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Originally Posted by dilip200
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asslam malekum dhaval miyaa.n
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w'asalaam saaheb..! 
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aaj kya baat hai dil ke jani bada dard ikTTha kare fir rahe ho...........
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arre BHaa'ii maiN kahaaN dard ko ikaTTHaa kar rahaa huuN.. yeh dard to saaloN sey meraa saath detaa aayaa hay huZuur..!
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maine kitni baar kaha hai tumhe.........
Log MuTthiyo.n main namak liye firte haiN
Yu.N apne Zakhm Har kisi ko dikhaya na karo........
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baat to sahi kii hay aapne..
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bahut sundar dard se bharii or behad apni si dil ke kareeb lagne wali gazal likhi hai aaj aapne....... har ek sher kafi apna sa lagta hai...
poori gazal main kahin mujhe kuch kami si nazar nahi aayii per is word per jara sa dhyan chala gaya..........
naa aaYeNge terii raah meiN kabhi bhi sanam ab
door chale jaaYeNge muHabbat yahiN pe Khatam kar ke
is word ki jagah agar aap koi doosra word use karte to meri raai main shayad accha lagata. hunar mand shayar ho yaar doond ke dekho urdu main koi word mil hi jayega....... haan ek ishara kar sakta hoon "DAFAN" ab apni jaroorat ka aap doond lo.............. 
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BHaa'ii saaHeb ek to aap bazm ke eid ke chaaNd hay..  yeh merii KhuShkismatii hay kii aapne mere liYe apnaa qeemtee waQt nikaalaa.. aur muHabbat ko Khatam karo ya DAFAN baat aik hi hay mere liYe to.. ab dafan karke bhee Khatam karni hay to seedhe seeDhe Khatam hi kyuuN na kar deN..:  kyuuN sahi kahaa na maiNe..??
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shuru se hi aapki shayri ka kayal raha hoon..... to aaj to fir aapne ek kamal ki umda gazzl likhi hai.......
dil se nikli huyii daad kabool farmaiyega..........
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kamaal to BHaa'ii aapne kar diYaa.. yahaaN taShreef jo laaYeN.. aapki daad to dil sey qabUl hay..
ShuKriyaaH.. ShuKriyaaH.. ShuKriyaaH..!
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aapke dil ke behad kareeb ka dost
Dilip (begana)
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waah..! dil ke qareeb to samjH aayaa par yeh begaanaa samjh nahiN aaYaa..
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Dilip Bhaa'ii:
namaskaaR..!
sach me be-Had KhuShii hu'ii aapko merii chhotii sii koShiSh pe deKh ke.. pooraane sey din yaad aa gaYe.. aapsey bas yahi kahuNgaa jo maiN aapko roz kehtaa huuN.. ki bazm ke liye bhee thoRaa waQt nikaal deejiYe.. aur jaise kii maine kahaa thaa aapki naYii aur taazaah Ghazal ka mujhe iNtezaar raheNgaa.. Ghazal ki pazeerA'ii ke liye maiN aapka be-Had mamnuun huuN.. yuuNhi saath dete raheN.. ShuKriyaaH..!
apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval