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21st June 2006, 01:40 PM
Pyaare Manoj bhaii,

haarne ke liye kuch tha nahin,jeetne ko dunia hai
kya le jayegi jindagi "kureel" ham jaise fakeer se

YuuN to purri ghazal achchhi hai lekin is sher ne to sach meN dil meN talwaar hee fer di hai... Jitnii bhi taarif kee jaaye kam hi hoga... Behatriin khayaal aur andaaz e bayaan bhi utna la-jawaab hai.. sahii gatjodh hai.. Mere jaaniib dher saare daad ke saath mubaarak baad kubuul keejiye...

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