Forum: Ghazal Section
3rd November 2004, 03:55 PM
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Replies: 4
Views: 7,512
khat jalaata kaise
jhoota_pyaar!
daad qabool keejiye-boht umda likhee he ye nazm
khush rahiye mager apne khrche per-
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
2nd November 2004, 07:56 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 993
TOM ho ya JERRY ho-BUSH ho chahe kerry ho
aadaab arz he!
meree ek dost jis pr mujhe shak tha ke kisee or ke saath involve he ko jub meN kuraid raha tha or pooch guch kr raha tha to us ne mozoo badalne kee khatir US-ELECTIONS ki baat shuroo...
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Forum: Ghazal Section
1st November 2004, 10:51 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 903
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
28th October 2004, 04:22 PM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,089
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boht umdaaa-superb-aaalishaaaan-copy kerne ke qabil he-vikraant jee gud shot-
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
28th October 2004, 04:06 PM
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Replies: 5
Views: 1,596
sorry for replying late
first of all i must appreciate ur spirit of invitng me 2 criticize ur lovely poetry in such a forum where people hardly reply and if they do so then they would also expect from u a reply and...
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
26th October 2004, 08:42 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 803
ulfat kare koi kitnee???
ulfat kare koi kitnee
ke fursat nahiN he itnee
log vaqt bachate heN
aise kaam kr jaate heN
intaha hoN jo chahat ki
intaha hoN jo ulfat ki
shuroo meN kareN wo kaam
hoN jo chahat ka...
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
14th October 2004, 04:38 PM
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Replies: 9
Views: 1,606
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boht zabrdst likha he-:D
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
13th October 2004, 03:03 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 959
maaN
teree duaaoN ka sahara he
varna yahaN kon hamara he
meN kuch bhi nahiN tere bagher
zikr mera zikr tumhara he
tu he khafa to khuda he khafa
khafa mujh se ye jahaN sara he
jeeta na dil apni maaN...
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
12th October 2004, 03:51 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 789
KARACHI aur chaabee wali goliaN
Qaatilon ki khidmaat hameshaa
'sabz sitara" yaad karega
aabadi to kam hotee rahegee
her bacha ye soch ker darega
MARA NA CHABEE WALEE GOLEE SE
KILAASHEN KI GOLEE SE MAREGA
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
11th October 2004, 03:26 PM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,235
wohee javaab mileN ge tumheN
wohee javaab mileN ge tumheN
kiyuN wohee savaal poochte ho
nadaaN ho be-aql ho paagal ho
zaeefoN se haal poochte ho????
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
11th October 2004, 03:02 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 981
meree naseehateN
Meree naseehateN nahiN mere liye
ye to heN e nadan faqat tere liye
teergee-e-shub ko mitaata he jaise
charagh apne tale andhere liye
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
11th October 2004, 01:18 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 716
dil phephre aur gurda
dil phephre aur gurda
sare ho gaye heN murda
ager saaNs bhee leta huN
saath khaaNs bhee leta huN
vaqt...
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Forum: Humourous Shayri
11th October 2004, 12:59 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 853
khalee ager apnee jaib na ho
khalee ager apnee jaib na ho
to hum meiN bhee koi aib na ho
paree thee khalee kai barsoN se
ab is meN koi aaseb na ho
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
10th October 2004, 12:13 PM
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Replies: 1
Views: 1,090
iqraar-e-ulfat
socha to tha keh deN ge
jo bhee hua seh leN ge
aaee woh jab saamne
lage hum dil thaamne
mujh se kaha na gaya
us se raha na gaya
mujh ko ghoorne lagee
aur poochne lagee
aap ko kuch kehna he?...
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Forum: Aapki Shayri
10th October 2004, 11:57 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 896
tu hotee to------
hathon mein her shakhs ke sang
tum bin aur he jag ka rang
darpe hua yeh sara jahan
dekh to sahee aa ker yehan
kis haal mein hun mein kesa hun
nahin mein ab pahle jaisa hun
log mujh ko badnaam...
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