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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st November 2007, 06:05 PM
Replies: 2
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Posted By jawed
Bahut bahut Shukriya dost.....ki aapko mera likha...

Bahut bahut Shukriya dost.....ki aapko mera likha pasand aaya....

Jawed
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 19th November 2007, 06:20 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,035
Posted By jawed
Love Wajah

adaab doston...
aaj kaafi lambe arse ke baad kuchh likhne ki koshish ki hai....
umeed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko mera likha pasand aayega...

is dil ki BeqararI ka sabab na poochho..
is raat ki...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 8th November 2007, 06:40 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
bahut khub JAWED, dil ke dushman se hi dil...

bahut khub JAWED,

dil ke dushman se hi dil laga baithe,
unki saadgi se fareb kha baithe,
pattharon se tha apna rishta,
fir bhi shishe ka ghar bana baithe..........[/quote]


Bahut khoobh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th November 2007, 12:25 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,662
Posted By jawed
Hi Lamha.... Bahut khoobsoorat....Dili daad...

Hi Lamha....

Bahut khoobsoorat....Dili daad hazir hai......qubool keejiyega....

Jawed....
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 29th October 2007, 07:57 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
kya kehne JAGJIT SINGH JI KE......aur thanx to u...

kya kehne JAGJIT SINGH JI KE......aur thanx to u JAWED ki aap ne itni bemisaal ghazal humare sath share ki..........
is pyaari ghazal ka jawaab dena to na-mumkin hai.....ek choti si baat kehna...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th October 2007, 05:53 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
kya baat hai......... JAWED, aap ki har...

kya baat hai......... JAWED,

aap ki har shayri lajawaab hoti hai........itni khubsorat baat kahi aap ne.....wakehi is ishq ko koi nahi samaj paya aajtak.........hume lagta hai ki hum sub jante...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 23rd October 2007, 03:23 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
hey JAWED, wonderful feelings as...

hey JAWED,
wonderful feelings as usual.........its good to see u back...missed u ..........u r such a great shayar and sweet friend............keep coming to my post.........
take...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 11th October 2007, 02:45 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
hey friends , i m back....sorry i was busy 4 a...

hey friends ,
i m back....sorry i was busy 4 a while.......kya baat hai? humare doston ko kya ho gaya? ye mehfil kyo itni khamosh ho gayi?........
koi baat nahi ab hum laut aaye hai........chalo...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st October 2007, 05:32 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 814
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob Richie ji....Bahut khoobsoorat...

Bahut khoob Richie ji....Bahut khoobsoorat pershkah rahi aapki...Daad qubool keejiyga...

Jawed
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th September 2007, 01:39 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
mere aane ki aahat pe shama jalai to hogi, ...

mere aane ki aahat pe shama jalai to hogi,
kabhi judai ke gham se aankh bhar aayi to hogi,
gham na kar,maayus na ho ae mere yaar,
us rub ne milan ki koi shaam banai to hogi..........

...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 3rd September 2007, 02:52 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Wah wah!!! Bahut khoob....UFFF.....Yeh...

Wah wah!!!

Bahut khoob....UFFF.....Yeh Andaaz -e- bayan bhi kuchh alag hi hai......:)
Ab iske aage ka bayaan kuchh is tarah se humse suniye .....

saaGar se lab lagaa ke bahut Khush hai...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 23rd August 2007, 07:16 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
No Problem Lamha ji....jab aap free ho jayengi...

No Problem Lamha ji....jab aap free ho jayengi hum tabhi baat karenge.....
bahut lajawab sher likha hai aapne.....
ab iske aage....

fizaayen rukatii hain raahon par jin se ham guzare ...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 23rd August 2007, 04:55 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
sare tasleeme kham hai jo mizaze yaar mein...

sare tasleeme kham hai jo mizaze yaar mein aaye...

Aapka yahan swagat hai raj sahab ...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 21st August 2007, 09:45 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Hi Lamha , I am fine and hoping same for...

Hi Lamha ,

I am fine and hoping same for you.....
u didn't replied to my mail...
anyways.....bahut badhiyan sher raha aapka......

