31st July 2009, 12:56 AM
maikash ji....kiya khub likhi hai.....aapne yeh ghazal.......mere paas taarif ke liye lafz kam pad gaye hai....zindgi ke bahut kareeb lagti hai ..... har sher ki panktiya....gehraai itni ki ...sochne ko mazboor kar de....aise hi likte rahiye.........khush rahiye.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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