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Forum: Shayri-e-Mashahoor Shayar 8th December 2012, 08:06 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 3,630
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
niceeeeeeeeee sharing keep sharinge ...

niceeeeeeeeee sharing


keep sharinge
take care
Allah Hafiz
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th December 2012, 03:03 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 703
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
ek umdaaaaa kalam par tahe dil se dad hazir he...

ek umdaaaaa kalam par tahe dil se dad hazir he qubool kijiye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 4th December 2012, 03:00 PM
Replies: 28
Views: 2,463
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Ahmad ji salam bahut khubsurat andaze bayan...

Ahmad ji salam

bahut khubsurat andaze bayan he yun to pura kalam hi behtreen laga par ye sher lajwab he


sare-raah choarh tanha, tum tou nikal paday thay,
ab poochtay ho hamsay, kaysay safar...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd December 2012, 01:07 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,449
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
bahut umda kalam likha he apne tahe dil se dad...

bahut umda kalam likha he apne
tahe dil se dad hazir he


keep writing
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd December 2012, 01:01 PM
Replies: 10
Views: 921
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai, ...

maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,
tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…


bahut umda kalam likha he apne khaskar ye sher to bahut pasand aya bahut gehra he allah apko ghamo...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd December 2012, 12:56 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 2,141
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN, ...

Jalte hue dekhaa hai bahaaroN ko khwaab meiN,
kyaa hain abhi Gulposh ke haalaat poochna..

YooN to Pataa hai Mujhko unka haaal-e-Dil Qaaasid,
Phir bhi unhii se unki ik ik baaat poochnaa.
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 3rd December 2012, 12:38 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,364
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
ye dil bhee hai teraa jaaN bhee hai teree tujhe...

ye dil bhee hai teraa jaaN bhee hai teree
tujhe in sabhee se zyaadaaH hai chaahaa

dhaval ji khubsurat jazbaat ek khubsurat andaz main pesh kiye hain


keep writing
take care
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th November 2006, 12:55 PM
Replies: 43
Views: 4,197
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Sunita ji Adab kesi hain? apki ye betreen...

Sunita ji Adab

kesi hain? apki ye betreen peshkash mujhe behad pasand ayi he apke kalam har sher apne ap main mukammal he wese to apke sare hi kalam behtreen hi hote hain magar mujhe ye kalam...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th November 2006, 12:41 PM
Replies: 32
Views: 3,563
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Ghayal ji adab bahut khoobsurat rachna he...

Ghayal ji adab

bahut khoobsurat rachna he apki padh kar bahut achha laga dad hazir he qubool farmayeN


keep writing
take care
bye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th November 2006, 12:31 PM
Replies: 35
Views: 2,594
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Smile Sunita ji Adab kya bat he apne bahut umda...

Sunita ji Adab

kya bat he apne bahut umda likha he dad psh-e khidmat he qubool farmayeN
mene apke kuch sawalon ka jawab dene ko choti se gustakhi ki he ho sake to maf kar dijiyega

Khabar thi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 16th November 2006, 11:11 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,709
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Adab Anil ji apki mehfil main aj arse bad...

Adab Anil ji

apki mehfil main aj arse bad ana hua he uske liye mafi chahti hoon magar waqat ke hathoN majboor thi apne mujhe apni har rachna per yad rakha uske liye main apki tahe dil se...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 9th October 2006, 12:00 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 2,342
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Lucky ji aur anil ji ko mera adab ap dono...

Lucky ji aur anil ji ko mera adab

ap dono kaise hain apka ye to bahut hi umda khayal he bahut achhi koshish he ap logoN ki main wada to nahi karti magar koshish zarur karungi agar moka mila to...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 27th September 2006, 02:07 PM
Replies: 400
Views: 34,533
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
"jab bhi jee chahe mujhse milna tum mere ghar aa...

"jab bhi jee chahe mujhse milna tum mere ghar aa jana
do boond aankho me bharkar meri kabar per diya jalaa jana

dilip

2nd sher

Bekarari rahati hai tere ishq me har pal,
aakar mere sapno...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th September 2006, 04:01 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,673
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi dilip ji apne bahut hi khubsurat andaz...

hi dilip ji

apne bahut hi khubsurat andaz main apne dil ke darad ko kaghaz per utara he ye hunar sabhi ko mayassar nahi hota ap iski qadar hamesha kijiyega aur likhte rahiyega main apke bare zyada...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th September 2006, 03:49 PM
Replies: 400
Views: 34,533
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
3rd share ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n...

