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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th June 2003, 04:50 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,201
Posted By damal
hi kshitiz how r u...kshitiz i like u'r ghazal...

hi kshitiz how r u...kshitiz i like u'r ghazal very much..it's so
great..u'r effort will not be reuned...it will do something for u..
again cograts to u for a great ghazal...
hope to get u'r...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd May 2003, 04:59 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 692
Posted By damal
tum par aaye balaye har us pal se pahle dil...

tum par aaye balaye har us pal se pahle
dil mera sau duayee diye jayega
jab talak sans chalti hai chalta rahega
daur ye dosti ka najar aayega

bahot ehsas bhari ghazal likhi hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th May 2003, 01:15 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,261
Posted By damal
yaad karna bhula dena to unki aadat hai ...

yaad karna bhula dena to unki aadat hai
meharbani se kab tak dil me jagah paunga main
kshitiz lafj un laboon pe na ek bojh lage
hurf is nam ka har ek mita jaunga main

mere dil mein...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th May 2003, 11:20 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 632
Posted By damal
hasrat thi tere qadmuo main dam niqlian bewafa...

hasrat thi tere qadmuo main dam niqlian
bewafa tum nahain badnaseeb hum niqlain


Tum geroun se gila karte ho humne apno ko azmaya hai.
Tum kanton se bach kar chalte ho humne phoolu se zakam...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th May 2003, 12:17 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 10,540
Posted By damal
kshitiz such mein aap ne bilkul such likha hai......

kshitiz such mein aap ne bilkul such likha hai...
ek ek line such se sarabor hai...i can say only one thing that
these are the feelings of u'r personal experiance...
kshitiz firstly i m very...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th May 2003, 12:06 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,413
Posted By damal
banno aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jo aap ne is...

banno aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jo aap ne is ghazal ko apni
tareef ke qabil samjha....
thanks again..
i will try my best to come with a great shayri....
khudahafiz...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th May 2003, 11:51 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,413
Posted By damal
tanhai aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jo aap ko meri...

tanhai aap ka bahot bahot shukriya jo aap ko meri ghazal
pasand aayi aap logon ka aise hi saath milta raha to aur bhi
achcha likhta rahoonga....
khudahafiz....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th May 2003, 03:55 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,413
Posted By damal
banjara and fanah aap logon ko MERI ghazal pasand...

banjara and fanah aap logon ko MERI ghazal pasand aayi
uske liye main shukrguzar hoon...
aap logon ke saath ki aise hi umeed hai...
sirf aap logon ka bhi saath rahega to bhi mujhe bahot khushi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th May 2003, 03:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,413
Posted By damal
Post hum ahle mohabbat walon per.......

sangdil khuda sangdil sanam sangdil hi insaan milte hain
tum use shahre wafa kehte ho jazbat jahan pe bikte hain

zakhmi dil ulfat ke mare hur ek se dhoka khate hain
hum ahle mohabbat walon...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2003, 11:57 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,309
Posted By damal
kshitiz... kshitiz aap ko mera...

kshitiz...
kshitiz aap ko mera qalam pasand aaya uske liye main
aap ka shukr guzar hoon...
aise hi saath dete rahiye...
and kshitiz don't worry about Nida DIDI...i know how to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th May 2003, 11:52 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,309
Posted By damal
Kshitiz... aap ko mera qalam...

Kshitiz...
aap ko mera qalam pasand aaya uske liye aap ka
bahot bahot shukriya....
kshitiz kuch aap bhi likhiye....
kuch aisa ki dil ko choo jaye....

Dile-shikast...

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 06:12 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 788
Posted By damal
pari aap ke alfaz suh ekdum pariyon jaise hi...

pari aap ke alfaz suh ekdum pariyon jaise hi nazuk hain...

AANSUO SE PALKE BHIGO LETI HOON
YAAD TERI AATI HAI TO RO LETI HOON
SOCHA KI BHOOLA DOO TUJHE MAGAR
HAR BAAR FAISLA BADAL DETI...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 06:03 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,309
Posted By damal
nida aap ke bhayya manne se mujhe bura nahi...

nida aap ke bhayya manne se mujhe bura nahi laga...
and i m not amazed also...because there are some people
present in this World , who can create relations at nay time...with anyone...
i...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 05:37 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,309
Posted By damal
hi nida, how r u.. nida...

hi nida,
how r u..
nida ghustaqi maaf ho..ek baat keh raha hoon..
nida shayad aap ne sabhi qalamon ke jawab dene ki soch rakhi hai...don't mind..mujhe bahot achcha laga...

