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REPLY -
16th December 2002, 07:38 PM
dear priyaji,
mene aapka najm padhi. Samaj bhi aayee. Mera manna hai shayri.com par 80% shayar aap hi ki tarah ghayal hai. Lekin ghayal hone ki bhi to limit hoti hai. Aap din me kitni baar ghayal hoti ho.....jo itttttttttttna sabh kuchh likh pati ho. THERE SHOULD B LIMIT. A-re ham jaise nacheejo ko bhi thoda chance de dije kabhi kabhi. Front page par se aapka naam jata nahi aur hamara naam aata nahi. Bahut na insafi hai re!!! Hey.....just kidding. Likhte rahiye
sanam
taqdeer ne kya kam sataya hua tha
jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye
logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main
aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye
-> SaNaM
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