1st August 2009, 09:11 PM
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Originally Posted by mann_chand
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bichad gaye to kahaNii ho gaii
guzre lamhoN ki zubaanii ho gaii
dil hi dil mein zakam palte gaye
zikar kiya to be-imaaNi ho gaii
ru-ba-ru hone se huaa yeh asar
mein to teri deewaNii ho gaii
masoomiyaat ke ho gaye shikaar
zindagi meN kaisii nadaaNi ho gaii
pal ki doori bhi sahi na jaaey
aisi tumse zindagaaNii ho gaii
tumhaiN chahne ki mil gaii saza
"Deep" se khataa-e-jawaaNii ho gaii
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Aapki[/i]
Mandeep
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Bahut khub likha hai aapne Mandeep ji.........sabhi sher bahut khusurat lage....har sher mai masumiyat jhalakti hai....mann se baate karte lagte hai....aapki tamam ghazal padhkar mujhe bahut acha laga aur pasand bhi khub aai.....aap aise hi likhte rahiye.....aate rahiye.....milte rahiye....khush rahiye....
aur apna khayal rakhiye....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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