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Rabi 9th March 2003 12:09 AM

Mere dil mein kiya hai
 
Mere dil mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Meri ankhoon mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Mere labhoon mein kiya hai yeh tum kaab jano gay
Dil, Ankhein, Labh, yeh teen raastein hain jo pyar ki manzil ki taraf jate hain.
Koun sa choose karna hai yeh tumhara faisala
Izhare Ishq kar keh to dekho nahi to humara faisala suno

Rabi

shahab_e_saqib 9th March 2003 11:13 AM

waah....
 
kya baat hai ....bahut achcha likah hai tumney ..keep it up.............

Rabi 9th March 2003 10:06 PM

thank u very much for the reply this makes me feel good and make me keep on writing..sukriya

rabi

zahra 10th March 2003 04:00 AM

wah
 
wah boht acha likh ha app na. keep it up

Rabi 10th March 2003 07:11 PM

Zahar ji...hello

thank u very much for appreciating my work..aap jaise logoon ka sahara rahe gha to mein inshallah lekhti rahoon ghi...;-)

zahra 10th March 2003 08:05 PM

your welcome
 
je bilkul hum sub ya ha per ek dusra ki taref kerna ka liya hi ha. or logo ki hosla afzai kerna ka liya. keep up the good work

Rabi 10th March 2003 09:23 PM

Exaclty I agree.....

zahra 10th March 2003 10:48 PM

hi
 
jeeee bilkul is baat sa to sub ko agree ho na chahiya. kyu kia khayal ha app ka?

Rabi 11th March 2003 03:56 AM

mein to bilkol agree karti hoon. agar hum nahi kuch kehain gay logoon ki shayri keh bare mein tab phir koun shayri lekhe gha or phir kis ki honsala afzai hogi..sab to phir yeh club chor keh chale jain gay or phir there would be nothing...hum sab ka farz hai tareef karna or issi tarhan humri shayri lekhne ko bhi dil chahe gha..everyone will be happy or koi mayoos nahi hokar jai gha..
right??????????????????

zahra 11th March 2003 06:20 AM

you are right
 
yes you are absolutly right. or agar hum kisi ka taref nahi kara ga to log to mayos ho ja a ga. or is webside per hum sub ka farz banta ha ka hum logo ki help kara. or un ki madat kara. un ka muskil waqt ma sath da . or un sa kha ka or boht acha likhta ha taka o log likhta raha.
allah hafiz

Rabi 11th March 2003 09:08 AM

jee bilkol...
yakeen karti hoon keh jis din se maine shayri.com ko sign in kiya hai uss din se sab ko reply milta hai n koi mayoos nahi dekhta inshallah ageh bhi aisa hi hoga koi mayoos nahi dekhe gha..inshallah humara farz sar ankhoon per..
allah hafiz

zeeshaan 11th March 2003 09:24 AM

HI
 
Wah, Mash-Allah kaya Khobe Kaha Ha Aap Na,,,
Buhat Hi Aacha,,,

"""Aahsas Aagar Ha Tu Muhabbat Karo Mahsoos''''''"
~~Har bat Ka Izhar Zaoroi Nahi Lub Sa~~~

Keep it up,,,
its very nice,,,,i realy love it,,,
Take care,,and keep writing,,,
B Happy,B Wealthy and B Brave,,,
Aalaha Hafiz,
ZS

romana 11th March 2003 07:08 PM

hi
 
hi
rabhiji

frist of aal great poem bhut hi acha likhti hein aap. aap aur zahri bilkul teek kehti ho i agree with u guys encouragment boost up people self confidence and esteem and helps us to write even better and agar hum kuch parein to humein reply karna chaiye because it shows that person if their poetry is good or not and wheather they can improve it or not.

keep up
romana

Rabi 11th March 2003 08:21 PM

Thank u both of u guys Zeeshan and romana jii..
I will keep righting..and Zeeshan jii....I know keh izhar karna zaroori nahi lekin kabhi kabhi insaan mayoos hojata hai..keh yeh wohi insaan hai jis mujhe jaha hai lekin izhar nahi kiya...i agree lekin kabhi to karna chahiye bechak aik hi baar,,well ne way
thanku all for appreciating my works...
allah hafiz
sab khush raho allah hai na sab theek hojai gha...
rabi

zahra 12th March 2003 05:49 AM

ji ha
 
ara mera matlab ya nahi ha ka app sub hamara liya acha comments likha. agar app logo ko koi chez acha nahi lagti ha to ya app logo ka farz banta ha ka app log us per likha ka i don't like your shayri. iso we can make are shayri better. is depend on all of you. ka ya app logo ko decide kerna ho ga ka kia chez achi lagti ha app logo ko or kia chez buri. zarori nahi ha ka app logo ki sirf taref hi kara. kyu rabi ma thek keh rahi ho na?

Rabi 12th March 2003 07:39 AM

yes exactly..bilkol theek hai yahi to hum sab ki khobhi hai keh achi lagi hai shayri to phir insaan ka farz to banta hai keh tarieef kare...i agree. with ya..
love rabi


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