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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th November 2009, 12:48 AM
Replies: 56
Views: 8,675
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Hi Praneeta...hw r u?....logged in after a long...

Hi Praneeta...hw r u?....logged in after a long time today...read ur poem...wohi dard hai aaj bhi jo pehle hua karta tha....bahot khoob...keep it up dear & be happy..:)

Ye sher dil ke sabse...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th September 2009, 02:29 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,603
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Bahot khhob likha hai aapne mayoos ji..sabhi sher...

Bahot khhob likha hai aapne mayoos ji..sabhi sher ek se badhkar ek hai khaas kar ye wale

वो ऐसे मिले जैसे मिले है गैर कोई
हम भी खुद को लगे पराए कितने

अब देखें उस पार है कैसी ज़िंदगी
यहाँ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 29th August 2009, 04:14 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,337
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Hi praneeta ..bahot dino baad aapko padh raha...

Hi praneeta ..bahot dino baad aapko padh raha hun...sabhi sher achhe lage khas kar ye


Hun toh faqat ik toota parinda
Udne ko pura, aasmaa chaahta hun

Dil na dukha paaye fir koi gam...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 20th August 2009, 02:48 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,833
Posted By Tanha_Dil
shaKhs voh mehbuub sa jab se be'gaana ho gaya ...

shaKhs voh mehbuub sa jab se be'gaana ho gaya
saaGhar-o-meena se apna dostaana ho gaya

bahot khoob!!

jo kabhi rehtaa tha aaNkhoN meiN khwaaboN ki tarah
usko dekhe dosto ab ik zamaana ho...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th August 2009, 04:24 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 382
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Kuch likhne ka mann tha magar.....

Kuch likhne ka mann tha magar,
haathon ne saath na diya,
Poori na ho paayi ek adhuri Ghazal,
jazbaaton ne saath na diya.

Armaan to tha sadiyon ki pyaas bhujhaane ka magar,
Barsaaton ne saath...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th August 2009, 12:49 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,446
Posted By Tanha_Dil
nishaji ..bahot bahot shukriya aapka meri nazm...

nishaji ..bahot bahot shukriya aapka meri nazm padhne aur pasand karne ke liye.:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th August 2009, 10:45 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,446
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Meri jindagi hai fakat ek intezaar tera.....

Doston...mehfil ko mera aadaab........bahot dino baad phir se ek koshish ki hai...haalaat kuch aise hain ke samaj mein nahi aata shayari-e-dard likhoon ya shayari-e-ishq....to lijiye pesh -e-khidmat...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 28th July 2009, 03:09 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 5,830
Posted By Tanha_Dil
hai hai maikash ji ..subhaan allah !! bahot...

hai hai maikash ji ..subhaan allah !! bahot khoob janaab...kya khoob likha hai aapne ..


ziNdagi bhar kisi ki dillagi ka saamaaN the
khoTey sikkey hi sahi par kisi ke kaam aaye


ye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th July 2009, 05:07 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
nalin saheb.....bahot bahot shukriya aapki jara...

nalin saheb.....bahot bahot shukriya aapki jara nawazi ke liye.....:)..aur reps ke liye tahe dil se aapka shukriya...yuhi padte rahiye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th July 2009, 05:03 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
ji biulkul thik kaha aapne Aman bhai....Dil hai...

ji biulkul thik kaha aapne Aman bhai....Dil hai ke manta nahi.........mushkil badi hai rasm-e-mohabbat ye janta nahi.....yuhi saath dete rahiye..shukriya:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 25th July 2009, 03:41 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Kunaal ji ....mujhe khushi hui ye jaan kar ke...

Kunaal ji ....mujhe khushi hui ye jaan kar ke aapko pasand aaya ye sher....yuhi hausla dete rahiye...:)...padhte rahiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 24th July 2009, 02:32 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,207
Posted By Tanha_Dil
maikash sahab .....bahot achhe...........baho t...

maikash sahab .....bahot achhe...........baho t achhi lagi aapki ye koshish...wakai kaabil -e-tareef...daad kubool kijiye:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 23rd July 2009, 01:33 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Kwahish ji...bahot bahot shukriya...

