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Forum: Aapki Shayri 18th August 2016, 07:49 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,581
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Utsah vardhan ka Hardik Dhanyavaad !

Utsah vardhan ka Hardik Dhanyavaad !
Forum: Aapki Shayri 16th August 2016, 07:23 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,581
Posted By Hatim Jawed
एक अंजान सफ़र पर निकला

गज़ल
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एक अंजान सफ़र पर निकला ।
मैं तेरी याद पहन कर निकला ।।

चोट खा खा के दुआएँ लौटीं ।
जिसको पूजा वही पत्थर निकला ।।

पी गया ख़ून पसीना मेरा ।
कितना कमज़र्फ समन्दर निकला ।।
Forum: Aapki Shayri 15th May 2013, 03:17 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,823
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Shukriya Janab sameer shaad sb. !!

Shukriya Janab sameer shaad sb. !!
Forum: Aapki Shayri 28th April 2013, 02:36 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 2,992
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Bahut hi umda Parveen komal ji.

Bahut hi umda Parveen komal ji.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 28th April 2013, 02:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,096
Posted By Hatim Jawed
karam farmaai ka bahut-bahut shukriya Shakil...

karam farmaai ka bahut-bahut shukriya Shakil sahab! sada khush rahiye.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 28th April 2013, 01:56 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,716
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Mohtaram janab Misum moosavi sahab ! baja farmaya...

Mohtaram janab Misum moosavi sahab ! baja farmaya aap ne k iss ghazal ka behr hai:-
Ma-faa-i-lun Fa-i-laa-tun Ma-faa-i-lun Fa-i-lun
Magar meri naqis samajh se iss ghazal ke chand misray iss behr...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th April 2013, 01:43 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 3,300
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Wahh! kya baat hai !! Bahut khoob Aru ji !!!

Wahh! kya baat hai !! Bahut khoob Aru ji !!!
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th April 2013, 01:24 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,096
Posted By Hatim Jawed
PaaoN meiN raftaar jaga kar rakhta hai

GHAZAL
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Manzil ko paazeb bana kar rakhta hai |
PaaoN meiN raftaar jaga kar rakhta hai ||

Dafnata hai roz tamannaaeN apni |
Dil ko qabristaan bana kar rakhta hai ||

Lub par...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th April 2013, 01:05 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,675
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Karam farmaai ka tahe-dil se shukriya Feroz sahab...

Karam farmaai ka tahe-dil se shukriya Feroz sahab !
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th April 2013, 12:58 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,823
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Thumbs up Hausla afzaai ka bahut-bahut shuriya Feroz...

Hausla afzaai ka bahut-bahut shuriya Feroz sahab!sada shaad-o-aabaad raheN.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th April 2013, 12:47 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,716
Posted By Hatim Jawed
wah! kya baat hai Misum moosavi sahab !! bahut hi...

wah! kya baat hai Misum moosavi sahab !! bahut hi umda ghazal inayat ki hai aap ne..daad qubool farmaaeN...,magar ek baat...,isay meri naqis ilmi salaahiyat kaheiN k she'r no. 5,6,8 aur 9 ka behr...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th April 2013, 05:18 AM
Replies: 30
Views: 3,342
Posted By Hatim Jawed
masha allah ! Bahut hi haseen ghazal ! Mubaarak...

masha allah ! Bahut hi haseen ghazal ! Mubaarak ho shaad sahab !
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th April 2013, 05:03 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,189
Posted By Hatim Jawed
wahh ! kya baat hai Naresh mehra ji !! sahi samay...

wahh ! kya baat hai Naresh mehra ji !! sahi samay par sahi prahaar !!! bahut hi umda !!!!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th April 2013, 04:53 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,403
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Masha ALLAH! bahut hi umda ghazal inayat ki hai...

Masha ALLAH! bahut hi umda ghazal inayat ki hai aap ne Ahmad Bhai ! dheroN daad hazir haiN...qabool farmaaeN.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th April 2013, 04:39 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,209
Posted By Hatim Jawed
wah! kya baat hai Shakil bhai !! bahut khoob !!!...

wah! kya baat hai Shakil bhai !! bahut khoob !!! har ek she'r pe dheroN daad qabool farmaaeN..
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th April 2013, 04:27 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,675
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Bhai Ahmad Shakil sahab ! shairy.com par aksar...

Bhai Ahmad Shakil sahab ! shairy.com par aksar aap ko paRhne ka sharf hasil hota hai...bahut pasand karta hooN maiN aapko...yahaN aap ko dekh kar dili mosarrat hasil hui hai...behad mamnoon hooN...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th April 2013, 01:07 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,675
Posted By Hatim Jawed
meri adna si takhleeq ke liye itne khoobsoorat...

meri adna si takhleeq ke liye itne khoobsoorat alfaaz se nawaazne ke liye tahe-dil se shukriya ! sada khush rahiye..!!
Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th April 2013, 12:58 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,675
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Behad mamnoon hooN aapka Sameer shaad sb.! iss ...

Behad mamnoon hooN aapka Sameer shaad sb.! iss husla-afzaai k liye
Forum: Aapki Shayri 12th April 2013, 02:40 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,675
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Bahut-bahut shukriya Naresh mehra sahab !

Bahut-bahut shukriya Naresh mehra sahab !
Forum: Aapki Shayri 12th April 2013, 12:27 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,823
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Teri mutthi meiN teri qismat hai

GHAZAL
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KoshishoN se agar muhabbat hai |
Teri mutthi meiN teri qismat hai ||

kaat kar wo hamaare par bole |
jaao parwaaz ki ijazat hai ||

Teg hai maiN hooN meri gardan hai |
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th March 2013, 02:42 PM
Replies: 18
Views: 5,160
Posted By Hatim Jawed
wah! bahut khoob aahna ji!! bahut hi khoobsoorti...

wah! bahut khoob aahna ji!! bahut hi khoobsoorti se aap ne ehsasaat ko alfaaz ka libaas pahnaya hai.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th March 2013, 02:18 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 4,039
Posted By Hatim Jawed
wah! kya baat hai!!bahut khoob!!!

wah! kya baat hai!!bahut khoob!!!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th March 2013, 12:58 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,273
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Thumbs up Wah ! kya baat hai !! bahut khoob Pradhyuman...

Wah ! kya baat hai !! bahut khoob Pradhyuman Bismil sb.!! chhoti behr meiN achchhi GHAZAL.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 26th March 2013, 12:34 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,675
Posted By Hatim Jawed
kyo'N ye nafrat...

QIT'A
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Kyo'N ye nafrat ye badzani kaisi ?
ek dooje se berukhi kaisi ??
ek aadam ke hai'N sabhi bete ,
phir ye aapas meiN dushmani kaisi ??
----Hatim Jawed.

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Forum: Aapki Shayri 24th March 2013, 01:33 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,337
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Hauslo'N ko quwat ata farmaane ke liye aap sab ka...

Hauslo'N ko quwat ata farmaane ke liye aap sab ka behad shukrguzaar hooN.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 23rd March 2013, 05:33 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,337
Posted By Hatim Jawed
Hatim Jawed ki shairy

GHAZAL
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Tera wajood samandar bikhar gaya hota |
Nadi na pyas bujhati to mar gaya hota ||

Jo aaj amn ki asmat na loot li jaati |
Wo shakhs laut ke mahfooz ghar gaya hota ||

Hamaare...
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