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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th August 2004, 09:18 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,781
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
bohot khoob!

bohot khoob!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th August 2004, 09:15 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,792
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
...umeed hi to hai

Na bahao ansoon unke liye jo bewafa hi to hai,
mat yaad karo unki baaton ko jo jhoote wade hi to hai,
phir bhi nazar nahin hathti unke raston par se,
woh kab laut ke aa jaye...umeed hi to hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th August 2004, 09:13 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 574
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
Dil se unkii tasveer hataayi naa gayii, Kuch...

Dil se unkii tasveer hataayi naa gayii,
Kuch humse kuch unsey nibhaayi naa gayii

Ki usney meri wo halat yaaron,
Daastan-e-Mohabbat phir Dohraayi naa gayii


wah wah bohot hi ache alwaf likhe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th December 2003, 11:00 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 720
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hiiiiiiiii priyaaaa sis, aap ne phir se...

hiiiiiiiii priyaaaa sis,

aap ne phir se bohot hi acha likha hai....bohot achi tara se apna dard apni lawzo me pesh kiya hai.
where is sharabhi ji? havent seen him for suc ha long time...
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 14th May 2003, 10:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 717
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi priya sis kaisi hai aap?apki ek line...

hi priya sis

kaisi hai aap?apki ek line bohot hi pasand ayi mujhe.

"Mehfil saji hai logo se, par dil abhi bhi tanha hai"

duniya me bohot log aise hai jo mehefil me bhi tanhayi mehesoos karte...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th May 2003, 06:24 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 6,072
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi pyasa ji phir se apki post padi to dil ko...

hi pyasa ji

phir se apki post padi to dil ko chuk gayi. bohot hi acha likha hai apne. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th April 2003, 05:34 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 1,621
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi pyaasa ji aap ki post bohot pasand ayi...

hi pyaasa ji

aap ki post bohot pasand ayi mujhko. esp ur lines

"PYAASA ki pyaas is janam mein reh gai adhuri
Tumhe khushi mil gai yehi meri pyaar ki jeet hai"

kya kahon iske aage. bas yeh...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2003, 05:09 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,290
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi ishiqka sis, kaise hai aap? jaise har bar...

hi ishiqka sis,

kaise hai aap? jaise har bar kehti hoon aaj bhi yeh pad kar kahongi ke bohot acha likha hai aap ne. sabse zada mujhe yeh line pasand ayi:

"Pehlaaye Gaye Bahein Aapni
Intzaar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th April 2003, 04:56 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,077
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi Fanah ji, i really like this post. esp...

hi Fanah ji,

i really like this post. esp the lines

"aarzoo to thi tere pyar me jan dene ki
Qasmein,Vade hain sirf baten kehne ki
koi to wajha hogi tere bewafai karne ki
tujhe aadta to nahi...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 15th April 2003, 05:56 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 2,518
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi "talkingeyes", apne bohot hi acha likha...

hi "talkingeyes",

apne bohot hi acha likha hai. galtiyon aur thokron se hi insaan ko sikhna chahiye. zadadar woh log hi kuch aise zakhm dekr kuch sikha jate hai, jo dil ke kareeb hote hai. unke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th April 2003, 09:40 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 2,126
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi mahima ji apki yeh lines Tumse...

hi mahima ji

apki yeh lines

Tumse miloon to mere dil ka dard aur badhta hai
is liye socha hai ki hum aur tum milna chhod dein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th April 2003, 09:36 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,403
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi "dard ki dastan" ji aap ne bohot acha...

hi "dard ki dastan" ji

aap ne bohot acha likha hai. dil ko chu gayi apki poetry aur phir se zakhmo ki yaad ane lagi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th April 2003, 09:31 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,992
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi vinay ji bohot acha likha apne. mai yeh...

hi vinay ji

bohot acha likha apne. mai yeh bih kehna chahongi ke

jo rakhte hai auron ke liye pyar ka jasba,
woh loog toot kar bhi bikhra nahin karte!

lekin yeh bhi sach hai keaise log bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th April 2003, 09:19 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 880
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi amrit ji bohot hi acha likha hai apne....

hi amrit ji

bohot hi acha likha hai apne. lekin kambakt dil jo hai ussi ko bar bar yaad karta hai jisse bhoolana chaho. dil ko kaun samjhaye? :p
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd February 2003, 12:25 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,135
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi ishika sis apne na bohot hi acha likha...

hi ishika sis

apne na bohot hi acha likha hai. dard bari shayari...dil ki baate...sach kaha hai. bohot hi acha likha hai apne. i like it very very much. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd February 2003, 12:17 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 983
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
wow nice one! keep it up!

wow nice one! keep it up!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd February 2003, 12:10 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 1,131
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi zeba ji aaap ne na bohot hi acha likha...

hi zeba ji

aaap ne na bohot hi acha likha hai.

na suni kisine awaz mere dil ke tootne ki
aur suna hai ke is mehfil behra koi nahi


is line ki to jitni tareef karo utni hi kam hai. bas...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 11:05 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 3,726
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi neelo ji uffffff kya kahonnnnn bohot hi...

hi neelo ji

uffffff kya kahonnnnn bohot hi pasand aya mujhe jo apne likha. sach me greattt hai. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 10:56 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,123
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi jignesh ji apne bohot hi acha likha hai. ...

hi jignesh ji

apne bohot hi acha likha hai.