Kwahish ji...bahot bahot shukriya aapka.....hausla afzaai ke liye.......aapka saath banaye rakhiye..yuhi padhte rahiye:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd July 2009, 03:57 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
hey thanks Praneeta....nice to hear from...

hey thanks Praneeta....nice to hear from you......after a long time I have written something....unable to write now a days:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd July 2009, 01:17 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,085
Posted By Tanha_Dil
talwar ban ke yaadein barasti haiN tumhari gar...

talwar ban ke yaadein barasti haiN tumhari
gar kat bhi gaya mera jigar tum ko is se kya

Diya ji.. ye sher dil ke bahot kareeb laga

ek koshish arj hai

karte hain intezaar ke tum aaoge...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 22nd July 2009, 10:57 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Mayank ji... bahot bahot shukriya aapka hausla...

Mayank ji... bahot bahot shukriya aapka hausla afzaai ke liye..yuhi saath dete rahiye:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 18th July 2009, 11:18 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 871
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Bhai Kwahish ji ..bahot khoob likha hai...

Bhai Kwahish ji ..bahot khoob likha hai aapne...saare aashaar dil fareb lage... khas kar ye do sher

Dil kya jaan bhi soup di thi humne jinke naam
Ek din aaya woh hum ko hi dil humara de gaya
...
Forum: Chit-Chat & General Discussion Forum 17th July 2009, 01:14 PM
Replies: 3,108
Views: 165,474
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Ae Kaash kahin aisa hota,ke do dil hote seene...

Ae Kaash kahin aisa hota,ke do dil hote seene mein,
Ek toot bhi jata ishq mein to,takleef na hoti jeene mein.
-Unknown
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th July 2009, 06:02 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,218
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Muqarrar ye dil jalta hai,muqarrar mai ishq karta hoon

doston...bazm ko mera Aadaab........bahot dino baad ek koshish ki hai ....bahot saari ghazalein shru to ki..par unhe poori na kar paya...ye ek koshish aaj poori ki hai...ummeed hai aap sabko pasand...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th July 2009, 03:40 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 2,571
Posted By Tanha_Dil
bhai arun...bahot khoob Hai yaqeen tujhko...

bhai arun...bahot khoob

Hai yaqeen tujhko paana na hoga mumqeen mere liye
Ye dil phir bhi roz umeed ki shama jalata kyu hai


is sher par meri daad kubool kijiye..keep writing:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th July 2009, 11:32 AM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,575
Posted By Tanha_Dil
aji janaab....aadaab arj hai....bahot khoob ...

aji janaab....aadaab arj hai....bahot khoob


bhulaane kee koShiSh kareiN ess tarah kee
jo bhoole haiN ham ab, na yaad aaiyegaa


sabhi sher pasand aaye..khaas kar is sher par meri daad...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th July 2009, 12:17 PM
Replies: 38
Views: 3,443
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Praneeta......2 gud..sabhi sher achhe lage khaas...

Praneeta......2 gud..sabhi sher achhe lage khaas kar

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai

if possible get the poem...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 8th July 2009, 09:54 AM
Replies: 63
Views: 5,118
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Zainy ji ...saare hi sher Lajawaab...

Zainy ji ...saare hi sher Lajawaab hain.......bahot khoob ...dil se daad.....likhti rahiye:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2009, 05:41 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,172
Posted By Tanha_Dil
ji bilkul thik farmayaa aapne khwahish ji...ye...

ji bilkul thik farmayaa aapne khwahish ji...ye baat to maine sochi hi nahi thi ki seene se roshani kaise nikal sakti hai...shukriya..mai agli baar is baat ka poora dhyaan rakhunga ki
practical...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2009, 03:47 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,172
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Diya ji.....jab mai ye sher likh raha tha...

Diya ji.....jab mai ye sher likh raha tha ..yakeen maniye aapka naam mere zehen mein bilkul aaya tha....aur ittefaaq dekhiye.......aap ko yahi sher pasand bhi aa gaya...:)...aap jahaan chahe ye sher ...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2009, 02:59 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 5,193
Posted By Tanha_Dil
aji ye to aapki zara nawazi hai varna humari...

aji ye to aapki zara nawazi hai varna humari shayari mein wo baat kahan jo aapki shayari mein hai:)...aur maine ise yahan isiliye post kiya hai kyonki ye original aapne likhi hai...maine to bas zara...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2009, 12:26 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,172
Posted By Tanha_Dil
bahot achhi koshish hai sajid ji...... meri taraf...

bahot achhi koshish hai sajid ji...... meri taraf se is sher pe daad...:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2009, 11:30 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,172
Posted By Tanha_Dil
kahan se laun jawaab??..he he he....hey thanks...

kahan se laun jawaab??..he he he....hey thanks Praneeta....keep reading,writing,encouraging...blah blah blah:D
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th July 2009, 03:51 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,172
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Har khwahish ki kabr par ek diya jalta ho jaise.

