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14th July 2011, 07:40 PM

Zidd bhai,

ghazal achi hai...magar zidd waali baat nahi hai...matla aur maqta..donoeN hi pasand aaye..daad..

likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..god bless u

aapka dost,
Pradhyuman

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Originally Posted by zidd View Post
chandani me tujhe jab chand ne Dhala hoga
kis tarah maine bata khudko sambhaala hoga

inteqaam aise liya zindgi se jee jee kar
kisi dushman ne meri mout ko Taala hoga

bezubaa ho gayi aaiino ki mehfil teri
kisne mehfil me mera naam uchaala hoga

qaid yu ho gaye sab aasu meri ankho me
jaise armaano pe tanhaai ka jaala hoga

mujko maikhaane ki aadat to nahi thi vaiss
mujko jannat se faristo ne nikala hoga

phool 2 leke teri kabr pe kaun aaya hai
kaun zidd aisa tera chahnewaala hoga




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musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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