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Love 6th July 2014, 08:15 AM

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Originally Posted by zainy View Post
Zarraa sahab. ... rehm huzoor. ...itne bade bade lafz denge to badi musibat hogi....nursery ke students ko 10th standards ka portion denge to bemaut mar jayenge hum....lol...
Tumhare comparison mein to hum abhi thik se born bhi nahi hue shayri ki duniya mein...meri soch kya kya samajh aaya hoga mujhe

sirf padha what to use in shayri and its meaning...aur sab explanation sar ke upar se gaya

still I am trying....

gunaah kiya kar ke ulfat 'pari' bewafaa yaar se
saza to milni hai kaise bachogi rasan-o-daar se


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