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sameer'shaad' 10th February 2007 10:33 AM

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi....
 
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...

loveforgudia 30th November 2010 10:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 224950)
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...

Namaste Shaad Ji ... kaise hai aap ?? Ji sach kahe to aap ki is rachanaa pe kya kahena chaah rahe hai ... ye hume khud bhi samajh nahi aa raha .... kuchh hai jo mann mai to hai ..par shabd nahi mil rahe .. ke kahaan se shuru kare

shaayad ye kahena kaafi rahega ki .... is rachanaa mai chhupe dard ne ... aankhein num kar di .. aur dil tak pahonch gaya ...

ye aap ki kaafi puraani post hai .... par fir bhi duaa yahi hai ki ... aap ko zindagi ki har khushi mile .... aap aur aap ki kalam dono hi khushiyon ke nagame bayaan kare ....

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe

Radhika_2 30th November 2010 11:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 224950)
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...

ji bhaut khoob....................................:)

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

masoodhassas 30th November 2010 01:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 224950)
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...



aadaab
shaad bhai
kaise hain aaj subh hamaaree nigaah aap ki ghazal pe gayee ,, waah kiyaa manzar kashi ki hai yaar tarpaa diyaa

do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

is sher pe ab kiyaa kahun yaar chaye munh me atak gayee thee thehar ke sochnaa paraa kihaye kiyaa log itne bhi sang dil hote hain?
allah aap ke mahboob ki dil me narmee aor lataafat daal de aameen
mukhlis
masood hassaas


vikramjethi 30th November 2010 02:03 PM

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

bahut khoob sameer saheb, sara qalaam hi yuN to badhiya bana hai...lekin is sher ke kya kehne....

dil se daad hazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...:)

LAMHA 6th December 2010 08:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 224950)
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...


Shaad,
wahhhhhhhhhh..... yu to bahut kuch likhna tha par i m speechless... kya kahu , kya nahi, samajh me nahi aa raha...

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

is sher pe kurbaan..............
Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe... yuhi likhte rahiye......:)

sameer'shaad' 6th December 2010 11:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by loveforgudia (Post 416588)
Namaste Shaad Ji ... kaise hai aap ?? Ji sach kahe to aap ki is rachanaa pe kya kahena chaah rahe hai ... ye hume khud bhi samajh nahi aa raha .... kuchh hai jo mann mai to hai ..par shabd nahi mil rahe .. ke kahaan se shuru kare

shaayad ye kahena kaafi rahega ki .... is rachanaa mai chhupe dard ne ... aankhein num kar di .. aur dil tak pahonch gaya ...

ye aap ki kaafi puraani post hai .... par fir bhi duaa yahi hai ki ... aap ko zindagi ki har khushi mile .... aap aur aap ki kalam dono hi khushiyon ke nagame bayaan kare ....

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

Khuda Hafiz, Jay Ambe

pyaari Gudiya jee kaisi hain aap ..?? ummeed karta hoon khush hongii jee beshaq sach kaha aapne ki is kalaam me dard hi dard samaaya hua hai,... haan wo waqt bhi puraana tha aur ghaav bhi taaze the isliye soze-gham urooz pe thaa... aap aain aur hamari is adnaa si koshish ko itni izzat bakshii hum apke tahe-dil se shukar guzaar hain.... aapki khamoshi hi hamari is kalam pe daad de gain hain aur aapki inhi meherbaaniyon ke liye hum aap ko ek baar fir se shukriyaah adaa kaarte hain.... saath det rahen yoonhi... duaaon ka muntazir.

shaad..

sameer'shaad' 6th December 2010 11:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Radhika_2 (Post 416597)
ji bhaut khoob....................................:)

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.


Bahot bahot shukriyaah radhikaa jee... jo aapne hamare likhe is kalam ko saraaha.. yoonhi aati raha karen

shaad...

zarraa 7th December 2010 12:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 224950)
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...