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th May 2003, 05:15 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 3,309
Posted By damal
Post sharabi bana diya....

hamesha ek aisa ittefaq kyon hota hai
jo shaher bawafa ho waha bewfa kyon hota hai

uske pyar ne hi zaher peena sikha diya
ab wohi mujhe sharabi kyon kehta hai

ab to hum uska naam bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd May 2003, 12:59 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 917
Posted By damal
Kshitiz and ash i want to inform u that it's not...

Kshitiz and ash i want to inform u that it's not my ghazal...
it is Composed by Raj sahab.....
it was a mistake that i didn't write his name in this Ghazal...
so plz don't praise me....
this...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 09:08 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 917
Posted By damal
bus itna kar do tum....

here is ghazal for u...
umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayegi...

Aake baitho mere sirhaane tum
Aur socho na kuchh bahaane tum.

Chhu ke dekhoon to maanun main,
Sach ho ya khwaab ho...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 02:40 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 867
Posted By damal
i think it's composer is CHAAND... these two...

i think it's composer is CHAAND...
these two shers are so cute...
what would be the whole ghazal.....
i also want to read this ghazal....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 12:03 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 681
Posted By damal
Aadil bahot khoob .. aap ke jazbaat bahot hi...

Aadil bahot khoob ..
aap ke jazbaat bahot hi dard bhare hain...
keebahot bahot sukoon mila aap ki ghazal padh kar...
umeed hai aap aise likhte rahenge...
Khudahafiz...
Take Care....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 11:56 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 681
Posted By damal
Adil if these are u'r feelings then u have a pure...

Adil if these are u'r feelings then u have a pure heart...
Adil it's great written by u....
keep writing ..Khudahafiz....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 11:47 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 742
Posted By damal
tumhe shamil na kar sake zindagi mein ye...

tumhe shamil na kar sake zindagi mein ye badnasibi apni
tumhe bhula na sake zehen se ye bebasi apni

khushi Welcome to shayri.com...
aap ka sher pasand aaya...
hope to get u'r greatest...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 11:42 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 913
Posted By damal
nigaho me aur thodi himmat jo hoti najar se...

nigaho me aur thodi himmat jo hoti
najar se meri vo abhi bhi na girte

bahot khoob kshitiz kya lafz hain kya safayi di hai aap ne apne
ashkon ke bahe ki...
aap ka andaz pasanfd aaya...
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th April 2003, 11:34 AM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,375
Posted By damal
it's u'r brother....

Milega n yaha kuchh bhi...
Siva kaat khaai hui yaadae
Yugo se bandh hai ghar..
Oose kholne ki koshish mat karo.

meena didi aap ne bahot jazbati gahzal likhi hai....
bahot achcha likha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th April 2003, 04:43 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 655
Posted By damal
neha aap ki ghazal padh ke to paththar ka bhi dil...

neha aap ki ghazal padh ke to paththar ka bhi dil pighal jaaye..
to insaan kya cheez hai....
neha ji i respect u'r feelings..
u'r ghazals hve depth....
it is too good to read.....
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th April 2003, 04:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,009
Posted By damal
neha i m relizing that u mind that i comment on...

neha i m relizing that u mind that i comment on u'r ghazal...
Neha believe me i didn't wanna to hurt u in anyway...
it's only comment on u'r ghazal not on u'r life...
who am i ...i don't have...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th April 2003, 03:14 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,009
Posted By damal
jin rahoon pay aaj hum saath chaltay hain ...

jin rahoon pay aaj hum saath chaltay hain
tumhari bay-rokhi say inko alag na ker baithon.

