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Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 15th July 2006, 03:21 PM
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Posted By nacheez
Devdas

Badnaseeb tha bechara ki maykhane me mara
sari duniya usse dukhi mil gayi.
Hum kyon kisi paro ke chakkar me devdas bane
hume to humari chandramukhi mil gayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 12th February 2005, 01:54 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 799
Posted By nacheez
Hi Komal! I dont have such excellent words...

Hi Komal!

I dont have such excellent words which can define the beauty of your words. I just have something else to add....

aaj khamosh hai honth humare.
par kabhi dil ke taaro ko chheda tha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 10th February 2005, 12:09 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,242
Posted By nacheez
Thank you parul ji! And I forward your...

Thank you parul ji!

And I forward your appreciation to Shri Sahabuddin Rathore!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2005, 05:43 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 534
Posted By nacheez
Haseen Janaza!

Dosto...
Yeh sher mera nahi hai...
Par mujhe yeh bhi pata nahi ki aisa kaun sa aashiq tha jiske dil main itna dard chhupa tha....Khair, us aashiq ka dard main aap logo se baantna chahunga....ummid...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2005, 07:13 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,911
Posted By nacheez
Cheeta! (Translated)

Dosto...
Yu to ye sher Gujrati main hai, aur agar aap gujrati samajte ho to aap ne upar padh liya hoga....

Yaha par maine is sher ko hindi me parivartit karne ki koshish kari hai...kucch galti ho...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th February 2005, 02:30 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 919
Posted By nacheez
Wah sagar ji... Kya Khub kaha hai aapne.... ...

Wah sagar ji...

Kya Khub kaha hai aapne....
The words are superb....

Wafa ki baat pe ek sher yaad aaya...
Maaf kijiyega mera nahi hai....par mere dil ko chhu gaya hai....
Ummid hai aap le...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 6th February 2005, 02:24 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,242
Posted By nacheez
Thank You Pulkit Ji. And if you get chance...

Thank You Pulkit Ji.

And if you get chance to listed this man Shri Sahabuddin Rathore, dont miss it.

Thanks once again.
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th February 2005, 03:48 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,861
Posted By nacheez
Hi Komal Ji. Really Outstanding Creation. But...

Hi Komal Ji.
Really Outstanding Creation.
But your poem is very confusing, it has made me confused.
And my confusion is....
Who are you?
Have you described yourself or you have defined LOVE...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 5th February 2005, 03:34 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,242
Posted By nacheez
Cool Hu Bhikhaari chhu! (Gujrati)

Hi friends!

This stanza is not mine, but I heard it in a live show performed by Great Gujrati comic performer Shri Sahabuddin Rathore. I am a great fan of him and this lines added my attraction...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th February 2005, 01:00 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 1,272
Posted By nacheez
Thumbs up Kitna gir gaya insaan!

Dosto!

Aaj ki is duniya me jaha insaan paise ke pichhe bhaag raha hai, waha woh kisi bhi cheez ka sauda karne me baki nahi raha.

Apne aap se maine puchha to mujhe jawab mila ki....

Bechta...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 5th February 2005, 12:45 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,233
Posted By nacheez
Thank you Parulji! You have boosted my...

Thank you Parulji!

You have boosted my confidence....
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th February 2005, 05:46 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,196
Posted By nacheez
Forum: Aapki Shayri 3rd February 2005, 05:37 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,735
Posted By nacheez
Hi garima! I knew you are a great writer....

Hi garima!

I knew you are a great writer. And as I told you before, you could make a great poet of your self....dream...set a goal in life...you can do that.

Aaj agar aapki koshish itni...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 3rd February 2005, 04:35 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,233
Posted By nacheez
Mar jaana bhul gaye!

Dosto...
Is nacheez ki kalam se ek sher gira hai....ki...

Ishq me tere hum kucch yu khoye, ki zamana bhul gaye.
Aankhon se teri jaam kucch yu piye ki maykhana bhul gaye.
Pyar tera paa kar ye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd February 2005, 03:52 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 688
Posted By nacheez
Thumbs up Around the corner I have a friend!

Hi Friends.
This creation is not mine, but a good friend of mine has passed this to me by e-mail. It really touched my heart. And after reading this, I am sure you will do the same as I did....call...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd February 2005, 12:09 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,196
Posted By nacheez
Hi pulkeet ji! Thanks for appreciating this...

Hi pulkeet ji!

Thanks for appreciating this "NACHEEZ".

And your signature words are really impressive...
Thanks.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd February 2005, 09:28 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,196
Posted By nacheez
Thank you Rohin and Shoaib ji. I am just an...

Thank you Rohin and Shoaib ji.

I am just an new member on this site.

I admire your wishes for me whole heartedly.
Forum: English Poetry 2nd February 2005, 06:51 PM
Replies: 73
Views: 9,397
Posted By nacheez
Hi Rohin. That was a superb poem. Truly it...

Hi Rohin.
That was a superb poem.
Truly it touches the heart.

I have posted something about my friend's story too.
Please read it. It is posted in Dard section (Bewafai ki misaal!)
Sorry I...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd February 2005, 06:25 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 1,196
Posted By nacheez
Bewafai ki misaal!

Hi readers!
I was just sitting one night and suddenly a friend of mine came in my mind. This poet is all about his sad love ending...not about me.
Please read it carefully. Concentrate on the...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st February 2005, 04:45 PM
Replies: 0
Poll: Shamaa!
Views: 677
Posted By nacheez
Shamaa!

Tanha ein andhero me khoker, shamaa bhi kaali raat ho gayi,
Nikli thi parwane ki talaash me, khud hi jalkar khaak ho gayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th January 2005, 05:39 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,911
Posted By nacheez
Cheeta - A Gujrati Shayri

Marnar ni cheeta par, chahnar koi chadtu nathi.
Kahe chhe marish, pan pacchad thi koi martu nathi.
Bhadkti aag ne joi, e aag ma koi padtu nathi,
Are aag to chhodo, bacheli raakh ney kio adtu nathi.
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