wah wah shaad bhai !! gham aur aazurdagi ka kis junoon aur taab ke saath bayaan kiya hai. behad umda ! har sher bahaut kucchh kehta hi sirf nahiin par kaleja cheer kar nikal jaataa hai. daad aur dua ke saath ... zarraa

sameer'shaad' 7th December 2010 08:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by masoodhassas (Post 416606)
aadaab
shaad bhai
kaise hain aaj subh hamaaree nigaah aap ki ghazal pe gayee ,, waah kiyaa manzar kashi ki hai yaar tarpaa diyaa

do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

is sher pe ab kiyaa kahun yaar chaye munh me atak gayee thee thehar ke sochnaa paraa kihaye kiyaa log itne bhi sang dil hote hain?
allah aap ke mahboob ki dil me narmee aor lataafat daal de aameen
mukhlis
masood hassaas



janaab masood saahab ko hamara pyaar bhara aadaab... huzoor zarranawazi aur badii meherbaani hai aaapki jo aapne nacheez ko aur uski tahreer ko itni izzaat bakhshi... bhai sukoon se baithiye chaay shaay pijiye hamara koi aisa iraada nahi tha ki aapki chaay aatkaaaen.. :)

bas guzaarish hai ki yoonhi sath dete rahen.. aap yoonhi aate rahen..
khush rahie.

shaad...

sameer'shaad' 7th December 2010 08:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by vikramjethi (Post 416612)
ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

bahut khoob sameer saheb, sara qalaam hi yuN to badhiya bana hai...lekin is sher ke kya kehne....

dil se daad hazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...:)


Qubool kiya huzoor.. sar aankhon pe rakhhi aapki daad... bhai hame behad khushi hoti hai jab bhi aap apna keemti waqt humko aur hamari tahreer ko dete hain.. yoonhi aate rahen.. khush raahen..

shaad...

sameer'shaad' 7th December 2010 08:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LAMHA (Post 417248)
Shaad,
wahhhhhhhhhh..... yu to bahut kuch likhna tha par i m speechless... kya kahu , kya nahi, samajh me nahi aa raha...

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

is sher pe kurbaan..............
Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhe... yuhi likhte rahiye......:)




kuchh naa kaho... kuchh bhii na kaho.... sach lamhaa aapko kuch bhi kahne ki zarurat nahii hai.. aaap aati hain mahfile-yaaaraa.n me yahi tasavvure khayaalaat aur nazmon ki aukaat badhaane ke liye kaafi hain.. aapki aamad dekh ke hi dil mutmaeeen hotaa hai.. garaz naahi hai ki alfaaazon ke mohtaaaj rahen... yoonhi nek daaman me jaagh milti rahe aapki pasandeedgi se izzat milti rahe,, bandaa bada khushkismat maanega khud ko... apna khayal rakhen khush rahen...

shaad...

sameer'shaad' 7th December 2010 08:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by zarraa (Post 417265)
wah wah shaad bhai !! gham aur aazurdagi ka kis junoon aur taab ke saath bayaan kiya hai. behad umda ! har sher bahaut kucchh kehta hi sirf nahiin par kaleja cheer kar nikal jaataa hai. daad aur dua ke saath ... zarraa

pyare zarra bhai, ummeed karta hoon khush honge aap... janab aapki duaaon aur daad ka hum tahedil se istaqbaaal karte hain.. bhai har afsaane me gham ka kahin na kahin shareeq honaa lazmi hai.. aur aapko hamare jazbaaat pasand aaye yahi sabse badii baat hai... duaaon me yaaad rakhie aur duaa kije ki bande ko sukoon mile jahaan me... apna bhi khayaal rakhiye..

shaad...

ISHK EK IBADAT 7th December 2010 11:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad' (Post 224950)
aye zindgi bhar ko rooth ke jaane wale,
tu bhi khush to na hoga mujhko rulane wale.

mere dard ki har tees se tu bhi tadap uthega,
is jism ke sarapa ko zakhmon se sajane wale.

ik main hi na bhatkunga uski khoj me dar-dar,
mere bhi aks talashenge kuch mujhko bhulane wale.

jo chupana bhi chaho to ye aansu sab kah denge,
meri muhabbat ke nishaan duniya se chupane wale.

gar mayyat me bhi khamosh rahi to duniya kya kahegi,
do aansu hi baha de aye sukhi palken jhukane wale.

yahi sukoon hai ki maut bhi aayegi zindgi me ek roz,
roenge mujhko bahot kuch dost purane wale...


shaad bhai
radhe radhe


wah kya baat hai bahut khoob.........daad kubul karen bhai'
duaon ke saath

sameer'shaad' 7th December 2010 08:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT (Post 417293)
shaad bhai
radhe radhe


wah kya baat hai bahut khoob.........daad kubul karen bhai'
duaon ke saath

bahot bahot shukriyaa jo aap aa hi gaye rajender bhai.. warna kuch kamii si khal rahi thi aapki.. jaan kar sukoon mila jo aapko hamara likha pasadn aaya... yoonhi aamad banaae rakhen.. khush rahen aabaad rahen..

shaad,...


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