bas chaman meiN ik aashiyaanaa hai
ab hawaa hai n aab-o-daanaa hai
bas chaman meiN ik aashiyaanaa hai (aab-o-daanaa = water and food) keh rahee hai sabaa bhi ab ke baras fasl-e-gul ka naheeN thikaanaa hai (fasl-e-gul = spring season) saath khushiyoN ka chand-rozaa hai gham se rishhtaa barhaa puraanaa hai (chand-rozaa = temporary) kuchh to rehmat bhi ho chalee dushwaar kuchh jafaaoN ka ye zamaanaa hai (rehmat = mercy, jafaa = opression) jee to kartaa hai is ko maan leiN sach ye jo teraa meraa fasaanaa hai laa-makaaN hum haiN dukh naheeN is ka dil teraa soonaa aastaanaa hai (laa-makaaN = homeless, aastaanaa = abode) mehv-e-deed-e-khiraam meiN n ye hosh ke ye aanaa teraa ke jaanaa hai (mehv-e-deed-e-khiraam = immersed in watching the graceful walk) mat rihaa kar aseer zulf-e-daraaz zabt kitnaa ab aazmaanaa hai (aseer =one who is imprisoned, zulf-e-daraaz = long hair, zabt = control) keemtee shai chhupaa ke rakhte haiN teree nekee teraa khazaanaa hai (shai = thing) jo n toofaaN meiN bhi bujhee thi lau ashq-o-aah se use bachaanaa hai (lau = flame) raaz-e-dil kab ayaaN kiyaa “zarraa” ye sukhan-goyee bas bahaanaa hai (ayaaN = evident, sukhan-goyee = poetry telling) - ZARRAA |
Waaahhhhhh Zarraa bhai..... qayaamatangez ghazal kahi hai apne is baar bhii
waahhh subhaan allaah..... Matla se maqtaa tak lutf andoz... ek kaamyaab ghazal ke liye dheron mubaarakkbaad..... likhte rahen, aate rahen... Shaad... |
Bahot KHub .... Umda Peshkash ... Kucchek Laine To Beintaha Khubsurat Ban Padi hai .....
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Zarraa ji, bahut khoobsurat ahsaas................!
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zarra jee:
namaste! kaise haiN aap? ees Ghazal ki taareef ke liye mere paas koii lafz nahiiN... baDi damdaar Ghazal !! mazaa aa gayaa... dil se daad KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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Pasand karne ka shukriya Jahhan ji |
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Sunita ji ... pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya |
Dhaval ji .... Namaskaar .... Ummeed hai aap sakushal hain .... Aapka paighaam dekh ke bahaut achchhaa laga .... Waqt dene ka aur ghazal ko pasand karne ka bahaut bahaut shukriya .... Meri jaanib se aap ko dheron duaein .... Zarraa
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aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Aadeil ji |
nice filingssssssssssss zara jiiiiiiii
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