Namaskar Ruhani ji
Sabse pehle aapki entry dekhey...achi laga aapko padhkar...ruhani aaj maine dekha aap bahut udas ho...mughey accha nahin laga...cheer up ruhani...i believe sometimes it is difficult to write poetry on the topic given by other person bcoz I believe poetry ke liye imaginations topic yeh sab depending on Zindagi likha jata hay..aur dil thoda karney baat nahin hay u have lots of sweet friends dekhna one day ur poetry will be the sweetest one.
Sada kush raho
Namaskar Garima
Tumhari poetry bahut achi lagi...ma kitna pyare rishtey ko kitni khoobsurti se kavita mein dhala hay...bahut acha laga tumhe padhkar........beautiful
Tere anchal me hai sansaar mera
Juda hai naata tera mera
Duniya ki har khushi kar doo nyuchhawar tujhpar
Fir bhi na jaa paao tere ehsaaso se upar
Hote hai agar bhagwaan to wo hai yehi par
Fir kaise na kahe ‘garima’ ki tujhpar na mare to kya jiye
This line I liked the best.
Sada kush raho
Namaskar Nidhi Ji
Nice one...par dil ko nahi chuu payi aapki rachna.Good effort.
Sada kush raho
Namaskar Aman ji
Aapka ek aur nayab qalam......it is a touching one...Karan ji se main sehmat nahi huun ki it lacks feelings...Dil ko chuu gayi yeh rachna the line on Zakmon ko speaks how much touching this poetry is...Hamare daad kabul kijega.
ishq mein na hue fanaah, to kya jiye hum.....
tujhpe ae yaar na mare, to kya jiye hum.....
bade naazon se kharochta hai zakmon ko.....
tere haathon se jo na siye, to kya liye hum.....
lutf-e-judaai ka bhi alag mazaa hai ^AMAN^.....
ta-umr jo saath rahe, to kya jiye hum.....
Beautiful poetry.
Sada kush raho
Namaskar Simran ji
Good effort...
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Namaskar komal
Very beautiful poem.........bahut acha laga tumhey padhkar shayad pehle baar tumhara likha maine padha hay.......u write so beautifully........very sweet poem...mere daad kabul karna...
This line I liked the best........hamare daad kabul karna
ab toh jina aur marna ek jaisa hai
tujhse shikva nahi, khudse gila sa hai
na tu galat hai, na bewafa 'komal' hai
zindagi vafa na kare toh kya jiye
Tujhpe na mare to kya jiye
Sada kush raho
Namaskar jubin bhai
Accha likha hay........good style of writing this line I liked the best
jivan ka addhaar to tumhara saath tha
vo nahi raha to ab kya jiye
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Namaskar Salim ji
Aaj shayad pehle bar aapka likha padha hay...4 lines hi sahi par bahut achi koshish hay...Zindagi mein koshish hi jyada mayne rahkti hay...bahut achi lagi aapki yeh koshish....aap hamare poetry par hamesha daad detey hain aaj aapka likha padha bahut acha laga...first 2 lines are very nice
Is dil mein jalte hai tere naam ke diye
Har saans aati hai bas tera hi naam liye
Beautiful.....I hope in future we will see you writing more ....keep writing
Sada kush raho
Hello My Sweet little brother Kunal
Beautiful entry my brother........Hamesha ki taranh bahut acha laga tumhara qalam........quote ki hui yeh lines bahut achi lagi.........
har kadam pe jamana khada dushman ban sara…
yuN gar duniya se hare, karam To kya kiye hum…
tujhe dil maiN rakhne ki kya keemat chukai hai…
dikha deN jo jhkham sare, khak To kya siye hum…
Beautiful........Di ki daad kabul karna.......I want to clap for you for such a beautiful poetry....I am very happy to see ur this Rachna.........Di ki daad kabul karna.
Sada kush Raho
Namaskar Rohin ji
Sabse pehle thanks ki aapne hamara likha padha aur reply kiya and thanks 4 saying my entry was a beautiful entry...Aap bhi hamare daad kabul kijeyega..aapne ek naye andaz mein poetry ko present kiya hay good style jo bahut kum dekhne ko milta hay...hamare daad kabul kijega.
Sada kush rahein