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Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan
“Chinaar ki sargoshiyaN” …Aapne net par isey dhoondne ki koshish kii achha laga … lekin us waqt kya aaj bhi Delhi doordarshan ki koun si aisi cheez hai jo net par milti hai…….ye private channel hi hai jinka material is tarah dastyaab ho jaaya karta hai….aapne apne swaaloN ko chhoRh mere jawaaboN se hi swaal dhooNdhne shuru kar diye ---- bahar haal aapka is sript ka labho lubhaav kuch shabdoN meiN pesh karta hooN …….. (Script Dhoondhne ki koshish kii abhi mili nahiN …itni Scripts meiN jaane kis ke saath salagn hui padii hai…. Socha tha Cript ka prelude ka portion hi mobile se photo utaar kar daal deta )
basically ye kahaaNi, jaise maine iska pahle bhi zikra kiya tha , aatankwaad par hi adhaarit hai….. Kashmir ki waadiyoN meiN basaa ek Gaanv jahaN ek parivaar jismeiN 5 log – Abbu –Ammi--- 2 Brothers-- our 1 sister …bahut hi behtareen zindagi guzar basar karte haiN……chhota beta jismeiN chhoti chhoti se baatoN se aag barsati hai…..jagdaa karna aam baat---galat baat bardasht se bahar ho jaati hai…. apni galat sangat ke chalte …aatank ka raasta apna leta hai….Chhote mota ammunition ka saamaan ya pistol jab wo ghar laata tha to ghar waale pareshan hokar poochte the ..ki ye kya hai ?......kuch bhi bahana bana kar apni baat ka sahi hone ka parmaan dena aam sii baat ho gayi thi…..bade bhaaiijaan bade hi bareeki se pooch taach karte the….chhote ko bade bhaaii ka is tarah poochna achha nahi lagta tha….. ek din chhota, achanak Ghar se gayab ho jaata hai…..Ghar waale pareshaan ho jaate haiN …..DostoN se pooch-taachh hoti hai…..kahiN koi suraag nahiN milta—4 din baad unke dostoN se pata chalta hai ki wo kisi shahr meiN kahiN noukri par lag gaya hai….lekin kaii maheene Guzar gaye kuch pata nahiN….achanak ek din kisi akhbaar meiN uski tasweer chhapti hai …… chhotu atankwaadi ne ek shahr meiN kuchh military men our civilians par ghatak hamla kiya our farar ho gaya…..logoN ne dekha our wahi logon ki shinaakht par tasweer circulate ho gayii jo akhbaar meiN ghar waaloN ne dekhi……
Ammi Abbu hairaan…unko vishwaas nahiN hua…..bade bhaaii ko pahle se hi shaq tha….woh ander se sab samajh raha tha…..Ghar meiN mahoul is tarah ho gaya ke kaato to khoon nahiN …..badaa bhaaii khufiaa agencies se milkar aatanki ke role meiN shaamil ho gaya….sirf apne bhaaii ko is gart se nikalne ke waste…..chhota aatank ke raaste kaafi aage nikal chuka tha….unke changul se nikalna koi aasaan baat nahiN thi…..ab ek banawati cid ki force ke saath milkar unheH ye gyaat hota hai ke aaj Chhotu sargana ek bahut bade military ke qaafile par hamla karne wala …….. lekin jis par Chhotu sargana hamla karne wala hota hai …us par unke hamle se pahle hi hamla ho jata hai ….Chhotu pareshaan ho jaata hai ki unke hamla karne se pahle hi kaise hamla ho gaya……us hamle meiN Chhoti sargana apne bade ko hath gola phenkte hue dekh leta hai……hairaan ho jataa hai…ki badaa bhaaii bhi……Dono milte haiN ………..badaa Bhaii show karta hai…..wo atank ke doosre group meiN hai…….woh jhooth batata hai ke unki bahin atankiyoN ke changul meiN ja phansi hai…….chhotu ne poocha koun haiN wo…….usne jo naam bataya…..unheN chhotu jaanta tha….Aag dil se demaag tak pahooNch gayii……..kisi tarah bhaayii ko lekar…..sister ko bachaane ke bahaane wahaaN se nikalta hai……..isi tarah apna Jaal bichha kar …..Chhapaa dalwaa diya jaata hai…….gamasaan ladayii our barood ke beech donoN ko pakad kar , sarkaari dasta inhen le jaata hai…..wahaaN jaakar chhotu ko pata chalta hai…ki bade bhaayii ataanki nahiN thaa…….usey bade bhaayii se hate ho jaati hai……Chhotu ka giroh chhotu ko khatam karne ke firaaq me rehta hai….. koii secret na ugal de…...Lekin bade bhaayii ne apne sarkaar ke khufia Giroh se milkar jis jail meiN tha wahaN ek farzi hamla karwa kar…..Chhotu ko laapta karwa deta hai……Atanki samajhte rahe, Chhotu hamle meiN halaak ho gaya hai…..is tarah chhotu ki nishan dehi our sarkaari gawaah ban per unke Giroh ka dheere dheere safaya kiya gaya……Kuch arsa saza kaat kar aakhir chhotu Ghar waapsi kar sakaa……Kashmir chhoRh ye chhoti si family kahiN door chinaar ki sargoshiyoN meiN nikal gayii.
MaiN ye saari scripts ek ek kar apne blog par dalne ki koshish karuNga ….. ye waali script bhi poori in original jab kisi ke saath judi mili , toh milte hi wahaaN daal doonga…..ek do kahaaniyaaN already daal chukka huN wahaaN…..kisi ko agar kahaniyaN padne ka shouq hai to mujh se link lekar wahaaN pad sakte haiN…….
Regards
sabhaar !!!
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