der ke liye maafi.. aapne ehasaas ko samjha achaa laga apna kyaal rakhe or hamesha muskurate rahe..................:) t.k. |
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