aaj zakh main khoon ka katra nahee hai
ab jaan ko koyee khatra nahee hai
taron main rah ke samjhta hai kya kya
dhartee pe ye chand utra nahee hai
waaah... kya baat kahi hai....
badalne lageen roop abhee se lakeeren
abhee haath usne ye pakara nahee hai
tum hee nahee to kaho kya main gayun
mere geet ka koyee mukhra nahee hai
very welll said... second sher is really well expressed....
wasl ke baad yahee sochta raha main
ek pal bhee maine kyon pakara nahee hai
gira per khayalon ka yaden hain bakee
gira hai jaron se to ukhra nahee hai
nice words....
kaisa laga kya kahen tum ko chhoo ke
kabhee chand ko maine pakra nahee hai
pyar se khauf hai to jayo abhee se
abhee khel zyada bhee bigra nahee hai
uff... too good... yeh do sher bahut hi acche thhe...
tum kahan pahunchee fikr choro us ka
dil main ye masoom to utara naee hai
kya baat hai... well said again...
Hi Anil,
Kaafi dinon baad padha aapko... bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai yeh... ghazalein aap kam hi likhte hain... yeh bahut hi acchi lagi mujhe... really very well expressed.... meri daad kubool kijiyega is subdar ghazal par... likhte raha kijiiye yun hi... apna khayal bhi rakhiyega