Khush hai hum ke dil ko aise chot kisine pohchayi hai...
Maut ka bhi khuaf nahi abh jabh dilne aise chot khayi hai... "


yeh line to bas gazab...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 10:38 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,180
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi zeba ji bohot acha likha apne. esp i...

hi zeba ji

bohot acha likha apne. esp i liked the line
"na lab pe hansi na mehfil ki khushi
hum har us jagah udas rahe jahan zikr tumhara na tha"


aisa hi hota hai, jaha meheboob ki baat...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 10:36 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,023
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi ishika sis bohot acha likha hai apne. i...

hi ishika sis

bohot acha likha hai apne. i like it! keep it up. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2003, 02:54 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,127
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi sidh ji shukriya ke apne woh sher pasand...

hi sidh ji

shukriya ke apne woh sher pasand kiya. :-) apne bhi kafi acha likha hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th February 2003, 04:25 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,178
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
sanjoo ji ????

sanjoo ji

????
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 05:10 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,178
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
ek chota sa sher

hello dosto

maine kahi pe ek bar ek sher pada tha. chota sa hai lekin i think ke sach hai.


"agar duniya me hai ek cheez to woh pyar hai,
toote hue dilon ko doondo to woh bhi hazar hai."

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 05:09 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 697
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
sach hai?

hello dosto

maine kahi pe ek bar ek sher pada tha. chota sa hai lekin i think ke sach hai.


agar duniya me hai ek cheez to woh pyar hai,
toote hue dilon ko doondo towoh bhi hazar hai.

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 04:55 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 3,005
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi piya ji bohot acha likha. "Beshak!...

hi piya ji

bohot acha likha.

"Beshak! koyi takkat aisi nahi jo tutti huye cheez jod dey,
Dil hamara khilona to nahi ko jo bhi aaye tod dey, "

sach hai

kaun karta hai yaha pyar nibane...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 04:39 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,050
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi priya sis aap ne ek bar phir kamal ka...

hi priya sis

aap ne ek bar phir kamal ka likha hai. aab jitna bhi kaho utna hi kam hai. sabse zada to mujeh yeh pasand aya:

Mujhe apna apna Jo kehta tha,
mere liye har dukh sehta tha,
Aaj...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 04:33 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,214
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi farhana ji bohot acha likha apne. ...

hi farhana ji

bohot acha likha apne.

PHIR JAAG GAYA MERI TANHA ANKHON KA SAILAAB;
PHIR BAHA LEGAYA APNE SAATH MERE KHWAABON KO AAJ,

yeh to dil ko chu gayi. keep it up!
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th February 2003, 04:27 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,146
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi chand ji bohot acha likha apne. esp the...

hi chand ji

bohot acha likha apne. esp the last 4 lines. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 03:08 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,156
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi tareef ke liye shukriya PINKY JI aur PRIYA JI ...

hi tareef ke liye shukriya PINKY JI aur PRIYA JI

im happy aap sab ko pasand ayi mere dil ki baat. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th February 2003, 03:06 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,127
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
thank u priya ji aur aman ji! apko woh sher...

thank u priya ji aur aman ji!

apko woh sher pasand aya. aur haan aman ji ke liye extra thanx for the private reply. :-)

meena
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 4th February 2003, 02:24 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 709
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
dost se zada...

kcuh pesh hai...

aap se acha kaun hai, yeh abhi tak nahin jan paye hum,
aap dost se bhi kuch ban gaye hai, yeh abhi tak nahin bata paye hum.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd February 2003, 11:06 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,182
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hii bohoooot hi acha kaha aap ne. udasi si...

hii

bohoooot hi acha kaha aap ne. udasi si nazar ayi isme.... keep it up. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd February 2003, 11:01 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 994
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hey its a really nice sher. likhte rahiega. :-)

hey its a really nice sher. likhte rahiega. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th January 2003, 11:53 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,178
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hey nice sher. :-)

hey nice sher. :-)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th January 2003, 12:10 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,156
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi ishika sis ji mera nam meena hai. thanx...

hi ishika sis ji

mera nam meena hai. thanx for ur welcome. :-) sach me yaha pe mujhe bohot acha lagta hai. log itni achi achi shayari likhti hai. aur sab hi dil ko chu jati hain. har bar sochti...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th January 2003, 10:32 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,156
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi aman ji waise aap humesha sabse pehle...

hi aman ji

waise aap humesha sabse pehle reply karte hai. mai to yaha new hoon lekin lagta hai yaha pe sab ek doosre ko jante hai. jo mai doosro ko shers pade aur baki logo ke comments bhi. mujhe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th January 2003, 10:10 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 3,620
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi priya ji aap ne bohot hi ache tareeke se...

hi priya ji

aap ne bohot hi ache tareeke se jawab diya hai. bohot acha likha hai aur shayad jo bhi yaha kuch likhta hai unki dil ki baate bhi yehi hoti hai. i like it really very much! :)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th January 2003, 09:58 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,156
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
udasi

kuch pesh akrti hoon...


Bewafai kadam kadam par milti hai,
Par wafa bohot kam mil pati hai,
Milan to taqdeer walo ka hota hai,
Zadadar to judai hi raas aati hai.

...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th January 2003, 04:46 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 1,509
Posted By ~~Khamoshi~~
hi priya ji bohot hi acha likha apne. esp...

hi priya ji

bohot hi acha likha apne. esp the last line i like it very much. kuch log apne dil ki baaten aur dard ko aisi shayari ya ghazlo me bohot achi tara se dikha sakhte hai. keep it up!
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