Seene se nikalti hai ek roshni si har pal,
Har khwahish ki kabr par ek diya jalta ho jaise.

Dhundlaa sa dikhta hai ab har manzar mujhko,
Aankhon me koi adhuraa sa khwaab palta ho jaise.

Kate...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th July 2009, 01:57 PM
Replies: 41
Views: 4,154
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Khelte haiN ye jazbaat se apno ke Khoon-e-dil...

Khelte haiN ye jazbaat se apno ke
Khoon-e-dil itna aasaan kyun hai.. Ya Rabb!!

Butt ye patther ke dil hai na dhadkan inme
Kehte sab inhe insaan kyuN hai.. Ya Rabb!!


zainy zee...dil chu...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd July 2009, 04:36 PM
Replies: 61
Views: 5,193
Posted By Tanha_Dil
praneeta ji ,,aapki ye nazm itni pasand aayi ke...

praneeta ji ,,aapki ye nazm itni pasand aayi ke aapki izaazat ke bagair kuch aur sher likh diye isi par..ummeed hai aap bura nahi manengi:)


Hai ishq ab bhi us se,
Mera Inteqaam rehne do.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2009, 04:56 PM
Replies: 19
Views: 1,985
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Thamker kar chhod dena, ye to fitrat nahi hai...

Thamker kar chhod dena, ye to fitrat nahi hai meri jaan
Ek aadh buri aadaten hai, jinhe Badalna chahata huN


Khwahish Ji..
ye sher dil ke bahot kareeb raha....bahot achhe ehsaas hain bas jaisa...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2009, 03:49 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,836
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Arvind ji...bahot bahot Shukriya........daad ke...

Arvind ji...bahot bahot Shukriya........daad ke liye......:)..yuhi padhte rahiye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2009, 11:00 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,836
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Diya ji bahot bahot....shukriya....ji kabhi Ishq...

Diya ji bahot bahot....shukriya....ji kabhi Ishq par likhne ki koshish to nahi ki...mai to sifr ishq ke anjaam par likhta hoon......par abhi aapne kaha hi hai to chaliye koshish karke dekhta hoon..
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 2nd July 2009, 10:31 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,836
Posted By Tanha_Dil
thank you U mandeep ji...I m glad that u liked...

thank you U mandeep ji...I m glad that u liked it.......keep encouraging:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st July 2009, 12:20 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,836
Posted By Tanha_Dil
hey Thanks praneeta....gud to read that you liked...

hey Thanks praneeta....gud to read that you liked it...:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st July 2009, 11:54 AM
Replies: 8
Views: 2,836
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Mai shayar itna mashhoor na tha.

Khushi ki meri bhi aarzoo thi lekin,
Muqaddar ko mere ye manjoor na tha.

Ilzaam us bedard pe lagayein bhi to kaise,
uska bhi koi kusoor na tha.

Ruk gaye kadam raah -e-ulfat mein...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 1st July 2009, 11:33 AM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,022
Posted By Tanha_Dil
zamaana pyar ki parwaaz ka dushman niklaa ...

zamaana pyar ki parwaaz ka dushman niklaa
hawayeiN tez hai unchi udaaN kaise karoo

Diya ji..ye sher bahot pasand aaya hallanki parwaaz ka matlab mujhe nahi pata ..agar aap bata dengi to help...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2009, 11:52 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 896
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Aru ji ...daad ke liye bahot bahot shukriya..yuhi...

Aru ji ...daad ke liye bahot bahot shukriya..yuhi padte rahiye...:)
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2009, 10:53 AM
Replies: 12
Views: 896
Posted By Tanha_Dil
Diya ji ...bahot bahot dhanyawaad aapka....yuhi...

Diya ji ...bahot bahot dhanyawaad aapka....yuhi saath dete rahiye:)
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