25th October 2009, 05:21 PM
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Dii Aadaab..............
Aapki yeh gazal to behad tanziya lagi, kahiN hum logoN ko to aapne nishana nahi banaya.............. Bahut achche sher hai aur haqeekhat ke behad kareeb...... Aapki nazar ki daad deta hun kabool kijiye...
Likhati rahiye....
yeh sher behad achche lage.....
Labo.N pe muskaan sajaaye firta hai har koii yahan
Sajaate hai mahefileN aur ruho.N mein viraane hai
Dilo.N se khelane ka haasil hai kya khoob hunar
Lunt kar jahan kisika, kahete khudko deewaane hai
Chhod dete hai jahan per Maut bhi bahetar lage
Khured ke rakhte hai yeh zakhm jitney puraane hai
Khush rahiye....
Apna kahayal rakhiye...
Aapka Bhai..
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Sameer
Mere bhai.. tumheN nishaana banakar kahaN jayungi...
waise yeh ghazal kisi ko bhi nishana banakar nahi likhi.... bas kuch dil ne kaha aur maiNe likha.....
tumheN koshish pasand aayi yeh jankar accha laga.
Ummid karti hoon aage bhi tumhara saath milta rahega
tumhari dii
~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~
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