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Time To Raise The Bar Mate!!!
Time To Raise The Bar mate... Time to raise the bar mate Look beyond the war mate! Needn't look too far mate, You too can be a star mate! Stop being a judge mate, Stop holding the grudge mate! Something you don't like mate, Doesn't mean you strike mate! Planet is our home mate, All are free to roam mate! Nobody owns the land mate, Time to change ya stand mate! Not everybody's same mate, Life is not a game mate! None else to blame mate, Own up with ya name mate! ......................................... Ahmad Hyderabadi |
Bravo!! Ahmad bhai
applaud you for this wonderful piece, very well said, indeed maikash |
Ahmad bhai ...
I wish we were schoolmate :) beautiful poem .. Life is not game mate , own.it with ya name mate.. really good ... Sanjay Sehgal |
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Woww!! Kya baat haye...... bhaee my effort's been rewarded many times over!! Aapki daad dil kay qareeb janaab!! Bayhad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon aapka!! Thanks Heaps Bhaee!! :) Duago Ahmad |
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So very kind of you Sir to appreciate this tiny effort!! Sir I do wish You were my schoolmate too... but I wasn' even born Sir when u were already writing your gems of poetry!! much obliged! Thanks once again....Sir! Duago Ahmad |
Ahmed bhai aadaab..... what a poetry, what a work bhai.
do keep writing.... Shaad.... |
Ahmed bhai aadaab..... what a poetry, what a work bhai.
do keep writing.... Shaad.... |
Very beautiful poem........usually we see preaching is done upside down from the elders or the saints to the youngers or to the people on the lower stratum on Spiritual lines......but here it came from a mate...
Good work mate...... With best regards. Bhushan joshi |
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