khaali haath kiya bapis maine jise darwaje se
aur nahi koe woH Khuda ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai
only for tecnically minded people.
i think...
pahla misra is tarah wazn me ayega , usme jhol lag raha hai
' khali haa
t kiya hai wapas mai
ne jise darwaaze se'
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waise matle par discussion theek nahi ab...chapter close ho gaya . magar mere dil ki khatak nahi gayi.
kya aap asia sa kuch kah rahe hai?
vo sach much hi bhool gaya ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai
ya yu hi mai ( vo) soch raha
hu aisa bhi ho sakta hai?
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khair , but we are on second sher now. pahle tecnical baat khatm kar lete hai...phir sher dekhte hai.( mere naariye se...masood sahab aur aslam sahab ka nazariya to saamne hai hi)
regards