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Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2010, 07:08 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,849
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
kaho to laut jate hai.. aadhi raah chal liye to...

kaho to laut jate hai..
aadhi raah chal liye to kya
aadhi jindgi kho liye to kya
aadhi jindgi ji bhi to liye hai..
kaho to laut jate hai..
abhi to ashk palko me kaid hai..
abhi to jazbaat dil...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th February 2010, 06:50 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,849
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
कहो तो लौट जाते है..

कहो तो लौट जाते है..
आधी राह चल लिए तो क्या..
आधी जिंदगी खो जाए तो क्या..
आधी जिंदगी जी भी तो लिए है..
कहो तो लौट जाते है..
अभी तो अश्क पलकों में कैद है..
अभी जज़्बात दिल के आगोश में है..
अभी...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:55 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
sunita ji dost kaha he to dosti nibhana aur sath...

sunita ji dost kaha he to dosti nibhana aur sath deti rehna...me to hatash ho chali thi yaha se ki shayed mera likha kisi ko pasand nahi aa raha hai...lekin aap jaise purane members ka pyar bhulaye...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:52 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
Shipra ji shukriya...is rachna ko samay dene ke...

Shipra ji shukriya...is rachna ko samay dene ke liye. aur saraahne k liye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:51 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
mandeep ji me acchhi hu...mujhe to lagta tha logo...

mandeep ji me acchhi hu...mujhe to lagta tha logo ko mera likha pasand nahi aaya so mene yaha aana chhod diya tha...lekin aap logo ne itna saraha itna apnapan aur pyar diya ki kadam fir laut pade......
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:40 PM
Replies: 34
Views: 2,538
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
ismat meiN likhe honge jisne, nagme ye mere dard...

ismat meiN likhe honge jisne, nagme ye mere dard ke…
aaj bhi karta hooN maiN sajda u's kalam ki sareer* ka….

suna tha ishq ko yahaN khuda bhi kehte haiN dosto….!
weham tha mera ya hoga mugaalta*...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:37 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,823
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
mera vazood ukhda hua hai us lou ki tarah,...

mera vazood ukhda hua hai
us lou ki tarah, jisme koi aag nahi hai
haddiyo ka dhacha hu mai
jeese jeene ki koi chaha nahi hai
aur maut bhi marne nahi deti
patjhad ki kahani hu mai
jeese koi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:31 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 940
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
par tanhai ne kaha kisi ka sahara paya hai ...

par tanhai ne kaha kisi ka sahara paya hai

nidhi dear....dard se ot-prot tumhari ye rachna dil ko bheetar tak nam kar gayi.
ek ek shabd dard me cheekh raha hai..

aur ant ki ye lines ek katu...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:07 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 3,650
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
dhawal ji bahut khoobsurat gazel...har sher me...

dhawal ji bahut khoobsurat gazel...har sher me nikhar hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 10th February 2010, 11:04 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 1,156
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
khilona ji...bahut khoobsurat ehsas jaha ek aur...

khilona ji...bahut khoobsurat ehsas jaha ek aur umeed aur positive attitude aata dikhayi deta hai vahi gam k kale sayo me ghira khud ko pate hai...

kahin to shuruaat karni padegi na.....??? fir...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 21st January 2010, 12:00 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 715
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
ढँके जज्बात

http://http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_vUMjBJ2PtdQ/S1KaIQfv3-I/AAAAAAAAAIE/Hw8p1gJIX-o/s1600-h/ppself-AStanczyk.jpg

दोस्तो, यह कविता मैने हिंद युग्म की दिसंबर माह की युनीकवि प्रतियोगिता के लिए भेजी थी...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:56 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
heloooo dear shukhar hai tumhe meri post dikhi...

heloooo dear shukhar hai tumhe meri post dikhi to...mujhe to lag raha tha na jane tum se milna hoga b ya nahi.thanks dear for ur rev. aur tumhe meri kalam ka rang to pata hi hai...yahi sab hi likha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:54 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
sazid ji bahut bahut shukriya.

sazid ji bahut bahut shukriya.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:53 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
vikram ji apki saraahna ke liye abhaari hu.

vikram ji apki saraahna
ke liye abhaari hu.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:51 PM
Replies: 12
Views: 1,939
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
vikas ji dil ka dard bayan karti apki ye gazel...

vikas ji dil ka dard bayan karti apki ye gazel bahut umda hai. badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:50 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 938
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
atthaaaaaaah vendna se labalab aapki ye rachna.

atthaaaaaaah vendna se labalab aapki ye rachna.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:48 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,887
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
kunal bahut maarmik gazel.....meri maun daad is...

kunal bahut maarmik gazel.....meri maun daad is dard par.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 20th January 2010, 11:47 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,800
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
woooooooooooooooooos superb mayank

woooooooooooooooooos superb mayank
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:24 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
naresh ji sahi vivechan kiya hai aapne aur marm...

naresh ji sahi vivechan kiya hai aapne aur marm ko jana hai is gazel ka.bahut bahut shukriya sath dene aur hausla banaye rakhne ka.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:22 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
denny ji shukriya apko mera naam yaad hai..aur...

denny ji shukriya apko mera naam yaad hai..aur apko meri shayri acchhi lagi.is hausla afjahi k liye bahut bahut shukriya. sath banaye rakhiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:19 AM
Replies: 16
Views: 1,486
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
nadaan ji aapki gazel me hindi aur urdu ka umda...

nadaan ji aapki gazel me hindi aur urdu ka umda mishran dekhne ko mila..aur har sher ek se badh kar ek hai...duniya, samaj per ek katu prahaar karti ye gazel bahut khoobsurat hai. daal kabool kijiye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:16 AM
Replies: 56
Views: 7,693
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
SVS ji bahut arse baad aapko padha... vahi...

