Mujhe gussa aa raha hai....
 

Mausam suhana,shaam ka sama...
Samundar mein pighalta suraj
Aur mere khwabon ki malika saath..
Chale hum paani ke lehron ki aur...
Ek aaya bahav aur sab chur ho gaya..
aankhein khuli aur samne koi tha...
Jago mohan pyaare subha ho gayi...
Mera jo sapna tha woh tut chuka tha...
Mere papa ne mujhe paani phek jagaya tha...
Koi to smajhaon inhe mera sapna kitna important tha..

Thanks
Rohin

hi robin,
you knw wat i logged in morning and was replying to the post of vaaiz, n tears were there in my eyes. suddenly going through the forms i came to ur post n read it n i laughed hell. well buddy see whether u r present or not ur absence bt presence in post too brought back my smile. thx buddy. pulkit was right tht this family is really gud n caring n today i admire pulkits thoughts too. bt one thing i dun think tht sapna kabi toot ta hai. jo dekha sapne mein , u can cherish everytime in ur thoughts.

shaam ke baad phir raat aayi
har jaam ke baad teri yaad aayi
chup rehkar bhi dekha humne
to dekha har saans ke baad teri yaad aayi.

well my dear dreams can never be broken its such a sweet thing tht u can always cherish in ur thoughts.

Rohin Ji,
Sapna to bahut accha tha apka, par papa ne tod diya but beleive there are many dreams apart from love which might be more importent. I am not discouraging you, but phir bhi aisi hi bataya

nice words

Dupar ka sama tha,
main so raha tha
unke khayalon mein kho raha tha
jagi soti aankhon se unko dekh raha tha
achanak kisi ne darwaza khatkhataya
maine khus hua ki mera dilbar aya
par darwaza khola to samne bijli ka bill paya

Regards Nidhi

Jasleen ji,

Shukriya aap aaye....
Meine kab kaha mein woh spana doobara nahi dekha...?
Mein toh roz dekhta hoon roz tut jaat hai...
Magar umeed par duniya kayam hai kyon...

Bhai humne toh yeh likha ta kissi ki muskurahat ke liye...
Padh kar shayad koi apsara hume yaad kar le...

LOL

Take care
Rohin

Wah Nidhi ji,

bahut khoob.... Aapne bhi mehsoos kar liya ki mein kya kehna chahtatha...lol Aapne sach kaha hai ki bahut sapne hain zindagi mein jo abhi poore karne hain... agar mera koi post padh leta to samjh jaata mera ishaara kahan hai...aap samjh gayi.. thanks

thanks
Rohin

robin,
i know wat u are trying to tell me. well u are the one who is always remembered n ur thoughts are always cherished in sumones heart.

jasleen ji,

i just wish i knew who it was...But never mind... till i know i will dream

Thanks
Rohin

hi rohin
 

hi! Rohin!
Sach..shukriya..esa kuch likhne ke liye jise padhte hi mann halka ho gaya...aur kab muska diye honth pata bhi na chala!

take care
komal

Komalji ,

Haye aapke chehre par isse padh kar muskurahat aa gayi...
Bhai yehi kahenge hum humare liye to aapki hassi se bahaar aa gayi...

thanks
Rohin

Khwab mere jo dil mein hain base
woh khwab ab honge poore
Thi jo kal tak mere sapne mein
aaj aane wali hai woh samne
Milege jab woh mujhse
to ek hi cheez kahoonga usse
Mera liye khaana pakkayegi kya
Mein khud banake hoon pakk gaya


Thanks
Rohin

hi!
 

hi ! Rohin!
.......2 gud! :) fir ek baar shukriya..hasi bikherne ke liye!

komal:)

Thanks Komal,

Keep coming

thanks
Rohin

Dost Rohin
 

Dost Rohin,

Wah! mere dost saach mein aaj to aap ne saabhi ko haasa diya...
Mujhe bhi bahut hi haasi aai dono composition paddh ke....:D
Saach mano hum saabhi ko aise hi haste aur tanhaiyon se dur hi rehna chahiye...aur aap ne woh kar dikhaya mere dost...

Shukriya aap ka...
Aise hi likhte rahiye....