3rd share

ab hum ja rahey hai.n yeh jaha.n chod kar,
aur woh kahte hai.n aao ab hum galey lagayegey

-sunita virender

4th

"mana ki ho zind(zindagi)meri na itne qareeb ao
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th September 2006, 03:38 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,172
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
adab wafa ji kaisi hain kafi arse bad apka...

adab wafa ji

kaisi hain kafi arse bad apka kalaam padha
mujhe hamsha apke kalam ka intezar rehta

apne bilkul durust likha he ki apko gham main maharat hasil he

Ghum mein Mahaarat hasil...
Forum: Anjuman-e-Shayri 26th September 2006, 02:38 PM
Replies: 400
Views: 34,533
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
1st sher "kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa...

1st sher

"kya ki he khata mene jo itne khafa ho tum
pas ao zara baitho ye shikwe mitayeNge"
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th September 2006, 02:12 PM
Replies: 36
Views: 3,256
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi manu kafi din bad apko padhne ka moka mila ...

hi manu
kafi din bad apko padhne ka moka mila

apki puri ghazal bahut hi shandar aur dil ko lubha lene wali he
iska her ek sher apne apmain mukammal he

bahut khoooooooooooooob
Door ho kar bhi...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th September 2006, 01:06 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 2,392
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
Hi anil ji kya bat he pur asar ashar ...

Hi anil ji

kya bat he pur asar ashar

aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye
meri har ghazal main unaka nam dekhiye
ankhon ka dukh dekh kyon dardmand hain
is rooh ko jo mil gaya aram dekhiye
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 26th September 2006, 12:15 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,723
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
adab anil ji ap kaise hain ummid karti hoon...

adab anil ji

ap kaise hain ummid karti hoon ki achhe hoNge acutually main kafi busy hone ki wajah se ab shayri.com per a nahi pati isi liye apki khubsoorat rachnaoN se mehraoom rahi laikn aj apka...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 6th July 2006, 12:16 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 1,451
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi veer ji kya bat he veer ji kamal ka likha...

hi veer ji

kya bat he veer ji kamal ka likha he apne padhkar really maza a gaya ap chinta mat kijiye abhi to apki qadar karne wale bhi kafi ho gaye hain unmain se ek hum bhi hain jo apki qadar...
Forum: Aapki Shayri 5th July 2006, 05:10 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 2,006
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi apka nam to main nahi janti apko ghayal...

hi
apka nam to main nahi janti apko ghayal shayar kehkar mukhatib karna achha nahi lagta agar koi etraz na ho to agli post main ap apn anam zarur likhyega achha lagega tab apko mukhatib karte hue
...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 05:02 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,778
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi anil ji kafi din badd itni fursat se ayi...

hi anil ji

kafi din badd itni fursat se ayi hoon ki reply kar sakun

kya baat he
chaand aaj aise kyon aya jaise akhree baar aya ho
chand chand na ho bas apana saya ho
yoon milta hai jaise...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 04:48 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 2,598
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
adab ghayal ji kya baat he apne to mehfil main...

adab ghayal ji
kya baat he apne to mehfil main jan hi dal di he really apki shuruat hi zabardast hoti he

Na main bewafa hun,na tu bawafa hai,,jo v hua,bas is dil ki khata hai,,shikwe mujhe...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 03:31 PM
Replies: 9
Views: 1,275
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
adab anil ji aaj kafi din bad is site pr ana...

adab anil ji

aaj kafi din bad is site pr ana hua apka kalam padha hamesha ki tarah lajawab shayad maine time ki kami ki wajah se apka kafi kalam miss kiya uske liye sharminda hoon lakin maine apka...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 02:32 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 2,058
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
dev ji adab apne he bahut hi khubsurat hamad...

dev ji adab
apne he bahut hi khubsurat hamad pesh ki he padh kar man ko kafi sukoon mila achha laga ye jan kar ki kuch log is tarah bhi likh sakte hain thanx for writing hamad (maine hamad lafaz...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 02:19 PM
Replies: 26
Views: 2,252
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi apka har kalam lajawab hota he maine apke...

hi
apka har kalam lajawab hota he maine apke kuch kalam hi padhe magar jo padhe usse apki qabiliyat ba khubi wazah hoti he padhkar lagta he

doob kar gam-e-saagar mein ashq bahaane se kya haasil...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 02:05 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,631
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi manu how r u bahut hi pyari si ghazal he...