Neha aap ki her line mein jadoo hai..kya likh diya aapne..
But Neha aap kaise uski berukhi se uska...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th April 2003, 06:53 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,416
Posted By damal
hi kshitiz, how r u? kshitiz...

hi kshitiz,
how r u?
kshitiz main kya kahoon aapke soch ko.kshitiz aap ne sach bahot
achchi ghazal likhi hai...
kshitiz aap ki ghazal se aap ke dil ka haal saaf nazar aata...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2003, 02:41 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,054
Posted By damal
thanks Fanah jo aap meri ghazal padhna pasand...

thanks Fanah jo aap meri ghazal padhna pasand karte hain..
umeed hai aap achcha likhte rahenge..
yahi dua hai aap ke liye......
Allahafiz...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2003, 12:41 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 921
Posted By damal
Dard mujhe hairani hoti jub koi apna dard zahir...

Dard mujhe hairani hoti jub koi apna dard zahir karta hai aur
phir use padh kar uski tareef karta hai....
dard main janta hoon ki aap ke dil ko kitna gahra zakhm diya
hai usne magar khuda ko hi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2003, 12:17 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,963
Posted By damal
Chahat bhi eisi ke bas Dard-o-gam ka fasana...

Chahat bhi eisi ke bas
Dard-o-gam ka fasana banti gai
Na kabhi inkaar kiya usne
Na intzaar karne ko keh gai,

Chaand kitne majboor hotein woh insaan jinko pata hi nahi
hota ki jisse hum...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th April 2003, 11:45 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,054
Posted By damal
Fanah aap ki ghazal padhi achcha likha hai...

Fanah aap ki ghazal padhi achcha likha hai aapne..
thodi aur koshish kariye jisse aap aur achcha likh sakein..
waise aap ka yeh sher zyada pasand aaya..

aaj phir uski yaad bahot dino baad...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th April 2003, 03:59 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,000
Posted By damal
katil this Ghazal is written to Depth of heart by...

katil this Ghazal is written to Depth of heart by u....
such kitna dard hai aapki ghazal mein yeh shayad aap khud
nahi jante honge...bahot hi kuch na bhi kahte hue aap ne sub
kuch keh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2003, 12:14 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,001
Posted By damal
aksar aisa hi hota hai....

kuch likh raha hoon umeed hai pasand aayega.....
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aksar mere saath aisa kyon hota hai
hasta hai mera chehra aur dil rota hai...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th April 2003, 12:01 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 800
Posted By damal
bahot khoob likha hai jisne bhi likha...

bahot khoob likha hai jisne bhi likha hai...zindagi ki sachchaion ko kitne dard bhare andaz mein bayan kiya hai..achcha laga ki kuch jazbati log abhi hamare jahan main baqi hain..

jayen to...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th April 2003, 12:08 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 809
Posted By damal
aman first time i noticed that u, don't believe...

aman first time i noticed that u, don't believe in God...
Aman it not good thing...if there is no anyone on us then how is
our life is goin on....there are many reasons by that anyone can prove...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd April 2003, 03:13 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 894
Posted By damal
aisa kyon hota hai....

aksar mere saath aisa kyon hota hai
hasta hai mera chehra aur dil rota hai

keh do sabhi se koi pyar ka naam na le
sunta hoon jub bhi ise tez dard hota hai

maine tujhe kabhi bewafa to na...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd April 2003, 11:05 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,135
Posted By damal
Anas main aap ko thankz kehta hoon jo aap ko meri...

Anas main aap ko thankz kehta hoon jo aap ko meri POEM
pasand aayi...aise hi saath dete rahiye....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd April 2003, 10:45 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,135
Posted By damal
kshitiz aap ko meri ghazal pasand aayi iske liye...

kshitiz aap ko meri ghazal pasand aayi iske liye shukriya..
and i hope to get u'r mail soon....
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Aman aap jub bhi kuch mistakes mere lekh mein...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st April 2003, 11:37 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 833
Posted By damal
kshitiz main aap ki is ibarat ki tareef nahin kar...

kshitiz main aap ki is ibarat ki tareef nahin kar pa raha hoon
is ko padhne ke baad mere dil me itna dard uth raha hai ki
mujhe kuch bhi samajhmein nahi aa raha hai ki main kya likhoon
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st April 2003, 11:24 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,135
Posted By damal
fanah aap ka bahot shukriya jo aap ko meri lkhi...

fanah aap ka bahot shukriya jo aap ko meri lkhi hui kuch panktiyan pasand aayin..fanah main pehle hi aap se kah chuka
hoon ki main kabhi kisi se koi umeed nahi rakhta kyon ki
kabhi kabhi aap...
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