Bye
Take care....
Have a wonderful time.......

Aasman mein Kya mast sama tha
Chaand taaron ka tha jamavda
beth gaye hum dono sagar kinare
dekha humne ek doosre ki aankhon mein
socha kahega kaun dil ki baat pehle
Woh pehle thoda hichkichai aur sharmayi
phir himmat kar mere poochne par kehne lagi
Mein na..purse taxi mein hi bhool aayi

Hi Rohin
 

HI Rohin,
Hahahh:D iss bar to haasi rukh hi nahi rahi hai bhai....
Bahut hi umda likha hai saach mein.....Too comic

Maaza aaga mere dost....
Excellent Stuff!:D

buddy keep writing!

Bye
Take care....
Have a wonderful time

hii!
 

HI..Rohin

:)...lagta hein aj apne hasne hasane ki than li hai...khub hein..youn hi likhte rahiye...!

take care
komal

Re: Mujhe gussa aa raha hai....
 

Sahi hai yaar mujhe bi gussa aagaya, kya picture ta life jo pani mein gul gaya

Hi Yogesh,

Dost kya kahoon....Kuch dino se meine bahut logo ko udaas kar diya tha apni udaasi bhari shayri se....
Magar zindagi ka asool apna

Kissi ke muskurane ke kaam aaon to zindagi samjho safal ho gayi hai...
Koshish karoonga dard ko hassi ke ghol mein daal doon..

Thanks
Rohin

Re: hii!
 

Thanks komal

smile as long a mile and u will se how easy the journey of life cna be

thanks
Rohin

Re: Re: Mujhe gussa aa raha hai....
 

Bhai dost aap yahan aaye bahut acha laga...
yuhin aate rehna shayad mein aapke hasne ke kaam aa sakon

Thanks
Rohin

Mausam ne bhi tha kya rang badla
Kale badlon ka laga tha mela
Ghan ghan paani phir barsa
Nachne laga phir mor, pankh felaya
Dekh barish nikle hum dono bahar
Pass mein usse apne bulaya
Bareesh ke pani mein bheega hua tan uska
Kaha meine "mein chaabi andar bhul kar aaya"

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Rohin

hi
 

hi rohin!!!!

thanx a lot for this thread i had not read it before it really did cheer me up!!!!!!! and needless to say that u r absolutely FANTASTIC!!!!!!!

hi robbin,
well u knw i am regreting why didnt i read ur post yesterday. well its amazing buddy. well i laughed hell while reading each post of urs. simply fantastic n superb. awesome buddy. well there r very few ppl in this world who try to make others happy n u r among them. well today even i wish tht i cud bring smile on ur face. i am writing sumthing ahead . lets see if i cud make ur day today.

Tum paas aaye, yun muskuraye,
Apne battis daant aise dikhaye,
dekh ke mera dil phoot-phoot kar rota hai yaar
Tumse brush bhi thik se nahi hota hai.


Jab tumhein dekhu my dil start flying,
tumse baat karne ko I keep trying,
jab tu dur jaye I feel like crying,
aare itna mat chad I was just lying.

Hi Shivani,

Thanks I hope i can always put a smil on ur face

thanks
Rohin

Hi Jasleen,

Whenever i think of my friends i always have a smile...
Seeing them smile reeally makes me happy...
I will show off my teeths more often to you now....:D


Take Care
Rohin

Raah par yunhi chalte chalte
Inteezar kar rahe the apni malika ka
Samay ka kaata kitna dheere chal raha tha
Phir ek hawa ka jhoka aaya
Nazar ghumay.."What a babe yaar!!!"
Itne mein kissi ne mera kaan kheecha
Dekha to meri malika khadi thi
Boli-"Aaj se meri teri katti"

Thanks
Rohin

Kya bat hai Rohin bahut khub

Bas isi ummeed par duniya hia kayam
khawab hamre honge poore
jo ane wali thi samne apke
phir se chup gayi hai
kya karen khana banake to woh bhi pak gayi hai :D

Regards Nidhi

Hi Rohin,
Ha Ha Ha, very very funny hmm kya reply karoon

Aasman ke mast samay mein
Chand taron ke jamvade mein
Hum unki ghani zulfon mein kho gaye
khote khote khote khote hum dono wahin par so gaye
sote sote sote sote uth gaye
socha kya hassen sama hai yeh
woh mere pas hai
socha zara ek nigah un par bi marein hum
dekha to hosh ud gaye
hum to sherni ke sath soye the


I know not too good, I hope it wud make somebody smile.