Yeh leejiye ek sher hamari taraf se.....ummeed kerta hoon...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 17th August 2007, 08:52 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Smile Bahut khoob sandyrana ji.... har ik apane...

Bahut khoob sandyrana ji....

har ik apane hii Gam me.n mubtilaa hai
kisii ke dard se kaun aashnaa hai
mere naqqaad merii shaayarii to
mere TuuTe huye dil kii sadaa hai

Jawed..:):)
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 16th August 2007, 05:07 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahut achche Nihar Ji... hum to majboor...

Bahut achche Nihar Ji...

hum to majboor hain ....
khud apne halaat se...
hum kya kisi ko aawaz denge..
hum to khud apni aawaz kho baithe hain...
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raaton mein gar na ashk...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 16th August 2007, 04:56 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahur achche Lamha ji... Ab iske agge... ...

Bahur achche Lamha ji...
Ab iske agge...


maharabaan ho ke bulaa lo mujhe chaaho jis waqt
main gayaa waqt nahiin huun ke phir aa bhii na sakuun
main apane Khvaab se bichhadaa nazar nahiin...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th August 2007, 05:14 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 952
Posted By jawed
Sabse pahle to kashif sahab aapko independence...

Sabse pahle to kashif sahab aapko independence day ki bahut bahut shubhkaamnayaen....aur aapki deshbhakti se bhari yeh nazm to waqai mein kaabile tarref hai....aur HINDUSTAN kaamyabi ki taraf badhta...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 10th August 2007, 10:40 AM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahut Khoob Lamha ji....Ab iske aage...aur agar...

Bahut Khoob Lamha ji....Ab iske aage...aur agar aap ise aur meri pichhli post ko mila den to "sharyaar" sahab ki ek mukammal ghazal ban jayegi....

kabhii kisii ko mukammal jahaan nahiin milataa ...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 9th August 2007, 09:09 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Love Sahi kaha aapne Lamha ji...."agar ishq ki manzil...

Sahi kaha aapne Lamha ji...."agar ishq ki manzil pana itna aasan hota ,to shayad zindagi mai koi dard hi na hota"
Ab iske aage....

Bujha sakaa hai bhalaa kaun waqt ke shole..
Ye aisii aag hai...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 9th August 2007, 08:14 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....yeh sher "Khumar...

Bahut khoob Lamha ji.....yeh sher "Khumar Barabanki" sahab ki ghazal se hai...aur mujhe bahut pasand hai.....main poori ghazal aapse share kerna chahoonga....

ek pal me.n ek sadii kaa mazaa ham...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 8th August 2007, 09:05 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob Lamha ji...... Ta umre...

Bahut khoob Lamha ji......

Ta umre dhoondhta raha main Ishq ki manzil ...
Manzil to na mili , haan ye huaa gher se bahut door aa gaye hum...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th August 2007, 02:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By jawed
Bahut bahut Shukriya Gudia ji.....jo aapko meri...

Bahut bahut Shukriya Gudia ji.....jo aapko meri chhoti si koshish pasand aayee....

Aapka Dost
Jawed....:):)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th August 2007, 02:41 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By jawed
Bahut bahut shukriye ..."koi to ho" ji...

Bahut bahut shukriye ..."koi to ho" ji ....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th August 2007, 02:40 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By jawed
Shukriya Mausam ji...ki jo aapko hamari ek chhoti...

Shukriya Mausam ji...ki jo aapko hamari ek chhoti si koshish pasand aayee......:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th August 2007, 02:38 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By jawed
Shukriya Kashif sahab , yeh to meri khushnaseebi...

Shukriya Kashif sahab , yeh to meri khushnaseebi hai ki aapko meraa likha pasand aaya...:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th August 2007, 07:25 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 748
Posted By jawed
Love EK Shakhs

Salam Doston.......
Aaj fir ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kichh likhne ki ....Ummed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi.......aapke jawab ka muntazir hoon.....

Zarra zarra ruka gaya woh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th August 2007, 04:12 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,552
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob ....Lajawab dheer sahab...badi unda...

