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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th March 2006, 09:06 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 4,901
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bhai waah

Aadaab huzoor. i hope ki aapne pehchaan to liya hi hoga. arse baad in sheroN ke zariye mulaakaat ho rahi hai.

bahot khoob ghazal hai. Aaj ek arse baad shayri.com per lauta aur aapki ye ghazal...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th May 2004, 11:10 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 371
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ek sher...

yaaraan-e-mehfil ko rahul ka salaam.

bas ek sher...

hum miT gaye to miT gayiiN parchhaaiiyaaN
tanhaa tanhaa reh gayiiN tanhaaiiyaaN


R @ H u L
Forum: Aapki Shayri 26th September 2003, 04:18 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 747
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bahot khoob

bahot khoob..

hameiN ghazal bahot pasand aayi.
likhte rahiyega.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 25th September 2003, 08:24 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,540
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bahot khoob.....

bahot accha lagaa aapki ghazal padhke..
shayri ke rules aur kuch gair shaayraanaa words ko agar nazar andaaz kiyaa jaaye to ... jo khayaal aapne pesh kiye hain... hame bahot apne se lage. aaj arse...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th May 2003, 02:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 509
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bahot bahot shukriyaa..

shukriya. priya jee aur banjara jee.

ek waqt tha.. jab roz is bazm me haazri lagvaayaa karte the..

aajkal fursat nahi milti.. so nahi aa paate..

fir bhi jab bhi waqt mila.. apna kalaam...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 16th April 2003, 03:16 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,915
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
waah huzoor waah

bahot khoob saxena saahab bahot khoob

aapki ghazal ki kya taareef karu...
sab ke sab sher kamaal ke nikle.....

bahot khoob... dil khush kar diya aapne..

likhte rahiye.. aapki ghazlein kam...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 6th October 2002, 03:10 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,051
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
thodi aur pilaa.

bazm-e-husn ka pyaasaa hun , mat yaad dilaa mujhe
rag rag me mai bahaa de , thodi aur pilaa mujhe.

jab tak teri yaadoN me mehkaa karenge hum
mai piye bina hi ....behkaa karenge hum..

aadaab.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th October 2002, 02:22 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 715
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
behtar.

aadaab monal saahibaa..
jazbaat to bahot acche the sher me..ghazal kehne ki bhi acchi koshish thi...lekin....kya aapko aisa nahi lagta ki ye lines kahin suni hui hain. khayal bahot umdaa pesh kiya...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 30th September 2002, 11:13 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 976
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
shukriyaa..luvsuman jee.

luvsuman jee bahot bahot shukriya ki aapko hamara kalaam pasand aaya......jee aajkal bazm me haazri hi nahi lagvaa paate waqt hi nahi milta......fir bhi aapko sher pasand aaya aur aap hamare liye...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 21st September 2002, 11:59 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 976
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
arsaa hua hai.

arsaa hua hai aapka deedaar kiye hue
arsaa hua hai kisi se takraar kiye hue
kuch din aur ruk jayenge teri khaatir
arsaa hua hai kisi ka intezaar kiye hue.

aadaab.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 21st September 2002, 11:52 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 976
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
saahil se dekh le.

ek aur adhoora sher.....waqt ki paabandi ki wajah se is adhoore sher ko poora nahi kar paya......fir bhi aapke jawaabaat ka intezaar rahega.....

chal doobta hun main saahil se dekh le
acchi...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 21st September 2002, 11:47 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 976
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ek chota sa sher.

jee is bazm me bahot arse baad lauta hun....ek sher aapki nazar karne jaa raha hun.....ise matlaa bana ke ghazal likh saka to jaroor pesh karunga.....filhaal....

bahot berukhi darbadar dekhte hain...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd April 2002, 02:14 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 680
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ikraar kar chuke hum....

aadaab doston.....aaj kal kismat saath nahi hai....arsa ho jata hai is mehfil me aaye hue......fir bhi aaj aaya hi hun to ek chota sa sher arj hai........umeed hai pasand aayega......

