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Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th June 2005, 08:02 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,806
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
really liked it...!!

Hi Namita,

Aapka khayaal bahut achha laga...
humne bhi kuch aisa hee khayaal apni ek kavita mein likha hua hai....

humari kavita Punjabi mein hai....
iss liye hum uska anuvaad bhi likh...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 4th June 2005, 06:19 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,402
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Question Dosti- Ek sawaal - kuch jawaab- aur talaash??

Shayri.com mein aane waale sab dostoN ki nazar ek nai koshish.....

Bas ik sawaal sa mann mein chalta rehta hai......
us ka jawaab talaashne kee koshish ki hai.....





Dosti- Ek sawaal -...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 13th May 2005, 01:44 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 951
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Chandni ki Tapish

Chand ke Kirno Ki Tapish
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"Na Poocho ....Chaand ke Kirno me tapish hoti hai .... kitnee"
"Pighla de yeh himalaye ko.... bana ke rakh de ik Tsunami"
...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 7th May 2005, 04:56 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 4,676
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Ishq dekh kar agar kiya ja sakta... to phir...

Ishq dekh kar agar kiya ja sakta...
to phir andha pyaar nahi hota...
Milta yeh bhi dukaano mein...
iska bhi koi baazaar hota...


Cheers!!
tusi.kaun.ho.g
Forum: Aapki Shayri 27th April 2005, 08:17 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 730
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Lightbulb Deewan-Faqir

Pyaare Dosto,

Aap Logon ka pyaar mila , jee khush hua...
Kuch aur Khayaal aapki nazar karta hun , umeed hai kee aapko pasand aayenge...


Deewana-Faqir


Samajhna Do...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 19th April 2005, 12:06 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,077
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Thumbs up Dekha Roop na Jiska

Hi ,

Aap logo.N se milna accha lagta hai.....

Yeh ek choti see...... kahani ...ko ghazal/kavita ke roop mein likhne kee koshish kee hai ....


Roop

Dekha Roop na...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 17th April 2005, 03:37 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,494
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Hi Naina, Aap bahut hee achha likhti...

Hi Naina,


Aap bahut hee achha likhti haiN....
Really I liked the thought and its presentation........

A small complimentary addition to your original composition....

Teri Milne Kee Ummeed...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th April 2005, 10:36 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 820
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Question Ehsaas........!!!

Ehsaas

""Ehsaas jab jism kee hadd se bahar nikal jaate haiN...."
"Rooh ki hadd mein jakar hi...phir.....yeh samajh aate haiN"

"zehen pe apne tu jyaada eitbaar na karna ...."mere dost" "...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 14th April 2005, 10:40 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 938
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
thanks

Thanks Parul!!

Thanks a Ton!!
Forum: Aapki Shayri 13th April 2005, 09:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 938
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Lightbulb Anjaan Rahe.N

Anjaan Rahe.N

Kai rah zindagi mein aisee bhi hoti hai..
ke jinki koi manzil nahin hoti...

Hota hai jahan sirf aagaz-e-safar
anjaam ki zara bhi khabar nahin hoti....

Chalte rehte hain phir...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 9th April 2005, 07:45 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,316
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Please donot misunderstand

Garima jee,

I am sorry if you have understood it that way.

It was not like that...

I know you that had asked for my name... in the reply post..


But this compostion was wriiten by me...
Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 9th April 2005, 01:53 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 1,316
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Lightbulb Teri Khayaalo.N ki Duniya

Hi All,

This was written by me as an answer to some body.
The question she asked was " tusi kaun ho g"
meaning there by ........ " who are u"

Happy reading.....

Cheers!!...
Forum: Inspiring Stories 8th April 2005, 08:55 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,511
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Mera Naam.......

Mera Naam

na karna tu zara sa bhi gaaM ......
ke abhi Zindagi meiN bahut jaaM baki.....

naaM bhi bata doonga ik din......
karne ko abhi bahut kaam baaki hai...

zara nazar utha ke...
Forum: Inspiring Stories 8th April 2005, 08:54 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,015
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
my name

Hi Garima.


Thanks for your reviews.

For your query regarding my name...... Follow my next post.


Cheers!!
tusi.kaun.ho.g
Forum: Inspiring Stories 8th April 2005, 08:26 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,015
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Hi Garmia , Thanks for your views. ...

Hi Garmia ,

Thanks for your views.

Translated into Hindi ... it would be like this...


Jazbaato.N ka agar koi Mulyae hota...
Dhani main bhi zaroor hota.....
Sajaaya kisi malika-ke-taj...
Forum: Inspiring Stories 8th April 2005, 08:10 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,526
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Trust --liked it

Hi Sim,

This is my my first brush with shayri.com.

Today I went through the site in a zigzag fashion......

I like the image link ...... which u had posted......


I would follow ... may...
Forum: Inspiring Stories 8th April 2005, 07:53 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,015
Posted By tusi.kaun.ho.g
Post Jazbaata.N da Mul

Jazbaata.N da Mul


JazbaataN da je Mul Painda, [ Mul = value]

Dhani main v zaroor hunda, [Dhani = Rich]

Sajaaya Kise Malika de taj wich jaanda,

naam mera v Koh-e-noor hunda..
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