SVS ji bahut arse baad aapko padha...

vahi judayi ,vahi yade vahi tanhai hai...
aapki kalam ne unko fir se awaaz lagayi hai.

bahut khoobsurti se unka ahwaan kiya gaya hai...dua karte hai apki...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:11 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,772
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
mandeep ji bahut acchha likha aapne...aur flow...

mandeep ji bahut acchha likha aapne...aur flow bhi khoob ban pada hai...dua hai bhagwaan se ki aap ki har mano-kamna poorn ho. daad hazir hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:09 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 1,803
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
bahut dard baya karta aapka ye kalaam dil ko dard...

bahut dard baya karta aapka ye kalaam dil ko dard se bhar gaya...acchha likha hai...dil nikal kar rakh diya hai.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:07 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,646
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
suchmuch awargi ke din bahut khoobsurat hote he...

suchmuch awargi ke din bahut khoobsurat hote he isi tareh bachpan ko bhi khoobsurat kaha jata he jab koi fikr koi dillagi nahi hoti..acchhi gazel.badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:05 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 2,676
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
apki kalam ka ye rang bhi acchha hai.badhayi.

apki kalam ka ye rang bhi acchha hai.badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:04 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,430
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
shipra ji jaha aapki rachna me udasi hai vahi...

shipra ji jaha aapki rachna me udasi hai vahi milne ki utsukta bhi hai aur umeedo ka daman bhi thame hai....acchhe shabdo se sawara he aapne . badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:02 AM
Replies: 43
Views: 7,387
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
nisha ji pehli baar hi padha aapko...apka ek ek...

nisha ji pehli baar hi padha aapko...apka ek ek sher lajawab hai...bahut umda. badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 17th January 2010, 12:00 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,978
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
yasmeen ji puri ki pura rachna bahut acchhi likhi...

yasmeen ji puri ki pura rachna bahut acchhi likhi hai...badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th January 2010, 11:58 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,307
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
पढ़ाते नही हैं बच्चो को पान की दुकान खोलते हैं ...

पढ़ाते नही हैं बच्चो को पान की दुकान खोलते हैं
शाम की रोटी खानी है पेट पे हाथ रख के बोलते हैं
खिला कर बच्चो को खुद को खाली बर्तन टटोलते हैं
गुस्से मे जब घर मे खाना जूठा छोड़ के आता हूँ ,,
उदास हो...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th January 2010, 11:55 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,120
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
waaaaaaaaah aapke 2 shereo ne hi lajawaab kar...

waaaaaaaaah aapke 2 shereo ne hi lajawaab kar diya. bahut khoob.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th January 2010, 11:54 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 914
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
achhi shayri per thoda breaks theeks se de to...

achhi shayri per thoda breaks theeks se de to acchhi lagegi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 15th January 2010, 11:48 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,039
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
नये दौर की मुहोब्बत

अब शिकायतो का दौर खतम हो गया
तेरी महफिल से उठा और बेगाना हो गया

तूने पलट के भी ना देखा अपने तलबगार को
ऐसा छिटका दामन से कि दिल से भी जुदा हो गया

हश्र ऐसा होगा मुहोब्बत का तेरी महफिल में
दर्द...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2010, 12:01 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,242
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
tahe dil se shukriya sazid janaab...aate rahiyega.

tahe dil se shukriya sazid janaab...aate rahiyega.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 13th January 2010, 12:00 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,242
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
mandeep ji me ta fastclass ha.n ji...tusi...

mandeep ji me ta fastclass ha.n ji...tusi sunao...ji ik tam durust kehnde ho ji dard te tanhayi te ik duje de purak ne..tanku ji sadi gazel nu pasand karan layi.

aande rehna.

rab-rakha.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th January 2010, 11:58 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 4,292
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
wowwwwwwwwwwww aakhri 2 sher ne to romantic sama...

wowwwwwwwwwwww aakhri 2 sher ne to romantic sama baandh diya hai...ye kalam ka rang bhi lajawaab hai ji.bahut khoob.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th January 2010, 11:56 PM
Replies: 31
Views: 2,127
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
vikram ji bahut khoobsurat gazel...dil ki runaiyo...

vikram ji bahut khoobsurat gazel...dil ki runaiyo ko ubhaar kar la raha hai har ashaar.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 12th January 2010, 10:32 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 1,242
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
Naresh ji shukriya...aapne is anter-dwand ko...

Naresh ji shukriya...aapne is anter-dwand ko samjha...shukriya aapki saraahna k liye. lekin lagta hai is baar kuchh jyada pasand nahi aayi meri ye nazm logo ko. shukriya ek baar fir saath dene k liye.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th January 2010, 11:16 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 3,440
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
khawish ji apki tareef me kuchh kehna to theek...

khawish ji apki tareef me kuchh kehna to theek nahi hoga...bahut acchhi gazel likhi hai...nirasha aur apne chahne wale ki ignorance jhalakti hai gazel me..

badhayi.
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 11th January 2010, 11:05 PM
Replies: 24
Views: 1,926
Posted By UDAS PATHIK
diya ji bahut khoobsurat gazel hai...dard se...

diya ji bahut khoobsurat gazel hai...dard se labalab lekin kahin na kahin umeed chhipi hui hai...umeed banaye rakhiye...

dil se daad kabool kare.
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