22nd March 2007, 01:09 PM
Ek Baat kahein Ghayal Ji,,,
Aapko bahut achha likhte hain...
Humne ye baat kabhi kisi se nahi kahi par I think I like reading ur creations....
"mana ki ilzam tumne hum pe bewfai ka lagaya he ..per galti to us khuda ki he jisne aapke hatho me meri jagah ye zaam thamaya he .. Hum to aaye hi the aapke pas lautkar ki bus ab hum tumhare he .. Per kya kahte jab dekha hamari jagah tumne ise hotho se lagaya he"
Last edited by Ek Ehsaas; 22nd March 2007 at 01:16 PM..
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