Regards Nidhi

Re: Mujhe gussa aa raha hai....
 

hey rohin tooooo gooood ........

bechara rohin yahan bhi koi kudi saaaaaath nahi....

Sahi jawab nidhi madam....

Vaise subha subha har ladki sherni hi lagti hai :D

Take Care
Rohin

Ek khwab hai mera
Chota sa ho ghar apna
Mein hoon aur meri Mrs
Milkar gaayenge hum duet
Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho...
Itne mein ghanti baj jaye
Ja ke kholon darwaza
To bache aan jaye


Thanks
Rohin

Rohin bhai kya baat hai, lagta hain hunting pe ho. Best of luck....

Hi shadow bhai,

Nahi dost hunting kahan.

Mein to ghass phus khata hoon.
To shikar kiska ...LOL

Thanks
rohin

Tumhara haal tab to shayad us gaane ke tarah hai
Shikari kud yahan shikar ban gaya
Kya ....... (I dont remember complete)

To kaun ghas dalli(Jo ab ka rahe ho), toda sunao to sahi....
Ya phir se "Kwaab mein dekha ek kwaab"

Nice to see You All enjoying :)**
 

Rohin, keya hua? Hope You are ok*Your Writing, as usual "great"**I will write down some lines of a song, Hope it's any good to You & All*
Nidhi Jee, Your writing did made me smile :)**
Shadow Jee, Nice to see You**
Zindegi Ko Sawar De Maula~Husn Iss Ko Nikhar De_Nikhar De Maula~Tere Jalwon Ko Dekhne Ke Liye_Mujh Ko Aankhen Haazar De Maula~Song :) Ab Rona Nahin, Got My Point...lol...Khush Rahon"Rahiye" ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat,,,**Take Care...God Bless You All.:) :)

Keep smilling.......:)

Yaar taaza taaza uggi thi...

Re: Nice to see You All enjoying :)**
 

LOl

Haan mein theek hoon Kyon? Mujhe kya hona hai...
hmmm thanks

Rohin

Tumhein tou kuchh ho hi nahin sakta...lol...
 

Younhi socha puchhloun :) Waise itni der tak keya kar rahe ho? Office nahin jaana hain Keya? It's 2am You know :) Jaakar sojaaon, samjhe? Main bhi jaa hi rahi houn*Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...God bless You.:) :)

Keep smilling.......:)

Rohin you are too Good, Love to read your shayries:

Khwab mere jo dil mein hain base
woh khwab ab honge poore
Thi jo kal tak mere sapne mein
aaj aane wali hai woh samne
Milege jab woh mujhse
to ek hi cheez kahoonga usse
Mera liye khaana pakkayegi kya
Mein khud banake hoon pakk gaya

I am sure you will get some one who will cook your fav food.

Mausam ne bhi tha kya rang badla
Kale badlon ka laga tha mela
Ghan ghan paani phir barsa
Nachne laga phir mor, pankh felaya
Dekh barish nikle hum dono bahar
Pass mein usse apne bulaya
Bareesh ke pani mein bheega hua tan uska
Kaha meine "mein chaabi andar bhul kar aaya"
I am sure She will make sure you don't forget your keys inside of your home..

Ek khwab hai mera
Chota sa ho ghar apna
Mein hoon aur meri Mrs
Milkar gaayenge hum duet
Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho...
Itne mein ghanti baj jaye
Ja ke kholon darwaza
To bache aan jaye



Ye shayri to bahut funny hain, burra mat maan lena, meine kaha bahut acchi hain...

Thank you very much for saring with us, I am so lucky that I get to read nice shayries...

Hi Parul,

I am glad you liked it.
I just hope it made you smile.
That is what is more important.

It is because of people like you who read and appreciate we are able to write. So keep coming bacck

Thanks
Rohin