Kahi Kuch Kami Hai Tere Bager :(
Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager...
Na rang hai na roshni hai tere bager... Maousam bhi karvat ab badal raha hai Waqt apni raftaar se chal raha hai Bas dhadkan meri thami hai tere bager Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager... Ho gye kathin ab mere liye raste Ujaale hi ujaale hai duniya ke vaste Low mere jivan ki thami hai tere bager Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager... Milta nahi mujhse parwaana ab mera Khushiyo ko bhi dikhta nahi thikaana ab mera Mere hi ghar me gami hai tere bager Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager... Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager Kahi kuch kami hai tere bager... |
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radhe radhe' bahut khoob.......sundar ehsaason ke liye dil se daad likhti rahiye duaon ke saath |
pahle apko pada hi hoga magar shayad itna kabhi mutaasir nahi hua hu mai jo aaj hua...
is baar magar aapne kamaal kar diya... aisa laga jaise shayri apne zabaan se kuch bol rahi ho......... aapne metaphors bahut acche istemaal kiye hai on the whole ek bahut hi acchi koshish.... format bhi apka kabile taareef hai is baar is kalaam ke liye dher saari daad haazir hai regards |
kavita ji bhot sunder peshkesh hai.N aapki
pawan(shayari) |
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Aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad ishq ji |
Khoobsurat peshkash Kavita jee.....
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Chu kar mujhe hawa bhi kehti kuch nahi
Sath mera mout bhi deti ab nahi Jeene ki aas bhi nahi hai tere bager good one kavita ji.. keep writin.. take care.. |
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Shukriya Zidd Ji,, Aapko yahan dekh kar bahut khushi hui....!!! Dil se shukriya....:) |
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bahut sundar likha hai aapne...ehsaas behad achhe lage mujhe... aapke is qalaam pe daad haazir hai, qubuul kijiyega...:) |
Kavita Ji ... Ab tak ki sab se umdaa peshkash lagi mujhe ... bahut hi khoobsurati se aapne ehsaasoN ko prastut kiya hai...dil ko chhuune me kaamiyaab rahi ... aapki rachna .... bahut khoob .... Very Impressive Indeed... ! SuperB Creation...dil se daad hazir hai... yunhi likhi rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...
reps++++ duaaon ke saath.... |
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bhut khoob likha hai aapne ek acha andaaz e bayaaN jo ki muta'assir karta hai yuN hi likhti rahiye daad hazir hai qubool keejiye
aslam |
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Dhanyawad Sajid ji................. :) |
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Thanx a lot Shipra ji............... :) |
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Shukriya Vikram ji, Daad dil se qubool hai Vikram ji,, Teh dil se shukriya......:) |
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Baht bahot dhanyawad meri koshish ko pasand karne ke liye....Teh dil se dhanyawaad ji....:) |
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Bahut bahut shukriya.. aapki daad dil se qubool hai Aslam ji.......... :) |
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Reminds me of a song by late Rafi Ji : Kaise kategi zindagi tere bagair tere bagair PaaouNga har shay kami tere bagair tere bagair Keep penning and take care, ok...? :) |
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aise hi sath dete rahiyega...... :) Regards, Kavita |
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Bahut accha likhti ho.......keep writing !!! aapka. |
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Ishwar na karen...Aise daur se koi gujre....!!! Aur shabdo ki jarurat nahi.. aap yaha aaye yahi bahut hai.....!!! Aise hi sath dete rahiyega....!!! Regards Kavita |
Kavitaa jii,
Bahut hii sundar ehsaas.. aur utana si sundar bayaan.. dil se daad qabool kare.. duwao ke sath.. Omi Quote:
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Kavita ji,
bahut khoob .... ehsaas bahut sunder hai aur unki bayani kaafi asardaar... dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi likhte rahiye....khush rahiye...:):):) rep+++++++++++++++ added :) |
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shukriya Omi ji Daad dil se qabool hai Omi JI,,,,, |
dil me gahra suraakh kar gai aapki nazam . kiu.n likhte hai.n aap itna badhia +++raps:)
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Ek sunder kavish aapki negi ji....bahoot hi achha likhte haiN aap isi tarah aage bhi likhterahiyega...
Harash |
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Dil me gehra suraakh kr gai meri nazam :D bhot bhot shukriya :) |
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Aise hi sath dete rahiyega :) |
Hey kavita mujhe ye apki koshish bht hi achi lagi.....apka har lafz aur har soch beshaq kabil e tareef hai....apka har ehsas bht hi pyara aur khubsurat hai.....ese hi likhte rahiye aur SDC ko sajate rahiye.....
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Aasefa ji, Mujhe padhne aur sarhaane k liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....Aise hi sath dete rahiyega..... |
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