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10th May 2007, 04:05 PM
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Originally Posted by sunita virender
Sandy ji aapne sher bahut khoob kaha hai, par shayad aapne rules nahi padey...aapko sher ke last lafaz se sher kahna hai...jaise ki aapke sher ka last word hai "Liye" to hindi ka lafaz hua "A" to mujhe "A" se sher lahna hoga....shukriya
aaj to besabab ushad hai dil,
ishq hota to koi baat bhi thi...
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are didi aap confuse ho gayi hain aur bechare sandy ji ko bhi confuse kar rahin hain.....yaha last akshar se dusra sher start nahin karna hain...woh to dusre thread"baitbaazi "main karna hain..yaha to sher ke jawab mein sher hi likhna hain.........jo pehle sher se match karta ho......
mausam
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
Last edited by mausam; 10th May 2007 at 04:11 PM..
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