hi manu
how r u
bahut hi pyari si ghazal he iske chand sher really amazing hain padhkar be had achha laga


Dard rahta hai mere dil mai sharaaron ki tarah
Nigaah ke mausam badalate hai bahaaro...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 11:48 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 1,069
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi aghaz itna achha he to age to ap kamal kar...

hi
aghaz itna achha he to age to ap kamal kar dengi agar apki ye pehli ghazal he to kafi achhi he likhte rehne se hi sudhar ata he ap likhti rehye aur khoob likhye hamari dua he ki ap ek din bahut...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 11:40 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,537
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
bahut hi khubsurat aghaz wafa nahi,hume...

bahut hi khubsurat aghaz

wafa nahi,hume thodi si bewafaai chahiye,, aapke sung chand lamhon ki tahaai chahiye,, aapki yaadon ke sahare jeete hain hum,, par zinda rehne ko hume judaai chahiye,, tu...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 5th July 2006, 11:09 AM
Replies: 14
Views: 1,758
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi kya khoob likha he zindagi main rang ab...

hi
kya khoob likha he
zindagi main rang ab safed-kaale reh gaye,
shaam-e-tanhai aur gamon ke pyale reh gaye...

very touching
aankhen jo pal pal main bheeg jaaya karti thi,
gam apno se mile...
Forum: Shayri-e-Ishq 5th July 2006, 10:56 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 5,021
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi raj jee kya baat he apne dil ka tama dard...

hi raj jee

kya baat he apne dil ka tama dard bahut hi khubsurat andaz main kaghaz par utar dala ye hunar bhi sabhi main nahi hota
lakin really apki ghazal bahut hi umda he padh kar bahut achha...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 30th June 2006, 12:21 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 1,636
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
:) hi tere qadmon ki aahat say dharkta...

:) hi


tere qadmon ki aahat say dharkta hai dil,
main jinda hoon kabhi mujhay hila kar to dekho........

bhool jaogay tum dunia bhar ki ronko ko,
kabhi mere soonay ghar main aa kar to...
Forum: Celebrations 27th June 2006, 10:32 AM
Replies: 46
Views: 5,682
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
pulkit ji hamari taraf se apke pyare bhai ke...

pulkit ji
hamari taraf se apke pyare bhai ke liye birthday ki dher sari best wishes aur dua ki wo hamesha khush rahe aur unki har tamanna unki mangse pehle puri ho (MEEN)

Gham ke saye bhi teri...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th June 2006, 10:22 AM
Replies: 1
Views: 1,026
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi diggaj ji bahut hi khub rahi hazrat aur...

hi
diggaj ji
bahut hi khub rahi hazrat aur bibi zehra ki shadi padh kar achha laga thanx for sharing

keep sharing + writnig

take care
bye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 27th June 2006, 10:10 AM
Replies: 21
Views: 2,876
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi bahut hi khushnuma rachna likhi he apne...

hi

bahut hi khushnuma rachna likhi he apne padh kar dil ko achha laga

keep writing
take care
bye
Forum: Celebrations 7th June 2006, 05:17 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 3,373
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi "w" thanx for ur wishes keep writing ...

hi
"w"
thanx for ur wishes

keep writing
take care
bye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th June 2006, 05:15 PM
Replies: 46
Views: 2,830
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi nice one hamehs ki tarah achha likha he ...

hi
nice one
hamehs ki tarah achha likha he

keep writing
take care
bye
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th June 2006, 05:04 PM
Replies: 20
Views: 3,084
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi anil ji phie ek dafa duniya ki kadwi...

hi anil ji

phie ek dafa duniya ki kadwi haqiqat ko ba khubi pesh kya he apne jan kar khushi hoti he ki kuch log abhi hain jo is tarah ke khayalat bhi rakhte hain aur dusroN ko hila hilakar unke...
Forum: Shayri-e-Dard 7th June 2006, 04:54 PM
Replies: 25
Views: 2,701
Posted By Rubeena Parveen
hi manu ji Dil maiN teri mahobbat ke vo...

hi
manu ji
Dil maiN teri mahobbat ke vo khayalaat nahiN haiN
Ashqo maiN sab bah gaye koi jazbaat nahi haiN

Rishto ki bheed mai khud se ajnabee huN is kadar
Dosto ko pahchaan saku vo nazar...
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