28th April 2004, 04:39 PM
Gumnam ji mujhe itni knowledge nahin hai likhne ki..but sikhna jaroor chahoongi
Well ek sher post kar rahi hoon….i knw jaroor galtiyan hongi & I hope ki aap sab usse sudhar denge issi bahane main bhi kuch sikh jaoongi..shukriya.
Ghazal ka 6th sher
Tum meri wafaaon Ka sila Kyon Nahi Dete"
Ya phir meri saanso ko ghata kyon nahin Dete"?
-Gumnam
Hai Khaak hui jal kar, hasrat e mohabbat,
Chingaariyon ko Bujhhti, hawa kyu nahi dete?
-Banno
jeene ka maqsad ab to, kuch bhi nahin baki,
marne ka bahana bhi bata kyun nahin dete?
-Manoj Kureel
Badhne laga hai dard andheroN sa jami par
Tum ummeed-e-shama koi, jala kyoN nahi dete?
-Chand
Mujhe haD se guzarne ka koi shauq nahi hai
meri haD kya hai mujhko bata kyon nahi dete.
-Talib
Rookhsat hui ja rahi hain khushiyan sabhi
Tum bachi hui aas ko bhi baha kyon nahin dete?
Main zakhm zakhm hoon phir bhi tujhe dikhayi na doon
tadap uthoon bhi toh zalim teri duhayi na doon
(NM)
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