be-waqt had...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th March 2002, 09:06 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 552
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
taqdeer ki satranj ka..........

hi all.....kaafi din ho gaye.....shayri.com per aaye hue.....aajkal kuch jyada hi kaam rehne laga hai dosto....fir bhi vaada raha ki...jab bhi vapas aaunga.....kuch nayi ghazlon ke saath hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th January 2002, 09:59 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 744
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bahot khoob

wow maikash jee aapne fir se ek teer chhod diya. is baar to hamare bachne ki koi umeed nazar nahi aa rahi. aisi ghazlein to main kitaabon me dhoondha karta tha par nahi mil paati thi. har ek line...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th January 2002, 05:46 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 803
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bahot bahot shukriya..........

bahot bahot shukriya shumaila jee aur maikash jee.

hame bahot khushi hui ki aaplog ne meri galtiyaan mujhe batayi. woh kya hai na ......ki tareef to sabhi karte hain par agar koi galti batane...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st January 2002, 01:12 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 803
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ye to hamari kismat hai........

shukriya aapko hamara sher pasand aaya. jahan tak beher ki baat hai main koshish karunga ki agali baar se iska bhi dhyaan rakh sakun. vaise achanak hi khayal aaya ki ye ghazal likhun. vaise iska...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2002, 11:11 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 753
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
kurbaan.............maikash jee

kya sher likha hai aapne. kurbaan jaun. hame yakeen nahi hota ki aapke is sher ka kisi ne reply nahi kiya. bahot khoob. aap sarvopari to pehle hi the. ye wala sher hame sach me bahot pasand aaya....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2002, 09:38 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 803
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
woh nisaani yaar ki..................read it once.

doston pehli baar koi badi ghazal likhne ja raha hu. aapki duaayen ya meri kismat kuch bhi kahiye. mujhe bahot khushi hogi agar maikash jee ye ghazal padhkar mujhe meri galtiyaan batayen. am...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th January 2002, 10:18 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,695
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
sach kaha aapne

maikash jee aapne sach kaha hai. ye achi baat nahi hai kisi ki ghazalein chura ke apne naam se release karna. agar gaurav jee ya aap is baare me kuch kare to acha rahega. this is not fair.
aapko...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2002, 07:18 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 442
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
zara dheere se bol raj - e -bewafaai....

jara dheere se bol raj - e - bewafaai
mera dil teri aawaj sun raha hai.

teri yaadon ka toofaan kuch is tarah aaya
bikhre hue tinke woh aaj tak chun raha hai.

har aashiyaan mera tune toda hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2002, 01:36 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 692
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ye to hamari khushnaseebi hai

well kayamat jee aur prachijee shukriya. hame ye jankar bahot khushi hui ki aapko ye sher pasand aaya. actually ye sher to hamne bas aise hi dosto ke beech baithe baithe likha tha. kuch haalaat hi is...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2002, 12:43 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 518
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
well i will try

prachi jee aap bura mat manana lekin maine poora shayri.com dekha aapne kisi bhi aur ko reply nahi kiya hai mere alawa. kya main pooch sakta hu kyon???? vaise chote aur bade sheron ki jahan tak...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2002, 12:26 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 559
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
well i think ........

hi prachi jee, aapka ek aur reply padha ye bhi acha tha. haan kuch sawalaat bhara tha. fir bhi hame bahot khushi hui.

vaise to bahot kuch hai kehne ke liye fir bhi ek sher yaad aa raha hai sayad...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th January 2002, 11:43 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,057
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
shukriya prachiji

aapko ghazal pasand aayi. hamare liye isse khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai. vaise main normally ghazalein nahi likhta. chote sher par kuch wajan wale likhne me maja aata hai. ek choti si baat ko sirf...
Forum: Humourous Shayri 12th January 2002, 10:43 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,073
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
zahe-naseeb.........

shukriya dilselovegirl jee. acha laga aapka reply padh ke. vaise aap hamesha koshish karte rahiyega ki aapko khayaal aate rahen. kyonki khayal hi zindagi me kaamyabi ki pehli seedhi hoti hai. par...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th January 2002, 05:49 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 451
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
bas ek aas hai...........

well dosto badi jaldi me likhi hai ye choti si ghazal. aaj waqt nahi tha par haan itna jaroor kahunga ki ye adhoori hai , waqt milte hi ise poori kar ke aapke samne pesh karunga.



hosh hai na...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th January 2002, 02:08 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 692
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
doori se baat kar.

parde me rakh husn ko apne , fir sawalaat kar
kahin utar na jaun teri rooh me .. jara doori se baat kar.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th January 2002, 10:37 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 518
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
tujhe saahil mile.......

mere mehboob......................
hame mile jaam - e - tanhai , tujhe bahare mehfil mile
hame doobne de dariya - e ishq me , ja tujhe saahil mile.

rahUL i
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th January 2002, 05:25 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 559
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
to kya baat thi.

tum "tum" ho yehi to taqdeere ka khel hai
agar tum "hum" hote to kya baat thi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd January 2002, 06:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,057
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
waqt leta hai..........

meri taqdeer ko khuda ne ishq ki rehmat bakshi
mera aks banane me aaina aajkal waqt leta hai

dene ko to de diya tune ae khuda nasha - e - ishq
chandhne ko to chad jayega, utarne me thoda waqt...
Forum: Shayri-e-Sharaab 2nd January 2002, 03:22 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 693
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
wah shumailaji. wah

bahot pasand aaya aapka ye sher ... gazab...
sheikh se saaki bana diya. wah

likhte rahiye
rahUL
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st January 2002, 03:52 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 607
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
teri nigaah......

teri nigaah ka dastoor to dekh hame haath tak na uthane diye
is dil - e - betaab ko jara thaam to lene dete.

rahUL i......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st December 2001, 11:40 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 392
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
happy new year

sorry dosto aaj koi sher nahi likh raha hu bas ek choti si badahi aap sab ke liye.....

HAPPY NEW YEAR... TO ALL OF YOU.....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st December 2001, 03:43 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 430
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
gum ka wajan na rakh............

gamon ka wajan na rakh
dil se dil ka taar toot jayega,
tere aage sar jhuka deta
par kya karu mera khuda mujhse rooth jayega
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th December 2001, 10:34 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 455
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
khuda bhi ro pade......

nigaah ko itna paak rakh, o karigar taqdeer ke,
ke teri nazar sabse pehele taqdeer - e - khuda pe pade
ghazal ko taqdeere - e -maut pehloo samajh ke likh,
ki usko agar khuda padhe to woh bhi ro...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th December 2001, 10:25 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 813
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
feeling u.......

shukriya shumaila jee,
is baat ki khushi hui ki sher aapko acha laga. par is baat ka thoda sa afsos hua ki aapko ye sher mera nahi laga. viase isme aapki koi galti nahi hai. is choti si umr me...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 30th December 2001, 09:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 637
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
zahenaseeb.....

shukriya shumaila jee. jab zahan me koi baat aaye aur fir zubaan pe layi jaye. tab tak woh baat sirf ek khayal rehti hai. par jab sunne wala uska ek acha respone de means ek acha reply de aur use...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th December 2001, 08:49 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 803
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ye bheegi palkein kehti hain

ye bheegi palkein kehti hain ummeed abhi bhi baaki hai,
ye raat kabhi to beetegi woh subah kabhi to aayegi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 29th December 2001, 08:46 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 630
Posted By RAHUL TRIVEDI
ye bheegi palkein kehti hain

ye bheegi palkein kehti hain ummeed abhi bhi baaki hai,
ye raat kabhi to beetegi woh subah kabhi to aayegi.
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