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Originally Posted by lanefisher
zara kar jor seene par ki teer-e-pursitam nikle
jo wo nikle to dil nikle, jo dil nikle to dam nikle
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lanefisher,
bahot hi khub sher pesh kiya hai...
aapse darkhwast hai ki jab bhii koii sher pesh kareN, agar wo aapka nahi hai toh shaayar ka naam saath meN likh diya kijiye.. aur agar shaayar ka naam pataa nahi hai toh NM ya Not Mine mention kar lijiye
Vaise yeh sher Ghalib saab kii ghazal, hazaaroN khwaaiysheN aisee se hai.. bahot hi aalaa sher pesh kiya hai aapne...
shikriya...