Bahut khoob ....Lajawab dheer sahab...badi unda ghazal likhi hai aapne......dil se daad qubool keejiye...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 7th August 2007, 03:54 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Love Hi Lamha ji, Zakhm jitne gahre hote hain...

Hi Lamha ji,

Zakhm jitne gahre hote hain bhoolna utna hi mushkil hota hai............
aapne to kucchh aisa likh diya jahan per aaker to sare derwaze band ho jate hain...
fir bhi kuchh na kuchh...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 6th August 2007, 02:36 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Love Bahut khoob Lamha ji.... Main bhi iska jawab...

Bahut khoob Lamha ji....
Main bhi iska jawab dena chaoonga...
mulaiza fermayen.....

Jab Teri Dhun Mein Jiya Karte They
Hum Bhi Chup Chaap Phira Karte They
Aankhon Mein Pyaas Huwa Karti Thi ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd August 2007, 11:25 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,211
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob Kunaal sahab... Bahut Unda ghazal...

Bahut khoob Kunaal sahab...
Bahut Unda ghazal pesh ki hai aapne.....bas aise hi likhte rahiye...

Jawed..
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd August 2007, 10:54 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,582
Posted By jawed
Bahut Khoob Gudiya ji..... Aapne waqai mein...

Bahut Khoob Gudiya ji.....
Aapne waqai mein apne jazbaaton ko jis tarah se bayaan kiya hai..woh waqai mein kaabile tareef hai......Allah kare ki aapki zindagi khishiyon se bher dein....

Jawed...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2007, 09:01 PM
Replies: 55
Views: 4,011
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob Musafir ek pal ke ....sabhi sher ek...

Bahut khoob Musafir ek pal ke ....sabhi sher ek se badhker ek hain...per jis sher ke saath aapne iftada ki hai woh mujhe bahut pasand aaya:

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 1st August 2007, 08:49 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahut Khoob Lamha ji..... Baat niklegi to bahut...

Bahut Khoob Lamha ji.....
Baat niklegi to bahut door talak jayegi...
==========================
iske aage ki daastaan yeh rahi....

Zindagi jaise ek sazaa si ho gai hai ,
Gum ke sagar mein is...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 1st August 2007, 06:16 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob Lamha sahiba...... iske aage ki...

Bahut khoob Lamha sahiba......
iske aage ki daastan humse suniye...
sun ke teri aankhen dabdaba jayengi...
============================
To leejiye gaur fermaiye (per yeh mera likha huaa nahin...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2007, 05:38 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,313
Posted By jawed
Bahut khoob..khwahish ji.... bahut achchi tarah...

Bahut khoob..khwahish ji....
bahut achchi tarah se aapne dil ke haal ko bayaan kiya hai apne is kalaam mein...
aise hi likhte rahiye...

Jawed
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st August 2007, 04:56 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 555
Posted By jawed
Guzra huaa zamana

Salaam doston,

Aaj firn ek chhoti si koshish ki hai kuchh likhne ki, ummeed kerta hoon ki aap logon ko pasand aayegi....aapke jawabon ka muntazir....

Door bahut door se ek awaaz aksar sunaai...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 1st August 2007, 04:52 PM
Replies: 2,202
Views: 230,918
Posted By jawed
Yeh DIL nahin jaanta kuchh bhi siwa mohabbat ke ...

Yeh DIL nahin jaanta kuchh bhi siwa mohabbat ke
Yeh DIL to sirf mohabbat kerna jaanta hai
Ishq ki manzil pe aage bahut aage jana chahta hai
Na do ise yun saza ,yeh DIL to tumpe jaan deta hai

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2007, 01:33 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 772
Posted By jawed
Bahut bahut Shukriya Manu ji ....ki aapko mera...

Bahut bahut Shukriya Manu ji ....ki aapko mera likha pasand aaya ....bas aise hi hausla afzai kerte rahiye......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 31st July 2007, 01:32 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 772
Posted By jawed
Bahut bahut Shukriya UnwrittenStory ji (Real name...

Bahut bahut Shukriya UnwrittenStory ji (Real name don't know).....ki aapko mera likha pasand aaya....
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